Transformers Voltage (Japanese name: Transformers: Heroes)

cybertron2006 · 12-01-2006, 10:09 PM

I've decided to add my story to Alpha Prime's storyline.

Here's Chapter 1:

TRANSFORMERS: VOLTAGE

By Cybertron2006

Chapter One

Millions of years ago, the heroic Autobots and the ruthless Decepticons where in an integalactic war spanning across time and space, and it all started... on Cybertron. "Well, it looks peaceful out here, Vector Prime," said X-Charge, a stocky Autobot that had blue optics, silver legs, purple body, and could transform into a space cannon. "It is not what it seems," said Vector Prime, "the Decepticons are probably planning their next attack." "Yeah, RIGHT," said Cyberblast, a small, blue Autobot that transformed into a Cybertronian jet. "I don't like the looks of this but we've got company," annouced X-Charge. "ATTACK!!!," commanded Zarakatron. Jets screamed across the sky, while soldiers shot from every corner. The jets were led by Starscream, while the attack units were commanded by Shockwave. "Ravage, eject. Frenzy, eject. Lazerbeak, eject. Rumble, eject. Buzzsaw, eject. Garbroil, eject. Operation: Total ahnilation," said Soundwave. Autobots and Decepticons clashed against each other. Casualties were high. Among many of the wounded were Autobots Cyberblast, Vector Prime, X-Charge, Scourge, Omega Supreme, Omega Sentinal, and Orion Pax (later known as Optimus Prime). The Decepticons that were wounded were all of the cassettes, Soundwave, Zarakatron, and Motor Master. The Autobots retreated back to the base, but were followed by multitudes of Decepticons.

Who will win? find out next!

Alpha Prime · 12-02-2006, 01:04 PM

Try to up the font size a little, it's kinda hard to read.

cybertron2006 · 12-10-2006, 05:26 PM

TRANSFORMERS: VOLTAGE
By cybertron2006 (one of the three amigos)

Chapter 2

"HELP," yelled Cyberblast as he was being chased by Seekers. He had been separated from the group when the attack started. Suddenly, a lone figure in a hooded cape stopped him in his tracks. In a blink of an optic, a hand shot out of the cape and obliterated one of the seekers. The other seekers, seeing this, ran (or in this case, flew) for their lives. Cyberblast looked at the demolished seeker corpse and then to the mysterious figure. "Who are you," asked Cyberblast. "I am Leige Maximo, leader of the Roguecons. You must join me while you still can, those seekers will be back," explained Liege Maximo (did i spell it right?).

Should Cyberblast join the Roguecons?
Vote now!

cybertron2006 · 12-10-2006, 06:50 PM

I'll post what'll happen if Cybs joins the Roguecons:

TRANSFORMERS: VOLTAGE
By Cybertron2006 (yo...)
Chapter 3

"Well?," said Liege Maximo. "Yes, I'll join... under two conditions... 1. you will let me be Cyberblast PRIME. 2. You will give me your entire army.," commanded Cyberblast. "Very well... you are hereby known as... CYBERBLAST PRIME!!!"

Alpha Prime · 12-10-2006, 08:56 PM

So is Cyberblast Prime evil seeing how he is working for Liege Maximo?

cybertron2006 · 12-15-2006, 05:47 PM

he doesn't know that Liege Maximo is evil.

cybertron2006 · 12-15-2006, 07:49 PM

TRANSFORMERS: VOLTAGE
by cybertron2006 (le pimpe)

"These are your new warriors," exclaimed Liege Maximo. "Megastorm, Galvastorm, Road Pig, Black Widow, Nero, and Six Shot." "Wow. Seems like a lot of Roguecons... no, WAIT!!! YOU'RE PART OF THE DECEPTICONS, AREN'T YOU?!?" exclaimed an enraged Cyberblast Prime. "So, you've found me out so quick... hmph, I knew you were a asshole." said Liege. "Oh well, night-night." Liege Maximo then murdered Cyberblast Prime in a second. "NOW WHO WANTS A PIECE OF ME???" shouted Liege.

Alpha Prime · 12-15-2006, 10:48 PM

Ok, nice-it down or say the word you meant instead of "*beep*". And a puncuation problem you have is:"These are your new warriors," exclaimed Liege Maximo. "Megastorm, Galvastorm, Road Pig, Black Widow, Nero, and Six Shot." It should read""These are your new warriors," exclaimed Liege Maximo," Megastorm, Galvastorm, Road Pig, Black Widow, Nero, and Six Shot." And write a little more, like ~5 paragraphs, instead of 1. Sorry for so many suggestions/corrections!

cybertron2006 · 12-29-2006, 10:56 PM

TRANSFORMERS: VOLTAGE
by cybertron2006 (i ate all the Jolly Ranchers)
Chapter 5

A few years later... "Prime, do you REALLY think this is safe," said X-Charge as he was setting out the tools for the reserection of Cyberblast. "Of course it is. First Aid said it will be quick and painless," said Optimus Prime, the new leader of the Autobots after he destroyed Liege Maximo for killing Cyberblast. "He shall be fine," said First Aid, "Let the resserection begin..." Suddenly, Cyberblast's spark combined with the Matrix of Second Leadership and then Cyberblast's yellow optics flashed on. "I shall lead the Autobots to VICTORY," exclaimed Cyberblast. "But you are not at full health, Cyberblast," said First Aid, "It will take a day for you to be at full health."

To Be Continued...

Alpha Prime · 12-30-2006, 12:58 AM

1) Try to write more.

2) Neat character your creating!