Hey everyone Im Chief Gage and i love to write fanfics and this website lets me share my passion with the world. I would like to start off with Introduceing my first stroy I will be posting. I call it TransFormers GoldenAge and it will be released in chapters starting with character bios. I would like to take the time to notice some exceptional writters that I have been following before makeing the account. Shadowwavepool7 your fanfic beginings is outstanding you have a real gift as a writter and you can defenitly count me in as a follwer. Your cliff hangers are amazeing and I you had me hooked halfway through the character bios. I also so love the refrences you put in it made the it very enjoyable to read and i wanted to read more after every chapter. And Omegashark18 your fanfic legends of a prime is amazeing and i really hope to read the rest of your story as you begin to post more of the chapters i have been very eager to read more of it you had me hooked on the first chapter. you two are both very talanted and i hope you know that, I will be posting my first charcter bio sometime later today and i hope you all enjoy it!!! (just an update the bios will be posted later on in the afternoon)
Thank you, Chief. I'll be sure to give your fanfic a look. If it interests me I'll be sure to stick with it.
Im sorry everyone its going to take longer then i thought I had home work after school then went out for dinner first person to check there phone pays the bill. anyway i to add to this my computer isnt letting me get the bios down so they will be posted tomorow morning before i head to school im sorry for such a long wait everyone but they will definitely be out tomorow. i do appologise and shadowwave yes i have finished beginings.
OrionPax: moring the loss of his brother orion goes from a humble archivest in the hall of records to a cadet in the newly formed Autobot team to face off against the wicked decepticons. Sometimes risking his own spark to save his friends or sometimes trying to save his own from sneak attacks played against him. Orion proves to everyone everyday that he deserves to stay in the academy no mater what it takes. DeckerPax: (flash backs only) orions brother decker was the first chossen to lead the one of the groups in the newly formed autobots. But when wanting to meet with his brother in the park one day to share with him some important news he is struck by a bombing amd presumed dead after not being able to find his body reamins. Mystery bots: I will let you try to figure out how many there are in this story. Ultramagnus: often keeping to himself unless belting orders magnus is often seen observing the vadets but when he see a new cadet rise above the other's in the training grounds magnus starts to take nktice and keeps his optic on the new recruit. SentinalPrime:Being the commander of the academy isnt all fun and games it gets stressfull at times and somecycles it really gets to him. He finds himself to old to be fighting anymore and meeds someone to train as his prodigy. His search ends when a new recruit joins the academy and becomes the talk of the school. He is always searching for new ideas from the young of this planet and thinks he may have found exactly what he is looking for. Prowl: obsesive with order and scheduale's prowl get his team to and from training on time. The other two team's are constantly late but with prowl as your team coordinater there is no such thing as late. Blur: Blur is not your typically everycycle bot. If you can understand him you seriously have way to much time on your servos. His fast past talking isnt his only ability he is faster then anything known to bot hense the name he got blur. His speed is an upside to scout missions blir can get in and out with no one seeing.him with ease. Bumblebee. Just because he is small dosent mean he cant pack a punch. Bumblebee is the kind of bot you want to make friends with. He is a loyal friend to the end and will do what it takes to protect them. He also gives great advice and often when bots take it there life is automatically better in every way. GameOn (fanmade): Bring on the games game on is in the house. He is one of the most athletic bots there is and a huge fan orions fallen brother commander decker. Gameon is a plauer with the femmes but one femme bot can change a mechs life her tricky ways. (Little hint for ya there) Rider: (fanmade)the strong silent type. Rider prefers to be reading in his bunker then bashing heads with the others. Rider is full of great advise and like bumblebee a loyal friend aswell he knows the basic medical aid know how so he could be the bot depicting eether or not you reach the more skilled medic or die on the spot. Clearshade (camo): (fanmade)ready or not her she comes cleaeshade is one bkt you dont want to tick off. Her stealthy ways come in handy for getting info on enemy plans. And when she is with her teammates loves to play tricks on them especialy GameOn the big boys reaction is extreamly entertaining to her. But she spends to much time around him she gets to know his soft side of the big guy and might just fall for his old pick up lines. Kupp: attention everyone on deck if your in kupps training class you are guaranteed a one way ticket to paintown. He will kick your sorry tailpipe to get it back in gear. But in the end iys all worth it to see his cadets pass above all the others with flying colours. ReCharge (fanmade): calling all medibots. When you need anything between a patch job to the knee to a spark transplant ReCharge is the one to call. Often called RC over the hollocalls or pa system when called to emergencies.Often keeping to herself she normaly is found in her first aid bunker but a few visits from a certain cadet might just change this shy bots mind about others. But just because she is a medic dosent mean she never learned how to fight. Ratchet: second in commamd for medical aid ratchet is one of the more advanced medivots but just fallen behind of recharge. He isnt the most friendly bot but when you get to know him he is a real friend to the end. Percepter: often staying behind on missions percepter is the scientist of the autobots. He is a whizz behind chemicals and knows the proper way to handle them. If injected with a deaslt chemical percepter is the one you want to remove it so you know its done properly and its all out. Jazz: bring on the fun if you nedd to let off some steam jazz is the one to talk to. His chill personality makes it easy for him to connect with others. But when it battle time watch out. He is a master behind the grappling hook. Swining from enemy to enemy ripping there jead off one by one jazz takes grat prode in destroying the decpeticons. Iornhide: the heavy haller of them all iornhide is anything but soft. His heavy ion weapons can blow a hole straight through your sparkchamber with one blow. But when you see him enterong a bar its often because someone needs some help. The stress that can get to you in the academy is emmense and specifically one bot needs a the help that he can get. And ironhide is the only one that can see it. Wheeljack: the inventor, the pshyco, the mechanic. Call him what you want he dosent care. Besides the fact that he has a constand record or blowing his workshop to pieces on a daily bases dosent mean hes a failure. When his inventions do workout they aid the autobots emmesly. Sunstreaker: Despite haveing the most anoying personality besides blure, sunstreaker is also has the biggest ego. the only thing he hates more then his paint job being scratched is decepticons and you are a decepticon who did scratch it I would hate to be your right now!!! The decepticons bios will be released either tonight or tomorow morning and thank you all for the grat comments i cant wait to get this story started and when i do i hope u all enjoy it!!!
Megatron: he's megatron he pretty much speaks for himself. Slipstream: Always sucking up to megatron almost as much as starscream though she is more successful. slipstream is often sent on assassination or kidnapping missions because megatron knows she will get the job done right and will often send Sky Warp with her. Sky Warp: often found around slipstream, sky warp is more of the take orders and just get it done bot. with slipstream always giving the orders these two make quiet a tag team when it comes to there missions. StarScream: starscream is starscream not much to describe him with besides he is a coward. loves to try and destroy autobots yet fails many times and when it comes to battles you can expect him to be the first one gone. Arachnid: being a stubborn con she is not liked by alot of bots in either factions. she enjoys collecting rather than killing and works to increase her collection on rare beings whenever she cans. but when her and brokenspark get in a fight and she learns that brokenspark is a powerfull bot she thinks on how she would react to megatron if she found out who really killed her friend in the war. KnockOut: Knockout is always full of himself and the only thing he might like more then his finish is the autobot medic ReCharge. and considering the circumstances he might just get his chance to make a move. breakdown: normaly seen hanging out with knockout breakdown is anything but normal. his pshycotic mind grew worse after one of his optics being drilled out of his head. he is always eager to smash some autobots whenever he gets angery or frusterated but despite his large build he gives great buffs. BrokenSpark: (fanmade) As seeing knockout is more of a scientist Brokenspark has been handed the title of head of medical aid in the decepticons. but when she finds out what happens to autobots and neutrals that cross megatrons path she begins to question megatron telling her the truth. just because he saved her life in the past dosent mean she has to stay. Vehicons: just your average downgraded dum vehicon. I hope you all like the bios I might add some more decepticons but I am baseing this on a fanfic I already wrote but i am makeing tweaks to it as i go. and the mystery bots that i mentioned in the autobot bios are really ment for in here i will fix that momentarily and shadowwave7 i see you want to chat but i am very busy with school and such when i get the chance i will respond to you. I hope to be starting the story either sometime tonight or tomorow I hope you all like the bios that I have provided and if you have any advice on if I could make it better dureing my story I would love to here them.
Just your average dumb Vehicons....ah, gotta love those Vehicons... I'm liking your Decepticon choices! can't wait for the first chapter!
The momment you have all been waiting for (mainly solusprime lol) The first chapter in my story I hope you all enjoy it Chapter 1: Nightmares Cybertron’s golden age has ended. There has been talk of war, with all the commotion about it bots have been warned that it is best to stay at home for their safety. But there was one bot who ignored these safety protocols for his curiosity was stronger than his will of taking orders. OrionPax remained at his station in the Iacon hall of records. His shift there has nearly ended and he was hoping to meet his brother Decker after work. He was ready to leave the hall but once he got outside a femme raced past him in her vehicular form. She looked like a MediBot so he wouldn’t bother her as she is most likely in a hurry to an emergency. He continued on his way to the town square. There were some bots that didn’t want to stay inside as well as decided to go for walks in this area. As he walked through the area he saw his brother off in the distance. As he began to walk over to him jets were heard over head and everyone ran for cover except for Orion and decker. Orion started to run towards him as bombings started to happen. The building’s surrounding them were nearly destroyed but the fire and flames that came with the bombings surrounded them. Orion reached out his hand for decker to take but when decker turned around and noticed him there it was already too late. One hit right on top of them and they flung away from each other. The last thing Orion saw then was a blast of flames consuming his brother…..and then black nothingness. When he woke up he found himself in a medical bed. He sat up and looked at his surrounding’s. A MediBot entered the room. “How do you feel” the MediBot asks. “different and were am I” asks Orion. “I cannot say but you are safe” “Were is my brother?” “Im afraid your brother has past we were barely able to save you Orion” “How do you know my name and who are you who is we?" Orion is confused and a little scared that this stranger knows him and has taken him in a strange place. “I am to be kept a secret so is he over in the shadows, we know lots about you Orion but for now it is best for it not to be said” the MediBot responds. Orion looks to the shadows to faintly see a figure. He could just make out the colours. The bot had the same colours as his brother had. He looked at his own servos and noticed they are different. “Take a look for yourself Orion” says the MediBot Orion got up and looked in the mirror across from were he was laying. Shocked at his new form. He stood there for a few moment’s. "What ......happend to me" "We had to completely remodel your body Orion the damage done to it was To far from repair" The bot in he shadows moves closer to Orion revealing his lower half of his body. "Carry on what your brother could not Orion It is what he would want" he says as he puts his hand over his shoulder. Orion looks at him. "How would you know" "Lets just leave it as we knew each other extremely well" Before Orion could respond the scene went white. Orion had woken up. He couldn’t recharge for the past few cycles due to horrible memories of his brother last night on Cybertron. So he stayed the rest of the night awake. -TO BE CONTINUED.... I hope you all enjoyed the first chapter I plan on releasing the next one tomorow at some point. If you have any questions, Advice, Ideas for future chapters, feel free to ask away
And you may feel that I was writing this story before I looked at yours and when I was half way done I started to read yours. I took some of your ideas and altered them into mine they were just so good I did dent do them exactly the same but it turned out way better then my original and inspired me and as i progress with it I will add more characters and update the bios as I go through to even out the numbers you will see some similarities but it is mainly different.
Hey everyone I was writting the second chapter when I thought it would be better If I added some neutrals I only have three so far If i decide to add more then that I will update it. (BTW they are all fanmade) Oblivian: careing and full of bravery Oblivian despite being only a sparkling child is orions biggest fan. From the time he saved him and his mother and off futher into the future Oblivian is always full of suprises and when orion is feeling out of it when he see oblivians little face he remembers that no matter what there will always be that one bot that impacts your life the most. Clicker: Oblivians mother is not your typical everyday mother. Even though she fears that oneday Oblivian may get into trouble without Orion or some one to help him she never stops him from exploreing unless its in decepticon territory thats were she crosses the line. TailGrinder: Oblivians father and clickers wife. tailgrinder is strong and confident. if they were under attack he would be the first to react and punch the attackers right in the face and maybe they would think twice about bothering this family again.
CHAPTER 2: Citizens in peral The next morning Orion exited his home to the sound of alarms. When he steped out of his door the first thing that he saw were Bot running scared all over the place. He walked futher into the chaos and was soon struck by another bot running in fear. He fell to the ground with a thud. ?: “By primus Im so sorry here let me help you help you up.” The bot helps orion to his feet and as he focus’s his optics he notices that it is a smaller fellow. He was yellow but looked like he could handle himself. ?: “Im sorry with all the evacuation alarms goi-“ he diddent get the chance to finish for orion interrupted him. Orion: “Evacuation why are we evacuating” ?: “we aren’t evacuating the entire city but the bots who live in this sector of iacon ned to get to the north sector were the academy is Iacon Is under attack” Orion: “When did this happen” Just then they see strange fingures in the distance comeing from the south. The bot grab orions wrist and starts running. ?: “no time decepticons at 5 oclock” They continue running to the northern sector of Iacon when Orion see’s a little sparkling lost, worried, and crying. Orion: “you go on ahead I will meet you there” Orion pulls away and runs towards the sparkling. Sparkling: “Mister Mister can you please help my Mommy she is trapped under the collapsed building and cant get out” Orion: “of course I will young one” Orion using all the strength he has starts to lift sections of debrie off the entrance to the building and then heads inside. Orion: “IS ANYBOT IN HERE” ?: Over……here…..please……help me” He hears a faint voice and heads over to find a femme bot pinned under fallen debrie of the building. Orion: “Don’t worry I will get you out” ?: “My leg……I cant…..move it…..I think its …….broken” Orion: “Don’t worry I will get you to a medic right now I am more focused on getting you to your sparkling” ?: Oblivion he is still……. out there alive……..thank primus” Orion lifts the debrie off her and helps her up. He carries her in his arms and heads outside. ?: OBLIVIAN!!!!! Oblivion: MOMMY!!!!......are you okay Mommy?” Orion: “your mother will be fine right now I need you to follow your mother and I so we can get her to safety” But before oblivion could reply a shot was fired and hit orion in the leg causeing to fall to the ground on one knee and gently lowering oblivians mother to the ground. Oblivian: “is big bot okay” Orion: “I am fine little one but please get behind me quick” Vehicons begin to surround them and with Oblivian and his mother behind him and infront Of a wall there were no soldiers behind him to take out the two. Vehicon 1: Well look what we got here prisoners for lord megatron or more casualties of war servos up for a vote” 4 vehicons vote for casualties and 5 vote for prisoners. Vehicon 1: “Prisoners it is starting with the sparkling” Orion is furious and gets to his feet. Vehicon1: “OH my it looks like we have a fighter here hahaha” Orion punches the vehicon in the face pinning him to the ground. Orion: “don’t make me let the little one view what death is do I make myself clear” Vehicon2: “death comes eventualy but for some” He fires his rifle into Orions back knocking him out. Vehicon2: Sooner then others. Oblivian: big bot okay Mommy clicker Clicker looks at her sparkling then at the vehicons. Clicker: Please …..leave us alone…….please” Just as they were about to take them hostage a large bot of blue, and red comes up and multi shots all the vehicons and they all fall to the ground dead. Oblivian: “UltraMagnus help big bot” He points to orion. Magnus: Of course young one right now you and your mother must go with Prowl to safety” Prowl carries the mother and holds the sparklings hand as they are loaded onto the transport vehical. Ultramagnus picks up Orion and gets on the same one. It rushes to the northern sector of Iacon. When Orion finaly wakes up its to a bright light in his optics. ?: “that’s right follow the lights” Orion: “Were…..Were am I……obliv……oblivion…….OBLIVIAN WERE IS OBLIVIAN” Orion shoots out of the medical berth Only to be stopped by two bots that are trying to calm him down. ?: “calm down dude” says one. Orion punches the bot in the face causeing him to fall back. Orion back of when realising what he did. Orion: “Primus…….Im sorry here let me help you up” Orion hold out his servo for the soldier. He takes it and he stands on up. ?: “you pack quiet a punch there soldier have you ever though of joining the force? Orion: "uh…" ?: “the names Jazz you would make a great addition. ?: “Before he does anything I need to check him for futher injuries Jazz, and percepter please inform magnus that he is awake he wanted to see him when he was” Percepter: “right away ratchet….and jazz I believe that was your que to leave” Jazz: “well fine then Is it so wrong to be here no I don’t think so” They walk out and ratchet motions orion back to the berth. Ratchet: “well its abovious you leg is healed now I just want to take a look at your back wound it was terrible close to your lower neck” Ratchet takes a look. Ratchet: Well it isn’t healed quiet yet but it was pretty deep your lucky it diddent go straight through you or you would be out for longer then 2 hours” Orion: “Do you know were Oblivian and his mother is” ?: “right here sir” Oblivian: BIG BOT YOUR OKAY!!!!!” shouts Oblivian. He goes to hug Orion. Clicker: “thank you for saveing me and Oblivian I owe you my life I am Clicker by the way” Orion: “My name is OrionPax and you don’t owe me anything madam” Clicker: “you are orionpax brother of decker…..its an honor sir your brother was amazeing” Orion: “indeed he was” ?: “may I please have a word with you orion” Orion: “Of course commander ultramagnus” Orion and magnus step out side of the medical bay and into the hall way were bots are passing back and forth with soldiers from the academy due to the evacuation. Magnus: “I saw you save those folks out there it was brave of you to do so” Orion: “thank you sir but if I may ask how did I get hear” Magnus: “you were shot in the back like ratchet said befor that we saw what you did we were impressed anyway the answer to your question is once you were knocked out we came to yours and the citizens aid. As you can see clicker has made a full recovery and oblivians father should be arriving soon we told about what happened and he is on his way now but that wasn’t the reason I wanted to talk to you” Orion: “what was the reason then commander” Magnus: “I am here to offer you a proposition orion” Orion: “which is” Magnus: “how would you like to join the academy as one of the first Autobot soldiers?” -TO BE CONTINUED….. Hope you all liked chapter two everyone!!
upon reading the first chapter: now you've got me interested. upon reading the second chapter: okay, okay. I do see a few similarities with Omega's story, but it ain't too much to ruin anything. We're already in chapter two, and it's straying into it's own little plot very quickly. I like it.
