Wow! This fanfic is very entertaining and engaging. A few grammatical and spelling errors pulled me out of the story temporarily, but that's just a minor nitpick. I love the characters (particularly the Crosshairs/Hound duo and the Aerialbots) and a lot of the story elements. Hits familiar beats but it isn't the same story rehashed over and over again; you have added some interesting subplots and whatnot into the mix. The dialogue between characters is excellent. The descriptive pieces might need a bit of fine-tuning, but again, that's just a nitpick. Great story!
Nice! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought I was quite careful in clearing out all of my grammar errors but apparently I missed some. I do agree with with the descriptive pieces. I can't help but think this story went a bit too quick. I' hoping the next story will be descriptive and will add more focus to what characters are feelings. I greatly appreciate the feedback though. Helps show me where I need to improve.
