Transformers 3 Rise of the Nemesis

VaderPrime1 · 08-09-2009, 10:42 PM

Is that the end? I loved it!!!

truesaphira · 08-10-2009, 02:36 AM

Been reading for a while... not bad. I've enjoyed.

DECEPTIKONBRAWL · 08-10-2009, 08:43 AM

nice! but i kinda wish that the story was longer.

tf7 · 08-10-2009, 09:35 PM

Chapter 13

Sunlight shone out through the mountains of the Himalayas. Sam woke up from his unconsciousness and his eyes flickered open. First thing he saw was Mikaela waking up at the same time. “Was all of that a dream?” Sam struggled to remember everything that had happened as he helped himself up, his aching bones cracking.

“It was not a dream, Sam Witwicky,” a familiar voice echoed. Optimus Prime began to get up from the snowy ground he was laying on and all of them studied their surroundings. They were still at the Himalayas all right. Scattered across the ground were dozens of dead bodies of the developing hatchlings. Optimus turned back to Sam and Mikaela. Especially Sam. “You have saved us all. You are the chosen one.”
Sam took a deep breath to take all of it in as Charles ran towards his daughter and hugged her.

“Thanks, Optimus,” his eyes trailed to spot something glistening on the ground. A pile of gravel laid on the ground, with a little blue crystal that was buried inside the pile. He looked on as the wind picked up all the dirt and gravel which once was the Matrix of Leadership’s shell and blew it all away, and then turned his attention to the crystal. “I guess I am,” Sam muttered under his breath as he bent down and picked the crystal up. As he held it up to his chest, it simmered into nothing, and a bright warm glow appeared for a brief second on Sam’s chest. The young teenager sighed deeply. Autobots and soldiers hurriedly picked up dead Decepticon bodies from the ground and loaded them onto waiting pickup trucks and tow trucks.

Kaminari treaded over one of the dead hatchlings’ body. She walked towards the area where Megatron had fallen and died. As she approached, she saw a pile of rubble that seemingly had been opened up. Taking out a special high-tech radiation sensing device, she scanned the area. “No sign of alien energy. Dead or alive,” she turned to Petr who just only arrived.

“Megatron wasn’t here?” Petr asked.

“I think he was, actually. We’ll report to NEST that the Decepticon leader’s dead anyways,” Ishihara sighed. “Let’s go.” The two of them walked off.

Years have passed, and graduation day had finally come for Sam Witwicky. He smiled, suited up in his blue gown and black mortarboard, as he gathered in a large, relentless crowd of parents, relatives and graduates from his college. Sam struggled through the crowds and finally meeting up with his parents, Leo and Mikaela. They smiled proudly at him. “My little boy’s all grown up,” Ronald Witwicky blinked back his tears, only to have his wife break down beside him, weeping and using his shoulder as a wet towel to wipe off her tears. Ron sighed. “Your mother says congratulations as well.”

Sam turned to Leo. “Bummer you didn’t graduate.”

Leo rolled his eyes and smirked, acting as if he didn’t care, even though he was hurt deeply by that fact. “Not yet.”

Astoria walked up to them in her graduation gown and mortarboard and turned to face Leo. “Hey, Leo! Guess what? I’ve graduated!”

“Oh,” Leo sighed, turning away.

“Oh well,” Simmons appeared and elbowed him in the side. “Tough luck, huh?” he snickered.

Behind the crowd, the Autobots stood proud, surrounding the area and towering over all the people. The most noticeable was the black and yellow Autobot. Years have passed since Bumblebee was Sam’s first car, but both human and Autobot guardian knew that they were to stay together for years to come. Bumblebee lifted up his hand and waved at Sam.

Beside him, the tall blue and red figure of Optimus Prime towered over most of the Autobots. He walked to the great ‘chosen one’, Sam Witwicky. “Congratulations,” Prime smiled with his metallic, stone hard lips.
“Thank you,” Sam said. He turned to Leo.

tf7 · 08-10-2009, 10:02 PM

Epilogue

Epilogue

High up in space, far away from the college, from the country, from the continent and even from the planet Earth, the Decepticon warship stood crashed in Mars. Unlike previously, the hull of the ship was empty. The walls were no more coated with shells and pods that contained malnourished hatchlings. Instead, it was no longer teeming with life. It was shrouded with more darkness than ever before, and its inhabitants were no more than a small group of Decepticon refugees.

Dark shadows appeared from the cargo bay of the alien ship. “Shockwave, prepare the tablet,” Soundwave ordered. The large blue Decepticon hauled a large silver body in his hands, while Shockwave grabbed a large stone tablet hanging from the side of the wall. “What happens now?” Shockwave’s one bright optic looked around as he placed the stone tablet flat on the ground.

“Nothing,” Soundwave declared, his visor glowing a bright red. “We take our leave.” The Decepticon chucked the large silverish metal body onto the tablet, and the two bowed down, lowering their heads as they spoke in unison. “All hail lord Megatron.”
Unmoving, the dead body laid still as the two of his most loyal servants left the chamber.

The chamber was empty. Lifeless and hush. The offline body of Megatron laid on the stone tablet. The large hole in the roof of the cargo bay was big enough to fit most Decepticons. The same could be said for Starscream. The traitorous Decepticon arrived in his earthly terrestrial guise. “I bid farewell to my former leader!” Starscream’s metal jaws squinted into a smirk.

But on one of Megatron’s motionless arms, Energon was coursing through. Energon remaining from Shangri La. The Energon was unlike any other. It was a liquid-like substance, and was purple in color. It coursed through the wires and pistons of Megatron’s lifeless body, and flowed to engulf the armor of his arm. It crept up like a disease, flowing towards his head. New metal and armor plating evolved, spiking up from his body. It slowly flowed to the head, the main control of the robot’s body. Engulfing the shut optics, the Energon caused a spark in Megatron’s cranium. Red eyes flickered through the darkness, and Megatron was awakened. His arm crashed towards Starscream, slamming into his neck. If it were a human, it would be dead by now, but Starscream didn’t need to breath. Instead, he was held in a lock that was impossible to take off considering Megatron’s tremendous power.

Three horns spiked out from Megatron’s skull, and he tossed the smaller robot off to the side. His body was engulfed in the purple liquid, and he roared, his jaw opening as wide as possible.
“I am Galvatron!”

tobuttica · 08-11-2009, 12:51 PM

Great story. Kinda bummed we didn't get to experience Unicron. Maybe in the next one, now that Galvatron is here to reak havoc!

tf7 · 08-12-2009, 09:17 AM

I kinda imagined Unicron as a disaster in this story, kind of like a tornado, or a tsunami. Never thought of putting him in. He'll destroy earth's atmosphere.

tobuttica · 08-12-2009, 11:46 AM

If Unicron is big enough, he doesn't have to come into Earths atmosphere. He can remain out by the moon, inactive, and still reflect enough light to be seen on earth. I always thought a good way to use Unicron in a TF story was replace Planet X/Niburu in the end of the world prophecy as Unicron. Google Planet X/Niburu and you'll see what I mean.

Drunk-Wheeljack · 08-12-2009, 01:03 PM

i really enjoyed this story i could defintely see it as the official sequel to revenge of the fallen!

nice job!

truesaphira · 08-12-2009, 08:09 PM

I think it is smart not to put all your eggs in one basket, trying to use Unicron too quick. That means you can write another story.

I personal would like to see Transformers 3, work on more character development and use Unicron for a 4th movie. I wouldn't be opposed to a 4th movie.

Thanks for sharing your story, I liked it. It wasn't perfect but it was entertaining.
And that's all that matters.