Transformers 4: Legends of Cybertron |
09-29-2009, 04:19 AM
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#11 | | Optimus Prime forever Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 651 Location: Planet Cybertron, of course. Collection Count: Many. Didn't count until now. | That was great!  Can't wait to read more  Quote: |
Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on! | Please check out my fan fic, Transformers 3: The Darkest Hour!
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09-29-2009, 04:49 AM
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#12 | | Constructicon Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 34 Location: Underground Collection Count: I wish i still had my young years | What the hel you doing, MORE MORE MORE!!! lol |
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09-29-2009, 11:10 PM
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#13 | | Parmesan Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 1,622 Location: Rapid City, SD Collection Count: A lot News Credits: 1 | Short final part for the chapter. I just got tired after studying. CHAPTER 1 PART 3 *As Optimus led his entire team throug the Antarctic desert of ice (With Jetfire and Jolt deciding to stay at the Ark.) he couldn't help but wonder something. He talked to Ultra Magnus through his vehicle mode.*
Optimus: Perhaps we should have come more prepared for this?
Ultra Magnus: What? You don't call leading a squadron of eighteen Autobots prepared?
Optimus: You know what I mean.
Ultra Magnus: Relax, the Die Bots were lost before the great war even started.
Optimus: Ultra Magnus, you KNOW what I mean.
Ultra Magnus: Who cares how savage they were? That was back when weapons weren't something even thought of for our race. It's no suprise they were able to loot us and destroy our towns so easily. How could we fight back?
Rodimus: But that's just it Ultra Magnus, they were the reason we created our weapons!
Ultra Magnus: Yeah well, after being offline for so long they're probably to dumb to remember that they were criminals. I doubt they even remember they're names.
Jazz: One of they're names even became a curse word.
Sideswipe: What? SLAG? Pft. Hardly a curse word.
Kup: Back in my day, we were creative! We made up our own curse words rather then just take some thieves name!
Optimus: The point is, if we can reach them and they don't remember anything, we can get them on our side.
Sam: And if we can't?
Optimus: Then Bumblebee takes you back to the Ark right away.
Bumblebee: RIGHT away.
Blaster: Look, is that it? *The Autobots looked ahead and stopped at a huge glacier in the ice. They all transformed, except for Bumblebee.*
Optimus: Ironhide, Blaster, Prowl, Twins, pull out your weapons. We've found it. Quote: |
You're assuming Bay can read. Even if he could, he'd probably try and respond by scribbling in crayon on his computer screen.
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09-30-2009, 02:44 AM
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#14 | | Optimus Prime forever Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 651 Location: Planet Cybertron, of course. Collection Count: Many. Didn't count until now. | Sounds awesome so far... can't wait to see what happens!   Quote: |
Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on! | Please check out my fan fic, Transformers 3: The Darkest Hour!
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09-30-2009, 01:02 PM
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#15 | | Avatar. Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 1,970 Location: UK Collection Count: 33! News Credits: 3 | Die-bots?oh boy i think i know what is coming next... |
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10-01-2009, 10:19 PM
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#17 | | Parmesan Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 1,622 Location: Rapid City, SD Collection Count: A lot News Credits: 1 | CHAPTER 2 PART 1 *Right away the Autobots went to digging through the ice. Prowl, Jazz, Kup, and Ratchet watched over the work went first, each pulling out their respective weapon and firing. The blasts melted and crubled through layers of ice. Optimus, Ultra Magnus, and Ironhide were next, each transforming into their alternate modes. They all drove at high speeds and crashed into the ice. While it didn't crumble, many layers of ice were severley weakened.*
Rodimus: My turn. *Rodimus took out his energon bow and arrow. He aimed, but was then pushed out of the way by Blaster. Blaster aimed his sound cannon.*
Blaster: Let me get it.
Rodimus: No, I think I've got this.
Blaster: You have a bow and arrow. How is that going to work any better then a blast of sound energy?
Rodimus: Oh sure, simply making the others cover their ears is pretty intimidating. But when you know how to use a bow and arrow, it's no problem.
Blaster: Then give it to me. *Both Blaster and Rodimus glared at each other. Wheeljack pushed both of them out of the way.*
Wheljack: Kids, please. Let a profesional take care of this. *Wheeljack pulled out a weapon which looked similar to a hair dryer. He fired a blast of heat energy, which melted through hundreds of feet of ice.*
Wheeljack: You two are gonna have to learn to get along.
Blaster: Pft. Whateva. Don't need to compete with this punk anyway. *After almost an hour of searching and digging through the glacier, it all came to a halt when Mudflap called the Autobots.*
Mudflap: You guys! I think I found something!
Optimus: What is it?
Mudflap: Look! Way in there...I think I can see something.
Chromia: By Primus himself... *By normal human eyes, it would seem like nothing. But through the advanced optics of the Autobots, deep in the ice three vague shapes were visible. They were huge. Each one had to be four or five feet taller then Optimus Prime.*
Ultra Magnus: They are here...
Kup: Yup, they look as big as I remember them to be.
Optimus: We have to get to digging now! *Wheeljack aimed his weapon and fired. It melted through all the layers of ice. Until it reached the bodies of the Die Bots. Each one fell to the ground hard. They were even more massive up close.*
Wheeljack: Who needs digging? Quote: |
You're assuming Bay can read. Even if he could, he'd probably try and respond by scribbling in crayon on his computer screen.
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10-02-2009, 03:17 AM
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#18 | | Optimus Prime forever Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 651 Location: Planet Cybertron, of course. Collection Count: Many. Didn't count until now. |  Awesome!  Quote: |
Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on! | Please check out my fan fic, Transformers 3: The Darkest Hour!
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10-02-2009, 04:18 AM
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#19 | | Autobot Clean-Up Crew Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 1,078 Location: Central New Jersey Collection Count: 16 ...wrapping up the ROTF Deluxes | Yup. I'm pretty sure that this is leading into Dinobots (Die-Bots=DieNO bots??) What an interesting way of introducing them and cool background you're aiming at. Vengeance of Bumblebee Transformers Comic | 2010 Transformers Cartoon Fan Fiction |
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10-02-2009, 11:42 PM
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#20 | | Parmesan Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 1,622 Location: Rapid City, SD Collection Count: A lot News Credits: 1 | CHAPTER 2 PART 2 *The three Die bots were huge. The tallest one had a completely black armored head, with a black face plate. Another was as tall as Prime, with the other being Ironhide's size. Ratchet walked over and quickly shined a red light from his finger over each one of them.*
Ratchet: Remarkable. They're not dead! Close to death though.
Jolt: Should we get to work now?
Optimus: Re-activating them should be a simple task right Ratchet?
Ratchet: I'm afraid not Optimus. In fact, I'm certain that-
Ultra Magnus: They're criminals! Why should we help them at all? Why should we just kill the whole lot of them!
Optimus: Ultra Magnus, I'm suprised at you. If there is any hope for them, we must do our best to help them.
Ratchet: We'll start with Slag first.
Optimus: Do whatever you need to do. Bumblebee, take Sam and the others out of here and back to the Ark. We could be out here for a while. *Bumblebee drove away. Ratchet got to work, with Hound helping him.*
Hound: I'm not exactly a medic. I don't even think I could make nurse-bot. But I'm good with my hands.
Ratchet: Do what you know how to do. *While Ratchet was tinkering around, he was stumped.*
Hound: What's wrong?
Ratchet: It's strange. Ultra Magnus was right, these three probably are to dumb to remember they're names! Years of being frozen can take it's take it's toll on a bot. And it appears it took these bots intelligence. They probably aren't any smarter then a human caveman!
Hound: So what does that mean?
Ratchet: Well, if they are willing to believe whatever we have to say, it's good. If they're still destructive, it's bad. *Ratchet, while pressing around for a button to release the cortex, accidentley pressed a button on the side of the head on Slag. Something blue appeared on Slag's chest all of a sudden. It almost looked like a spark, but it wasn't. The Autobots would never find out what it was exactly, but the blue ball of energy grew bigger. It kept growing and growing.*
Optimus: Ratchet, what is that?
Ratchet: I....I don't know!
Wheeljack: It's getting bigger!
Prowl: I think we should all just back up. *It was to late. The energy grew to the size of a motorcycle before it exploded. The blast of blue energy sent the Autobots flying into differant directions. Optimus fell deep into a snow drift. Blue enrgy and steam was everywhere, but Optimus still managed to see. He pushed himself out of the snow drift, only to be promptly kicked back in. He looked up, and was shocked to see the three Die Bots now stood before him. They're armor was a shiny silver and gold, and the one that looked like it was wearing a mask glared at Prime with shiny blue optics. Optimus now recognized this as Grimlock, the gang leader. Grimlock's hands suddenly transformed into sharp and powerful claws.*
Grimlock: Die Bots awake...Die Bots, threatened...Die Bots....DESTROY!!!! Quote: |
You're assuming Bay can read. Even if he could, he'd probably try and respond by scribbling in crayon on his computer screen.
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