The Fallen's true Revenge

The bad guys need some wins, there and there. The ballance.

Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on!

I liked BB's death, but I thought Sam's felt a little forced. I don't think it really served a purpose, if he lived it would have made BB's death more weighty as he would have to live with the loss. But other han that, great work. I hope they re-review your fic as it should get a much higher score!

I waited to read everything at once, good story!!
I really liked that you added Magnus & Wheeljack to the Autobot mix, and that you made Ratchet more of a hero, he really is.
Wish you could have added Prowl, really would like to see Prowl in TF3!!
Liked that Jolt and Sideswipe were working as a team
As for the Con side, really glad you had all the bad guys in there helping the Fallen, giving Soundwave, Shockwave and Starscream more to do. Also liked how Barricade found his way back to take revenge on Bee, although like others sad to see Bee die, Jolt and Wheeljack too.
As for Megs taking out the Fallen in the end helping Optimus, reminds me of another series where Megs actually does a good deed at the end.

All in all, a pretty good fan fic-- liked your version better than the movie in many ways. Enjoyed this very much...Keep writing!!

Thank you guys! Please, check out my new fan fic, "The Wrath of Nemesis Prime", it doesn't follow the events of this one but I'm planning on adding way more depth in that. As for the deaths, yes there'll be some in "The Wrath of Nemesis Prime" aswell, if the deaths saddened you it seems I've done a good job with them! Also, prepare to see some fan-favorite characters there aswell, and I'm planning on giving you a huge surprise... if you have much knowledge of Nemesis Prime from the TF lore, you'll understand what it is

Anyway, thanks for your support, it really means a lot!

Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on!