The Official Transformers Fanfic Review! (TOTFR)

cybertron2006 · 11-04-2009, 01:08 PM

I will, Hiraga. Besides, I've gotta contribute so it doesn't look like Unicron's doing all of the work.

Re-Review coming SOON!!!

Attacker_Prime · 11-07-2009, 02:52 PM

Could anyone re-review my fan fic too, since it is finished? Thanks!

Unicron the Pla · 11-09-2009, 07:18 PM

GOODNESS GRACIOUS!! I am so sorry I have neglected your requests, please next time PM me you have a higher chance to motivate me of my lazy but and start writing. I will get to the re reviews ASAP. And boss man dont worry it is not like I have

. Your still in charge.

cybertron2006 · 11-10-2009, 11:51 AM

Alright now. I've had an eternal headache since I got my account back on Allspark. What with Ave Destron and Apostrophe up my ass.

Re-Review coming today!

cybertron2006 · 11-10-2009, 01:09 PM

RE-REVIEW

Name:Transformers 4: Legends of Cybertron
Creator:Hiraga
Created:... I forgot.

Analysis:Since my first review, a lot of stuff has happened. Optimus has been kidnapped, Scourge and Cyclonus have arrived, the Fallen's back, and Unicron eats Pluto. The story has significantly improved since I last read it. The plot is basically a splicing of the original TF movie and ROTF, with a little bit of Dreamwave mixed in.

Pros:Ultra Magnus, DINO BOTS!!!, Waspinator, the return of The Fallen.

Cons:I haven't seen the TFW cameo yet..., Prime gets exiled, Soundwave being a ****.

Old Rating:8.0/10.0

New Rating:10.0/10.0

CONGRATULATIONS! You sir, are in the Hall of Fame!

BTW, can Cyberblast Prime get a cameo if Optimus dies?

Rogzilla · 11-10-2009, 01:53 PM

I would love some feedback on my TF3: Until All are One. I am, at the moment, more concerned about if the story is interesting and if it would translate into a good movie. I am sure I have typos and bad grammer but I want to know if the story is good, or at least a good start. I am trying to get out of this weird writers block I have.

Danke!

Unicron the Pla · 11-12-2009, 09:35 AM

Hey guys Unicron the Pla here with a re review( Is That even a real word) So yeah today I will re review Transformers 3

Name: Transformers 3 ( Rewrite)
Creator: Stiles
Date Started: 10-28-2009
Original Review: This is a good, story better than the original one wich I only read a small part of it. The story takes place right after Transformers 2 ROTF. It has new human characters and The inclusion of new Transformer characters into the movieverse. Not many stories could pull of Unicron but this story dose. Great work

New Review: The story continues I am not sure if when I review it had the character of Nova or not, (to be fair I read to many ff to remember every detail) but he concludes the story very well destroying Unicron, who in my opinion did an excellent job depicting him.

Old Rating: 7.2

New Rating: 7.6

Pros: Unicron, Shockwave, new human characters.

Cons: The problem is that it is a movieverse story and there is so many of them, this one doesn't do anything to stand out among that huge crowed.

Final Thoughts: Read it if you like Movie stories or you want something intresting that is also short.

Stiles · 11-13-2009, 10:48 PM

Could you review TF 4: Invasion, please.

Shadow25 · 11-16-2009, 10:41 PM

Hey, I'd like to put in a request for a review on Transformers III: Endgame, please. It's not even halfway done so please wait until the next major action scene (you'll know when that is) before you do, and even then you might have to re-review it when it's done.

Thanks!

cybertron2006 · 11-20-2009, 07:20 PM

2 Reviews in 1 weekend!

First up I shall review TF 4: Invasion later tonight!

And on Saturday, I shall review Transformers III: ENDGAME!

And for now: one guy hijacking this thread!!!

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