The first chapter of my beast wars shattered glass story. It was a routine prisoner transport. It should have been simple mission. None of them expected a Maximal attack. "Hey Boss?" Came a shout from the cockpit. "What is it TerraSoar?" Said the commander. "We got a Maxi ship inbound from sector seventeen," reported the comms officer, Skorponox. "Noted." "Uhh. Megs?," called the weapons tech, Terantilas. "What's wrong?" "Look for yourself." As the commander approached the cockpit of the Darksyde, he noticed the large rift opening in deep space before them. "What can we do?" He asked worriedly. "Nothing, we've got this in front and Maximals in back. We're utterly screwed," replied TerraSoar. As the rift grew closer, the Maximal pursuit craft approached the Darksyde and they flew together through rift, into unknown space. Well? What do you chink of chapter 1? Feed back is appreciated. UPDATE: adding in current chapters to front page. Chapter Two. Enjoy! They were prepared for anything. Except this. As the Maximal ship Axalon drifted alongside the Predacon vessel, the rift grew ever closer. "What is this thing?" The Maximal captain asked angrily. "It seems like the energy from our two ships somehow merged into a single intense power that created this rift. Either that or Primus hates us all," replied the chief tech, Rinok. "What can we do?" "Nothing. Unless you want to return to Cybertron emptyhanded." "I see. We must push forward. I have a certain,*ahem*, extra objective to take care of." As the rift grew on the monitors,the navigations officer Cheater said, "I can't get a lock on this thing. Wherever we end up, I hope it has some delicious Preds to chow down on!" "Enough of your disgusting machinations Cheater!" "Uh, sir?" Called the comms tech. "What is it Rattletrap?!" "We're almost in!" And with that, they plunged, together with the Predacons, into the rift Woo. I'm getting excited about this. Future installments won't just alternate from random pov's but will primarily focus from the Predacons view Chapter three They're ship was hurtling through unknown space. The rift had taken them into a sector that no one had even mapped. Is was off the grid. Waaayy off. But the Predacon commander, Megatron, had a plan. There was a planet below. If the ship could be piloted near a volcanic rock island in the midst of a molten, magma lake, they would be safe and have some added protection from the Maximals. But how. The Predacon ship rammed the Maximals. It knocked them off course just as the planet's gravity pulled them in. The Maximals veered of into a river and the Predacons stayed On course for the magma lake. When the landed, everything changed. Chapter four "What's going on out there!?!" Screamed the Predacon commander, Megatron. "The pure Energon levels are spiking out there sir!" Replied TerraSoar. "What can we do about it?" "My readings indicate that the local life forms are able to withstand this environment." "You mean you want us to scan organics?!" Cried Skorponox. "Yes." "Has this been done before?" Asked Megatron. "No." "Fine. Skorponox, scan whatever you can find." "Oh man. What the hell are we thinking!" Skorponox exclaimed. "Just do it," said Megatron,"we have no other choice." "Personally, I'm pretty excited," called Terantilas. "Here we go again," said Skorponox, as he began the scan. Yeah. This one was all dialogue but I think it came out good. Chapter Five Sorry for the long wait. School has been horribly time consuming. Enjoy The Predacons had been unprepared for how drastic the changes would be. No Transformer had ever truly had a "beast mode." But they were to be pioneers for their race. They had decided that for them to be able to withstand any form of attack from the Maximals, they must choose the strongest forms they could find; otherwise, they would perish. They saw it fitting, that as they began a new chapter in their lives, they would rebrand themselves. All but their commander chose a new name. Megatron scanned a monstrous beast called a Tyrannasaurus. He felt that he would disrespect his namesake were he to butcher it in an alteration. However, the rest of his crew however chose to create themselves in a new image. Skorponox scanned a creature known as, a Scorpion, so his name became Scorponok. Named after the second greatest leader of the Decepticons. TerraSoar scanned a beast known as, a Pterodactyl. He was rebranded as Terrorsoar, to intimidate his foes. Terantilas adopted the form of what is known as, a spider. He became, Terantulas, the most clever and cunning of the Predacons. And after drunkenly sleeved through the entire ordeal, Warspintor scanned a small insect, called a wasp. He named himself, Waspinator. Due to his drinking problem and the nature of his alt form, he acquired a vocal tic, in which he buzzes his S zoundzzz And then the Predacons stepped out onto the new planet and began to search for their brethren that the Maximals had taken hostage and jettisoned before the crash.
Chapter Two. Enjoy! They were prepared for anything. Except this. As the Maximal ship Axalon drifted alongside the Predacon vessel, the rift grew ever closer. "What is this thing?" The Maximal captain asked angrily. "It seems like the energy from our two ships somehow merged into a single intense power that created this rift. Either that or Primus hates us all," replied the chief tech, Rinok. "What can we do?" "Nothing. Unless you want to return to Cybertron emptyhanded." "I see. We must push forward. I have a certain,*ahem*, extra objective to take care of." As the rift grew on the monitors,the navigations officer Cheater said, "I can't get a lock on this thing. Wherever we end up, I hope it has some delicious Preds to chow down on!" "Enough of your disgusting machinations Cheater!" "Uh, sir?" Called the comms tech. "What is it Rattletrap?!" "We're almost in!" And with that, they plunged, together with the Predacons, into the rift Woo. I'm getting excited about this. Future installments won't just alternate from random pov's but will primarily focus from the Predacons view
Chapter three They're ship was hurtling through unknown space. The rift had taken them into a sector that no one had even mapped. Is was off the grid. Waaayy off. But the Predacon commander, Megatron, had a plan. There was a planet below. If the ship could be piloted near a volcanic rock island in the midst of a molten, magma lake, they would be safe and have some added protection from the Maximals. But how. The Predacon ship rammed the Maximals. It knocked them off course just as the planet's gravity pulled them in. The Maximals veered of into a river and the Predacons stayed On course for the magma lake. When the landed, everything changed.
"What's going on out there!?!" Screamed the Predacon commander, Megatron. "The pure Energon levels are spiking out there sir!" Replied TerraSoar. "What can we do about it?" "My readings indicate that the local life forms are able to withstand this environment." "You mean you want us to scan organics?!" Cried Skorponox. "Yes." "Has this been done before?" Asked Megatron. "No." "Fine. Skorponox, scan whatever you can find." "Oh man. What the hell are we thinking!" Skorponox exclaimed. "Just do it," said Megatron,"we have no other choice." "Personally, I'm pretty excited," called Terantilas. "Here we go again," said Skorponox, as he began the scan. Yeah. This one was all dialogue but I think it came out good.
I love beast wars and I so it is shattered glass and the maximals are bad now and the predacons are good right
Yes, this will be more or less a retelling of events from the cartoon but in an altered perspective, like looking a at it through "Shattered Glass" Sorry for the long wait. School has been horribly time consuming. Enjoy The Predacons had been unprepared for how drastic the changes would be. No Transformer had ever truly had a "beast mode." But they were to be pioneers for their race. They had decided that for them to be able to withstand any form of attack from the Maximals, they must choose the strongest forms they could find; otherwise, they would perish. They saw it fitting, that as they began a new chapter in their lives, they would rebrand themselves. All but their commander chose a new name. Megatron scanned a monstrous beast called a Tyrannasaurus. He felt that he would disrespect his namesake were he to butcher it in an alteration. However, the rest of his crew however chose to create themselves in a new image. Skorponox scanned a creature known as, a Scorpion, so his name became Scorponok. Named after the second greatest leader of the Decepticons. TerraSoar scanned a beast known as, a Pterodactyl. He was rebranded as Terrorsoar, to intimidate his foes. Terantilas adopted the form of what is known as, a spider. He became, Terantulas, the most clever and cunning of the Predacons. And after drunkenly sleeved through the entire ordeal, Warspintor scanned a small insect, called a wasp. He named himself, Waspinator. Due to his drinking problem and the nature of his alt form, he acquired a vocal tic, in which he buzzes his S zoundzzz And then the Predacons stepped out onto the new planet and began to search for their brethren that the Maximals had taken hostage and jettisoned before the crash.
