The Official Transformers Fanfic Review! (TOTFR)

Attacker_Prime · 10-04-2009, 02:15 PM

Awesome reviews!

Can you review my fan fic, "The Fallen's true Revenge"?

Autobot_Wall-E · 10-04-2009, 07:17 PM

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Originally Posted by cybertron2006

Hey, it was my first review and I wanted something short. BTW, I AM reading Doomsday.

Alright, at least you're reading it and not blowing it off because it's long.

This is a very good idea, I don't doubt that. Requesting sticky, mods

cybertron2006 · 10-05-2009, 08:56 AM

Thanks for all the positive comments! Review coming tomorrow!

cybertron2006 · 10-06-2009, 08:55 AM

Actually, the Internet's not working at my house. If I can't fix it (and you'll know by my nonexistant posts that usually "plague" the boards), expect the review to be done tomorrow during extended homeroom.

To Be Reviewed: Arrival

Unicron the Pla · 10-06-2009, 09:13 AM

Good idea making a review thread , defiantly should be made into a sticky. Your review of Transformers 4: Legends of Cybertron was good, I went and read the story base on your recommendation, if you have time please review my Fanfic Darkness Has a Face. If not its cool.

cybertron2006 · 10-06-2009, 05:58 PM

I'll review Darkness Has A Face tomorrow during EH and Arrival today!

cybertron2006 · 10-06-2009, 07:34 PM

ummm... I have to cancel today's review... my Mom's being a bitch all because I said Elton John was gay. Sorry.

Good chance of Darkness Has A Face getting a review tomorrow!

cybertron2006 · 10-07-2009, 10:37 AM

I don't know what to say, but I can't review Darkness Has A Face. It's just too... spelfuky.

I can rate it however! 4.0/10.0

Sorry for the REALLY short review. Next up is The Adventures of the Bacontronian/Dewbot Alliance (boy, will THIS be fun!)

Also, any guest reviewers are welcome.

cybertron2006 · 10-07-2009, 10:53 AM

Alright, here's the review of The Adventures of the Bacontronian/Dewbot Alliance!

Name: waddaya think? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Creator: deltaprime
Created: September 11th, 2009
Preceded by: none

Analysis: Okay, this seems to be a TFW2005 fanfic; the meaning being that there are actual board members in the story itself. Such lucky people are: Crazymadman, Robticon, Sage, Autobot Girl, and of course, deltaprime. To me, this sounds like a great idea. Hell, I think I had an idea like this for Voltage but I scrapped it, going for tradition. Still, using boardmembers as characters is a great idea. But back to the plot: All of the characters are human, and they're having a party. Autobot Girl sneaks out with the spark of TFA Starscream (wtf?!) and implants it within a VOLTHOG (a.k.a. a Halo Warthog). The 'HOG transforms and threatens his resurrector. However, CMM tries to throw a slice of pie (of all things?!) at Screamo but Autobot Girl stops him. That's about how far I've read but I can still get a decent review and rating.

Pros: pie, Starscream, boardmembers as characters, bacon

Cons: me not having bacon or pie.

RATING: 9.0/10.0

Congratulations deltaprime!

Thunderchild · 10-07-2009, 11:13 AM

That review doesnt make me want to read 'The Adventures of what-cha-call-it...' AT ALL, but... the rating of 9.0 kinda makes me want to try it out. My head hurts.