transformers 3 unicron riseing

Transformers 3 unicron rising
Part 1

Cybertron year 3005 the First Great War was won by the autobots but at the great cost of their leader Optimus prime. The new leader of the autobots is Nova Prime last Descendent of the primes as the cosmic terror Unicron approaches Nova uses the space bridge go travel back in time to stop all this from happening.

Present day earth: it has been four years since the destruction of the all spark and Megatron has sent many of his soldiers but even soundwave was killed by the autobots. And now many new autobots have joined the battle on earth. So far there have been 23 Decpticon attacks in the past 2 years. As optimus prime and his crew leaves the battle field a warp gate appears and Nova Prime appears

Optimus: Who are you? Where did you come from?

Nova: I am Nova prime and I come from the future.

Optimus: The Future?

Nova prime goes in stasis lock.

Optimus: Ratchet!

Ratchet: I’m on it prime

I wouldn't have killed off soundwave, thats just my opinion but everything else is fine.

Transformers: unicron riseing
Part 2

Unicron: Galvatron i want you to go back to the past and destroy the matrix and optimus prime!

Galvatron: Yes my leige and i shall take my troops

A warp gate appears and galvatron and his troops crossed
through and they were on earth so they scaned some forms to blend in

Meanwhile an assault van pulled over in front of galvatron and transformed to soundblaster

Soundblaster: Who are you?

Galvatron: I am Galvatron

Soundblaster: are you autobot or decpticons?

Galvatron: we are Decpticons and we come to destroy the matrix

Soundblaster: the Matrix is with Optimus Prime

Galvatron: where is he?

scene shifts to N.E.S.T. base

Nova wakes up

Optimus: so your awake

Nova: Galvatron is here and he brought his troops

Optimus: anything we can do to help

Nova: No I must protect you

Nova: you are the second last Prime

Optimus: Second last?

Nova: yes I am the last Prime

Transformers: unicron riseing
Part 3

a loud blast outside

scene shifts outside of N.E.S.T. base

Galvatron: Where is the matrix!!!!

Nova: if you want the matrix your going to have to get through me

Ironhide: all of us

all autobots outside

Galvatron: okay

Megatron and the decpticons land on the base

Megatron: DECPTICONS ATTACK!!!!!!!!

Optimus comes out

Optimus: this is my fight

Optimus: ironhide i want you to take the matrix

Ironhide: prime you wont be fighting alone

Thunder strikes from above

Unicron: enough!

black lightning strkes nova prime and a dark figure appears

Unicron: nova prime, optimus prime, meet NEMESIS PRIME !!!!

the dark figure forms into a black nova prime

Nemesis: Nemesis prime DESTROY!!!!!!!

awesome

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i rally like the story and Nova prime does he exist or made up by you if hewas made up by you your awesome

Nice fanfic!

Originally Posted by Nachtsider Why are you keeping your collecting a secret? It's not like you're collecting child porn or something along those lines. Be proud of your hobby, guy.

OOOOHHH keep it coming

Pretty good concept, but there were some parts that made the story a little bit confusing, like a couple grammar mistakes. I'm not trying to rip on your story, in fact I think it's pretty good. I'm just offering my critiques.

Originally posted by Robticon If I knew Shockwave was messin' with mah Ostrich I'd be all like: "GET THE F%#$ AWAY FROM MAH OSTRICH!!!" Darn it, Roger got into my Avacado stash AGAIN?