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by onecoolchris ben 10 transforms and rolls out |
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10-30-2008, 12:49 PM
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| commander in chief  Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 9 Collection Count: 24 | ben 10 transforms and rolls out One day Ben 10 was walking through a forest with his Grandpa Max and cousin Gwen. Then all of the sudden they heard a grinding sound. It sounded like metal against metal. "What is that sound," said Gwen. "Well it's getting major butt whooping," said ben. Then they heard footsteps coming closer and closer until... cliffhanger, sorry for the short chapter |
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10-30-2008, 04:08 PM
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| Mini-Con  Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 41 Collection Count: 40 | Uhhh... does that even qualify for a fanfic, NAY a chapter? *looks in an english book* Don't mean to be rude but, that is TOO short to post. |
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10-30-2008, 05:02 PM
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| commander in chief Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 9 Collection Count: 24 | i know i know i'm not a good writer |
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10-30-2008, 05:06 PM
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| Mini-Con Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 41 Collection Count: 40 | I never said you wernt a good writer. Hell look at mine, A Streak in the Stars. I cant say your bad. I am terrable. It's just that it was too short to post really. |
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10-30-2008, 06:00 PM
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| commander in chief Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 9 Collection Count: 24 | you think you think the story will still work |
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10-30-2008, 06:02 PM
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| Mini-Con Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 41 Collection Count: 40 | Prehaps. It's up to you. |
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10-30-2008, 06:08 PM
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| commander in chief Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 9 Collection Count: 24 | thanks thanks i'll continue |
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10-30-2008, 07:06 PM
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| Mini-Con Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 1 | I Agree. It's A Interesting Concept But The Chapter was too short. |
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10-30-2008, 08:38 PM
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| Try and stop me!  Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 518 Location: Cybertron, Milky Way Galaxy Collection Count: 21 and getting bigger | Try reading some of the other fanfics here, like mine. Linky in the siggy. Just try to make it longer and more understandable.
Read my fanfics. Links belowThe Encounter series http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/showthread.php?t=155037 SDGundamForce The Movie http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/showthread.php?t=158060 |
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10-31-2008, 03:53 PM
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| commander in chief Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 9 Collection Count: 24 | you know i meant it to be proaloge |
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