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10-03-2009, 09:45 PM
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#1 | | Fanfic/Funnies Reviewer Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 860 Location: Garry's Mod Collection Count: 1, Devestaytah Kitteh | The Official Transformers Fanfic Review! (TOTFR)
I've since retired from the lofty position of fanfic writer and now I'm the proud owner of TOTFR!
Alright, first review:
Name: Transformers 4: Legends of Cybertron
Creator: Hiraga
Started: September 27th, 2009
Preceded by: Transformers 3: Doomsday
Analysis: This fanfic is set in the G1/Movie (modern) continuity as proved by the Dinobots or Die-Bots, as they are referred to in the story. The plot was easily described in Chapter 1 Part 3 when Optimus Prime and Ultra Magnus discuss the plan to revive the Die-Bots. The chapters are divided into 3 parts. Each part correlates to the others in a numerical order. No mention of a Decepticon yet (unless you count Unicron as one).
Pros: good plot; awesome variety of characters; Mikaela; Wheelie crashing; evil Dinobots
Cons: Wheelie being mentioned at all; vague spelling errors; did I say Wheelie?; Ultra Magnus stealing Optimus' vehicle mode... again.
RATING: 8.0/10.0
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10-03-2009, 09:55 PM
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#2 | | Fanfic/Funnies Reviewer Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 860 Location: Garry's Mod Collection Count: 1, Devestaytah Kitteh | Way I do Stuff
Here's how I rave and review:
0.0/10.0: The number on the left is my rating of the fanfic. The number on the right is the maximum number, it being 10.0.
1.0= Quote: |
Originally Posted by Dr. Haxx HACKS!!!! | 2.0= Meh, needs LOTS of improvement.
3.0= Still could do a lot better.
4.0= Still needs a little bit of spellchecking.
5.0= Fair in many ways.
6.0= Showing a little bit of talent.
7.0= The normal rating i.e. good
8.0= A fanfic with this rating should be read.
9.0= Just short of fanfic nirvana. Can't be missed
10.0= You probably got laid a short time afterward.
and rarely...
11.0= YOU... ARE... GOD!!! | |
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10-03-2009, 10:14 PM
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#3 | | Parmesan Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 1,633 Location: Rapid City, SD Collection Count: A lot News Credits: 1 | Thanks a whole lot for rating Legends of Cybertron!
Keep on going, I like this. Quote: |
You're assuming Bay can read. Even if he could, he'd probably try and respond by scribbling in crayon on his computer screen.
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10-03-2009, 10:21 PM
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#4 | | Fanfic/Funnies Reviewer Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 860 Location: Garry's Mod Collection Count: 1, Devestaytah Kitteh | I'd rate Doomsday but I don't think the fans would wanna wait 2 years for me to read that. You're weclome though.
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10-03-2009, 10:32 PM
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#5 | | Fanfic/Funnies Reviewer Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 860 Location: Garry's Mod Collection Count: 1, Devestaytah Kitteh | You know what would be cool? If this was a sticky thread. That way, if an interesting fanfic popped up, I wouldn't have to dig this up.
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10-04-2009, 08:35 AM
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#6 | | Autobot Clean-Up Crew Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 1,084 Location: Central New Jersey Collection Count: 16 ...wrapping up the ROTF Deluxes | I'msorry but I don't think it is fair to rate and review a fanfic that isnt finished. Hiraga is a pwnage writer just give it time to prove that.
Oh and I STRONGLY suggest reading Doomsday. Once you start you wont want to stop! It definitely deserves a 10, maybe 11 rating  | |
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10-04-2009, 09:46 AM
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#7 | | Fanfic/Funnies Reviewer Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 860 Location: Garry's Mod Collection Count: 1, Devestaytah Kitteh | Hey, it was my first review and I wanted something short. BTW, I AM reading Doomsday. The Official Transformers Fanfic Review! | |
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10-04-2009, 11:21 AM
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#8 | | Tween King and OS' Rival Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 3,012 Location: Walker,La Collection Count: A army of Robot Heroes! News Credits: 1 | Can you Reveiw Transformers/BEN 10? 
Quote: | GWEN TENNYSON:PART HUMAN,PART ALIEN, BUT ALL BLACKARACHNIA. | | |
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10-04-2009, 12:07 PM
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#9 | | Liquid Fire Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 437 Location: Belgium | THis is actually interesting, certainly with all the new fan fics that are popping up, this might be a good thread to check before reading a story. Keep up the work Cybertron 2006 (can't wait untill you review mine  )
And please mods, make this a sticky 
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10-04-2009, 01:29 PM
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#10 | | Barricade's #1 Fan Girl Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 8,590 Location: Michigan Collection Count: 154 TFs, 1 Go-Bot, 10 Shinkis, 2 Bionicles | I agree, this should be stickied.
Nice review. It's nice to have review threads for fanfics so that way I can be persuaded to read them more.  Thanks SmokescreenGT for making this sig! The TC and Wildfrost Story Latest Acquisitions: ROTF Jolt, ROTF Stalker Scorponok, Bionicles Stronius, Bionicles Skrall | |
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