TransFormers: GoldenAge

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Chief Gage, Oct 8, 2014.

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who would you like to see more of in the story?

  1. BrokenSpark

    4 vote(s)
    50.0%
  2. Orion

    1 vote(s)
    12.5%
  3. Jazz

    3 vote(s)
    37.5%
  4. Obilivan

    2 vote(s)
    25.0%
  5. Clicker

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  6. Tailgrinder

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  7. Ultramagnus

    1 vote(s)
    12.5%
  8. ReCharge

    2 vote(s)
    25.0%
  9. Iornhide

    2 vote(s)
    25.0%
  10. Megatron

    1 vote(s)
    12.5%
  11. Arachnid

    1 vote(s)
    12.5%
  12. Kockout (docKnock)

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  13. other (if chose other please state in comment who else)

    1 vote(s)
    12.5%
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  1. Zetaprime

    Zetaprime Lordofdecepticonmonkeys

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    awesome really good job
     
  2. Chief Gage

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    CHAPTER 7: Team Effort!
    (sorry for takeing so long to post it all was really busy the past few days actualy quiet supprised i was able to finish it today anyways enjoy)

    Megatron: “YOU INCOMPATENT FOOL I GAVE YOU A SIMPLE TASK OF RETRIEVING
    ORIONPAX AND ONCE AGAIN YOU HAVE FAILED GIVE ME ONE REASON WHY I SHOULDN’T TERMANATE YOU RIGHT THIS SECOND”

    Starscream: “I uhh…..ummm”

    Arachnid: “because he is a constant amusement to you and is the only one that messes up as bad as he does”

    StarScream: “hey I

    Megatron: “true Arachnid very true……your lucky StarScream that arachnid saved your spark……for now……BrokenSpark how is triad x coming along”

    BrokenSpark: “within the next 4 cycles my liege it will be ready the reagents gathered need to be processed, tested, among other things as long as I am not interrupted in any way I will be done in the given time I said”

    Megatron: “excellent no one is to bother BrokenSpark until she is finished unless otherwise sent by me do I make myself clear”

    Everyone: “yes sir”

    Megatron: “good now everyone back to your posts”

    Megatron walks out of the brig and everyone goes back to their respected posts but arachnid follows BrokenSpark.

    BrokenSpark: “you don’t take orders that well do you arachnid”

    Arachnid: “I just wanted to apologise about earlier I don’t know what overcame me”

    BrokenSpark stops walking and looks at arachnid.

    BrokenSpark: “what do you want arachnid”

    Arachnid: “to tell you the truth (grabs her wrist and heads to a an unoccupied room) jazz did dent kill your friend megatron did”

    BrokenSpark: “your lying you just want to use me to get rid of megatron you scrap heap”

    Arachnid: “im only telling the truth don’t you trust me”

    She grabs her neck and pins her to the wall.

    BrokenSpark: “I don’t trust anyone especially pathetic psychopaths like yourself”

    Arachnid: “look who’s talking”

    BrokenSpark: “errrhhh…….don’t make me I anything I would regret…….im not one for making rash decisions but I can start to very quickly…….. now leave me alone……I have work to do”

    She drops arachnid and walks out.

    Arachnid: “eventually you will see it my way”

    Back to the Autobots academy.

    Orion is being shown to his new team. When he arrives all the team members emidiatly
    look up.

    ? ‘OFFICER ON DECK!!!

    They all stand at attention and welcome Magnus into the room as well as Orion.

    Magnus: “at ease soldiers you have a new recruit joining your team this is cadet OrionPax treat him well and teach him the routines around here as well as become acquainted with one another”

    The team: “SIR YES SIR”

    Magnus: “Make yourself at home orion I have some work to attend to….Bumblebee make sure Orion settles in with no troubles”

    Bumblebee: “right away sir”

    Magnus: “good training starts tomorrow at 0400 hours so get a good cycles rest”

    Team: “SIR YES SIR”

    Magnus leaves and bumblebee approaches Orion.

    Bumblebee: “I thought you were dead you never came back like you said you would”

    Orion looks at bumblebee it was the same bot who he met at the evacuation.

    Orion: “I almost was to if it wasn’t for Ultramagnus and ReCharge”

    Bumblebee: “well it’s all over now right the citizens are being returned to their home and those who lost their homes stay here until they are rebuilt”

    Orion: (to himself) “trust me it’s not over”

    Bumblebee: “what’s that?”

    Orion: “I can’t wait to get started”

    Bee: “well then let’s start by introducing your teammates Im bumblebee like Magnus said and that is Rider over there on his bed he is the brains here no offense, And that’s”

    He couldn’t finish his sentence for the bot he was about to introduce pushed him out of
    the way.

    ?: “OMS YOU ARE ORION PAX COMMANDER DECKERS BROTHER IT IS SUCH AN HONOR TO
    BE YOUR TEAM MATE SIR”

    GameOn grabs Orion’s shoulders as he says this and makes Orion a little uncomfortable.

    Bumblebee: “argh…..(rubbing his head)….And that’s GameOn he is considered the athlete of this team”

    Just then GameOn somehow looks like he got punched to the ground. He is holding his face and when we get to see his face his mouth leaks energon. Then a figure appears from thin air.

    Bee: “classic Camo….( high fives)…..this is Clearshade also known as camo she has a special affect that she can blend in with her surrounding or go completely invisible”

    Clearshade: “nice to meet ya OP you don’t mind if I call you that do you”

    Orion: “not at all”

    Clearshade: “we will get along just fine”

    Orion: “so what’s the team name”

    GameOn: “Magnus did dent tell you pft shows how much he remembers anyway we are team Galactic”

    Orion: “I see”

    Camo: “were are your things OP when we were recruited we were allowed to bring a few things from home”

    Orion: “I don’t have much to bring I was never one for having much of the things that are not necessities and this place has all the things I need besides….it was destroyed in the attack nothing to much to salvage besides by brother’s helm”

    Clearshade: “sorry for your loss Orion but my rule for this team no sadness and if there is it has to have a real reason for it because sadness reflects negativity which is what we don’t need or want in our lives am I right”

    GameOn: “look who’s talking Mrs.’s I never got to meet my parents and won’t shut up”

    Camo: “you asked who my parents were and I answered honestly and I said it once Mr. hotshot shooter”

    GameOn: “oh my bad Mrs. perfect I…..”

    Bumblebee cuts in tazering GameOn in the torso.

    Bee: “will you two please put a bolt in it you act like you’re the worst brother and sister to ever face the planet”

    GameOn: “Damn your stingers hurt”

    Bumblebee: “no scrap genius”

    Clearshade: “there called stingers for a reason Boomer”

    Game” THAT WAS A ONE TIME THING OKAY”

    Bee: “Sorry orion not the best first impression you would expect from us”

    Orion: “don’t be sorry but I do have a question”

    Bee: “what’s up?”

    Orion: “don’t we have to do a test before training Magnus said that we start tomorrow”

    Bee: “you did dent do the test we had to do it to even get on a team”

    Orion: “Magnus offerd me a place on the team and I accepted”

    Bee: “trust me no one gets off that easy you will do it eventually”

    Orion: “okay”

    Just then a femme walks in. She had her hands full of papers. She was white with Pink stripes/ outline. Her helm pretty much covered her face except for her optics and mouth. She looks up.

    ?: “team Galactic yes”

    Bee: “indeed chief ReCharge”

    ReCharge: “im looking for OrionPax it seems as though he hasn’t done the test yet there for he must before he is able to proceed with training”

    Orion: “right Mrs. Charge”

    ReCharge: “please call me ReCharge and the team must be present as well to see if the trainee is wanted among the team”

    Bumblebee: “Well then in that case let’s go”

    The team leaves and follows ReCharge to the training grounds. As they arrive they are amazed at what they see.

    Clearshade: “this is not the grounds we trained in”

    Game: “hell no, it aint anywhere close this place is amazing why does Orion get to train here”

    ReCharge: “because this is where his brother trained, were you trained is where each of your parents trained or were your body form fit the most”

    Bee: “why is this one bigger with more advanced testing here?”

    ReCharge: “because this place is for bots who have a bigger build and need a bigger challenge we should have put you through here GameOn because you finished way too easily”

    Game: “that’s right im awesome oh ya ah huh”

    Rider: “now how are we going to live with him?”

    ReCharge: “The test is consisted of an obstacle course, shooting range, combat simulator, and team exercise you have 1 hour to complete the course go”

    TO BE CONTINUED……
     
  3. solusprime19

    solusprime19 Disney, Dat knee

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    :lol  Starscream is a tool...
    :popcorn 
     
  4. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    Damn right lol
     
  5. Zetaprime

    Zetaprime Lordofdecepticonmonkeys

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    :popcorn awesome
     
  6. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    why thank you!!!!
     
  7. Zetaprime

    Zetaprime Lordofdecepticonmonkeys

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    CHAPTER 8: fear, tears, munipulation and confusion
    (its a shorter chapter but i hope you still all enjoy it)

    As Orion does the test he fly’s through every single exercise but when he gets to the final one he freezes. He stares at the pistol that lays before him.

    FLASHBACK

    Orion and decker were at a firing range one day. They were young but decker had just been accepted into the academy.

    Decker: “aww come Orion all you gotta do is aim at my armour and fire”

    Orion: “but I don’t want to hurt you”

    Decker: “another reason why we are using a pistol it’s less deadly then an actually rifle
    besides you wana join the academy don’t you”

    Orion: (nervously) “okay”

    Orion takes aim at his brother’s armour and has his servo on the trigger when he was accidently pushed from behind and miss fired. When he looks up at his brother he finds
    him knocked out on the ground.

    Orion: “no…..decker”

    END OF FLASHBACK……

    Orion comes back to reality and steps back from the pistol. He exits the testing area and looks at his team. They are looking at him in confusion. He walks out. He walks down a long hall passing rooms filled with sleeping soldiers. Everyone but his team, ReCharge, and a few Officers are asleep. He looks up at a picture of his brother when he was first promoted. He goes back to his flashback

    FLASHBACK….

    Orion runs over to his brother. Medics are following him as he does. They pick him up and bring him to the medical bay at the firing range. Orion is told to wait outside. So he does. He waits outside the door. He starts to tear the things going through his prosseser. He may have killed him…….his own brother. They come out about an hour later saying he can see him now. He goes in to find decker sitting up with a bandage around his head.

    Orion: “by the all spark you’re okay I though I”

    Decker: “bro im fine no need for negativity it’s all good so stop worrying”

    Orion: “stop worrying I just sent a bullet through your head and your telling me to stop worrying”

    Decker: “chill dude it’s all good im not going anywhere anytime soon remember I will always be there for you bro”

    The scene goes white and he hears something. A voice. It sounds like its telling him watch out.

    REALITY

    Orion looks beside him to find something flung at him. He backbends and it just misses him as it hits the wall on the other side and it emidiatly incinerates it. He looks at the wall when he feels a hand grace his shoulder. He turns around to find Ironhide and another bot standing right behind him.

    Ironhide: “I take it that you joined eh Pax”

    Orion: “indeed Ironhide and if I may who is this”

    ?: “ The names wheeljack but everyone calls me Jackie you got good reflex’s kid were ya learn’ em”

    Orion: “natural reaction I guess”

    Ironhide: “nice to have reactions like that kid especially with that stuff could of burned right through you and speaking of which now do you see what is wrong with my acid cannon”

    Jackie: “dismount it and ill fix the bug’s ……..damn commanders are needy”

    Jackie takes the acid cannon back to his workshop.

    Iron: “what’s on the processor kid”

    Orion: “what do you mean?”

    Iron: “you aint fooling me although Jackie is easy enough to fool haha but seriously what’s buggin ya”

    Orion: “everything”

    Iron: “well then in that case I need to be comfy to hear this story”

    Ironhide puts his arm around Orion’s shoulder”

    Orion: “were are we going”

    Iron: “were goin to the bar there is one on the base”

    Orion: “but I don’t drink”

    Iron: “well then prepared to be amazed by the power of a drink”

    MEANWHILE

    At the decepticon side of things StarScream finds arachnid.

    Star: “you made me look like a complete fool in front of everybody you know that”

    Arachnid: “I am quite aware of what I did and if I remember correctly I saved you sorry
    excuse for a spark back there”

    Star: “no one makes fun of I StarScream and gets away with it”

    Arachnid: “BrokenSpark”

    Star: “what about her”

    Arachnid: “im sure you know who really killed her friend don’t you”

    Star: “I witnessed it yes megatron had no mercy”

    Arachnid: “You and I want the same thing”

    Star: “power?”

    Arachnid: “and megatron said it himself BrokenSpark is quiet a match for him”

    Star: “I may want power and to lead the Decepticon’s but Im not stupid enough to get on her bad side megatron spares me but BrokenSpark sees her decisions through”

    Arachnid: “she is the only way to the throne……lord StarScream”

    Star: “that does have a nice ring to it I always though

    Arachnid: “indeed it does but in order to gain the power BrokenSpark is our last resort”

    Star: “indeed…..and how do you suppose we get her to believe us instead of him”

    She smiles an evil smile

    Arachnid: “I have a few ideas”

    We now focus on a deserted place on Cybertron. We see two figures in the distance. We
    close in on them. One is injured the other a medibot.

    ?: “how…..did you…..find me”

    Medibot: “I am lost aswell and truth be told bots who follow the forgotten path often meet”

    ?: “Who……told you…..that”

    : “my parents before they died………I still remember there screams”

    ?: “question…….such wise words……and advanced……medical aid……how”

    : “I don’t know I grew up with only a brother but he did everything for me and i did everything for him"

    ?: “do you know……what I say……when…..bots loose hope”

    : “ what”

    ?: “till all are one”

    TO BE CONTINUED……….
     
  9. solusprime19

    solusprime19 Disney, Dat knee

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    wait....Arachnid and Starscream...Teaming up? this is getting messed up.



    And I'm loving every minute of it.
    :popcorn 
     
  10. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    Why thank you solus!!!!
     
  11. Zetaprime

    Zetaprime Lordofdecepticonmonkeys

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    :popcorn Awesome I'm pretty sure the mystery bot is Decker
     
  12. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    your just guna have to wait and see you never know it may be another one of my fanmade characters
     
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    Primus Productions Defender of the bayverse Veteran

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    Amazing work, But I suggest you work on some on your grammar but beside that this story intrigues me :thumb 
     
  14. Chief Gage

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    why thank you goldenJohn!!! and i will be sure to do that!!


    CHAPTER 9: dangers in the night


    Orion and Ironhide are chatting in the bar.

    Iron: “so moral of the story you go 5 seconds without being compared to decker”

    Orion: “ya I’ve never gone one cycle without that comment”

    Iron: “it sounds like the academy isn’t ready to let go of your brother just yet
    kid but this only happened a short time ago too you gotta remember”

    Orion: “true but I joined to honor him not to become the new decker”

    Iron: “While that may be true you have bigger things to worry about like why the decepticons are targeting you like they are”

    Orion: “it doesn’t make sense why they would target me I am nothing like my brother”

    Just as he said that the lights went out in the bar. Everyone in there starts to wonder whats going on. IronHide turns on his headlights and finds the main power bank and restarts it. The lights go back on but Orion is missing.

    Ironhide: “me and my big mouth”

    Orion is being dragged into the hallway. The lights in the entire building went out except for the bars. Orion struggles to get free and finaly kicks one of the attackers in the face and they drop him. He cant see who they are or were they are but he can hear them.

    ?: “damn……that scrappin hurt”

    ?: “looks like the newby has some strength”

    Orion: “who are you”

    ?: “your worst nightmare”

    One tackles him from the back and knocks him to the floor. His mouth starts to leak energon. Orion uses his hearing to sense the next attackers move. He hears one behind him and does a round house kick with prisission accuracy with his feet in the attackers face. The other is beside him and he punches him in the torso then uppercutted them. The one behind him gets up and kicks him into the wall and holds him down with his foot on his chest. Orion begins to cough up energon while he struggles to get up.

    ?: “scrap it Orion theres no use in struggling”

    Orion: “what do…..you want from me”

    ?: “its not what we want from you we want you in general”

    Just then the attacker pinning Orion down was suddenly striken down. So was the other one. He see’s a bright purple light then nothingness. The attackers were gone. A servo was reached out to him. He takes it and he stands up.

    Iron: “me and my big mouth eh now do you see what I mean”

    Orion: “yes…..i do….ahhh”

    Orion’s back wound has reopend and is leaking again.

    Iron: “we need to get ya to ReCharge now”

    Ironhide helps Orion down the hall. The lights go one when there about half way there. When they reach ReCharge’s medical bunker she is focused on her work. She see’s a shadow in the doorway and notices them.

    ReCharge: “by the all spark Orion”

    She rushes over to him and they both help him down on the medical berth.

    Iron: “don’t lay him on his back his back wound has reopened from the last cycle”

    Orion is on the verge of passing out from the loss of energon from his wound and his mouth and the coughing it up dosent help either. Just as She started to repair Orion TailGrinder enters the room about to take in Oblivian when he
    notices what happened.

    Tail: “Oblivan you need to stay out here I mean it ReCharge is busy and
    daddy is going to go see if he can help okay”

    Obliv: “What is it daddy”

    Tail: “someone got hurt but its okay ReCharge can fix them don’t worry”

    Obliv: “its not BigBot is it daddy”

    Tail: “uh….just wait here okay son”

    Tailgrinder goes in to see if he can help. But oblivian is the curious child and peaks in the door. He sees Orion on the berth injured. He cant help but rush to him.

    Obliv: “BIGBOT BIGBOT…..ARE YOU OKAY PLEASE BE OKAY BIGBOT PLEASE”

    Tail: “I told you to wait oblivian”

    Obliv: “BIGBOT IS HURT AND HE NEEDS MY HELP AND I WANT TO HELP HIM”

    Oblivian crawls up on the berth beside Orion. And lies down with his head on
    orions lap.

    Obliv: “you will be okay bigbot……I will make sure you will be okay”

    Orion smiles as he strokes the young ones head. He feels the pain from
    ReCharge repairing his back but it dosent matter right now he just wants to make oblivian feel better.

    Orion: “thank you oblivian”
    After about half an hour ReCharge finishes the repairs and Oblivian gets up and sits beside him.

    ReCharge: “there you are all patched up but what happened”

    Obliv: “ya what happened bigbot”

    Orion explains to them what happened and jazz just so happens to walk by and joins the conversation. At the end they all go wide optic.

    ReCharge: “did you see anything else Ironhide”

    : “Besides seeing him kick some tailpipe before I got there nothing”

    Jazz: “I would have loved to see that show down except for the part of you
    getting scraped”

    Oblivian kicks jazz in the shin.

    Jazz: “aahh…..hey what was that for it hurt”

    Obliv: “be nice to bigbot he saved my families lives”

    Tail: “Oblivian don’t kick the commander”

    Obliv: “but he was rude to bigbot”

    Jazz: “its alright tailgrinder…..ahh but damn does your kid have a good kick”

    ReCharge: “Tailgrinder can you please alert Ultramagnus…..and jazz please alert Orion’s team the galactic defenders of his condition”

    Both: “sir yes sir”

    They walk out.

    Orion: “why did they call you sir”

    ReCharge: “sir sounds better then mam in my books I do prefer it”

    Orion: “okay”

    Obliv: “bigbot better now”

    Orion: “yes oblivian bigbot is better now”

    Oblivian smiles and hugs Orion tight. Orion hugs back. But he dosent notice how ReCharge looks at him. her optics sweet and a gracefull smile on her face. The connection between Oblvivian and Orion is strong. she thinks to herself, Orion despite being his big built bot that looks so tuff, he has got a soft side a careing side for everyone. Oblivian seems to feel safe when around Orion, and always will. She only wishes that oneday she could have one of her own.

    Oblivian after the hug crawls ontop of Orions head and leans his head down
    infront of Orion. Orion smiles and Oblivian smiles back. They start laughfing. Just then Orions team runs in to see this. The surprised Oblivian falls off his head and Orion catches him. He sets Oblivian down beside him on the berth. His team approaches him.

    GameOn: “you okay bro Jazz told us what happened heard you kick some tailpipe though”

    ClearShade: “ya but were did you go before then and why didn’t you finish the test”

    Rider: “ya you had us all worried when you ran off”

    Bumblebee: “give the mech some space guys he was just attacked”

    GameOn: “and we wana know why”

    ReCharge: “and unless you back off a bit you aren’t going to know are we
    clear” says ReCharge standing beside bumblebee facing the others. They stop talking and back up a little bit.

    Orion explains to them what happened all the while Oblivian sitting with orion and Magnus entering the conversation.

    Magnus: “I apologise for this Orion we hold security highly here they must belong to one of the teams or we have a traiter among us”

    Orion: “it’s not your fault commander no need for you to appologise”

    Game: “there goes Orion being humble as usual”

    Magnus: “Orion when things like this happen it is always my fault it means im not doing my job properly but aside from that and I know its late and you have training in the morning but there is someone That wishes to meet you as for the rest of you get to your bunkers and lights out in 10 got it”

    The team: “sir yes sir”

    They salute him and leave. Oblivian looks at Orion.

    Oblivian:"bigbot's guna be okay right"

    Orion:"Im guna be just fine Oblivian now you best get back to your parents okay"

    Obliv:" okay bigbot I see you soon"

    He gives him a hug and leaves with jazz to take him back to his room.

    Orion:"if i may sir who wishes to speak with me?"

    Magnus:"A very good friend of mine and someone your brother new quite well aswell"

    orion sighs. When will he stop being compared to his brother.

    Orion:"ready when you are sir"

    MEANWHILE

    starscream and arachnid enter the lab which brokenspark is in. She notices and sighs but keeps going about her work.

    Starscream:"how is the formula comeing along BrokenSpark"

    broken:"it is going well Starscream"

    star:"our leader will be quite pleased"

    broken:"but he didn't send you did he"

    arachnid:"quite clever arent you"

    broken:"can we please skip the part were you try to get me to turn on megatron and the part were I scrap your sorry tailpipes and you just leave me to my work"

    arachnid:"but we have prof"

    BrokeSpark glances up from her work. Her red optics forming a death stare of disbelief.

    Broken:"you have my attention"

    starscream puls out a hardrive.

    Starscream:"we both know what this is right BrokenSpark"

    brokenspark:" its megatrons private files how could someone like you get your greasy servos on it"

    starscream tries to ignore the comment and remember there goal.

    Star:"lets just keep it as I borrowed it now. .......take a look at whats on it.....you might be suprised"

    BrokenSpark looks down at the harddrive.

    broken:"why"

    arachnid:"how else would you belive us"

    BrokeSpark narrows her optocs and takes the harddrive.

    broken:"when I have the time I will take a look but if your wrong you have a deathwish comeing to you both"

    star:"we are quite aware and trust us......we wont be wrong this time"

    broken:"your keyword there is this time starscream as in every other time you humiliated yourself infront of millions and I dont expect this time to be any different"

    Starscream is furious at this comment. He never liked brokenspark and now she has gone from not careing to insulting him.

    He makes a rash decision and goes to punch her in the face. She grabs the punch and twists his wrist.

    starscream:" ahhh....stop please.....stop"

    brokenspark closes her optics and grins.

    broken:"what is it that you must say"

    star:"agh....er....mercy"

    broken:"Im sorry but that responce is incorrect"

    She twists harder.

    star:"raaght....UNCLE UNCLE....UNCLE"

    she lets go and opens her optics only for them to be enflamed as a deadly death stare.

    broken:"now scrap off both of you.....I have work to continue"

    Starscream hild his wrist as he walks out with arachnid. Knockout approches her.

    DocKnock:"what did they want this time"

    broken:"starscream some how got his greasy servos on megatrons secret
    files...mmthey expect me to read them.....but I dont plan on doing as such"

    DocKnock:"Im not saying there right but why not havent you ever wondered what was really going on in the warlords processor I mean like come on chance of a life time is at your finger tips BrokenSpark. ....but its up to you to choose whether or not you decide to take it....I know I would......and were is breakdown you didn't send him on another mission did you? "

    broken:"not this time Doctor he should be around here somewere"

    DocKnock:" what did you call me?"

    broken:"you heard me what else would I call my partner"

    Knockout grins.

    brokenspark glances up at him and does a small smirk back.

    DocKnock:" ahem...uh...heh....well then I should uh.....eemm....go find
    uh...breakdown now. ...uh goodbye for now uh.....Partner"

    He leaves happily and brokenspark grins. For once she made someones day.....and she likes this feeling of doing good....its odd and unusual for her.....but she likes it.

    broken: (to herself)"see ya round....Partner"


    TO BE CONTINUED.....
    Hope you all enjoyed it!!!!
     
  15. solusprime19

    solusprime19 Disney, Dat knee

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    Zetaprime Lordofdecepticonmonkeys

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  17. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    CHAPTER 10: Team assigned and Femme denied!!!!
    Sorry for the wait but here it is hope you yall like it!!!!

    Orion and Magnus begin to walk down out when stopped by ReCharge.

    ReCharge: “Orion before you leave I need to tell you something”

    Orion and magnus turns around.

    Orion: “yes ReCharge”

    ReCharge: “don’t let yourself be beaten just because life is hard right now…….and
    certainly stop doing it to yourself”

    Orion goes wide Optic.

    ReCharge: “I have a way with thease things but we can talk later”

    Orion: “uh….all…..alright…..Thank you again ReCharge”

    ReCharge: “anytime orion”

    As they leave ReCharge begins her work. As she does so she finds that she is missing somethings needed. She leaves the room to gather supplies from wheeljacks shop.

    ReCharge: “hey Jackie you here”

    Wheeljack enters the workshop from a door leading to his test room.

    Jackie: “Eh ReCharge what can I do ya for”

    Charge: “I have ran out of some supplies think you have some”

    She hands him a list with the things on it. He looks at it and reads over what she needs.

    Jackie: “ya I think I have all thease wait here I’ll go grab em for ya”

    As Wheeljack leaves A bot passes by his workshop and notices that ReCharge is there. He diecides to enter and sneek up on ReCharge. He puts his servos over ReCharges optics.

    ?: “guess who”

    ReCharge giggles she knows exactly who it is.

    Charge: “hmm lets see is it Prowl…….how about Ironhide….no wait wait I know who it is”

    She turns around and gives him a hug.

    ReCharge: “no wonder they called you jazz you seem to always jazz up the mood”

    Jazz: “what can I say im special that way”

    Charge: “indeed you are jazz”

    Jazz: “so whats been going on in the world of medics”

    Charge: “you mean besides just finished treating Orions wounds”

    Jazz: “any Idea on what they want him for anyway”

    Charge: “well considering Decker was supposed to be sentinel prodigy”

    Jazz: “they probably think sentinel is going to choose Orion now”

    Charge: “that would my best guess”

    Jazz: “that would make sense but it dosent seem like Orion wants to be here”

    Charge: “he dosent”

    Jazz: “and you know this how”

    Charge: “have you forgotten already jazz”

    Jazz: “Pft what….me Pft no how could I forget something like that…..but to make sure you didn’t forget explain to me what you think it is”

    ReCharge giggles.

    Charge: “well then mister hotshot I guess I have to”

    Jazz: “im not as good a lier as I think I am aren’t I”

    Charge: “lets put it this way if you were interrogated by the decepticons you would make
    a better mute then lier”

    Wheeljack: “and considering you speak your mind almost 24/7 that’s saying something”

    He says as he comes back out with the supplies.

    Jazz: (sarcasticly) “ouch that hurts a lot ya know”

    Jackie: “boo hoo ya big cry baby I could care less”

    Jazz: “damn man whats eating you”

    Jackie: “Sorry jazz its……I haven’t been able to find a chemical I made in forever and I
    fear for what could happen if it gets into enemy hands…..it would make our medics life a
    living hell”

    This gets ReCharges attention.

    ReCharge: “what did you do”

    Jackie: “its supposed to be a substance that when injected into the system it paralyze’s
    the victum it wont eat away its circuits but a shot time paralization….I was never able to finish the formula it was just beyond my chemical knowledge so I abanded the creation of it. It wasn’t much because it was never succeful but considering brokenspark…….who knows what she could do with it if she got her servos on it”

    ReCharge: “are you telling me that the decepticons might have a substance in there
    possetion that could paralize and entire army if mass produced”

    Jackie: “well when you say it like that it sounds like a bad thing”

    Charge: (yelling) “IT IS A BAD THING WHEELJACK DAMN IT, PERCEPTER AND I TOLD YOU TIME AND TIME AGAIN LEAVE THE CHEMICAL CREATION TO US ITS EASY ENOUGH TO GET ONE OF YOUR LITTLE IVENTION WEAPONS BACK OR DESTROY IT BUT A CHEMICAL IN BROKENSPARKS SERVOS….I JUST……IF BROKENSPARK IS ABLE TO COMPLETE THE FORMULA OR WORSE YET SHE COULD COMPLETE IT BUT MAKE IT WORSE……DAMN IT WHEELJACK WE HAVE TALKED ABOUT THIS MULTIPLE TIME’S ON THAT”

    Jackie: “uh”

    Jazz cuts him off.

    Jazz: “you really wana Frag off a femme more than that especially ReCharge bro”

    Jackie: “your right I should shut it”

    Jazz: “smart move buddy”

    ReCharge calms down.

    Charge: “jazz please help me get this stuff back to my bunker…..as for you oh Jackie
    don’t think we are done talking about this cause we so aren’t”

    Jazz: “sure thing ReCharge….(whispers to wheeljack)….good luck bro”

    Jackie: (whispers sarcasticly) “thanks for the support jazz”

    Jazz: (whispers sacasticly) “anytime Jackie”

    They grab there things and head out. As they walk on ReCharge gives a frighting stare at
    him through the glass window.

    Jackie: “might aswell pack my things and go Because I am soOOOooo fragged”

    They walk down the hall and to the bunker. They put there things down on the counter”

    Charge: “thanks for the help jazz”

    Jazz: “anytime RC”

    They turn around to see two figures in the doorway.

    Jazz: “who the hell are you freakshows you certainly aint Autobots and really, dark
    colours totaly killin the vibe here”

    Charge: “im pretty sure Jackie already did that jazz…..anyway who are you this is
    restricted access area otherised personel only ”

    ? “well pardon us miss Charge we didn’t mean to disturb you at your work”

    ReCharge: “its not the work im worried about”

    ? “well then in that case you wouldent mind comeing with us to answer a few questions
    would you”

    Jazz: “good luck with that, Jackie already fragged off this femme bot enough you
    wouldent look too good if you tried”

    ? “always worth a shot”

    The first bot threw a knife at ReCharge. She dodges and forms her energon blades. Jazz
    activates his staff.

    ? “that wont be necessary jazz”

    Jazz goes wide optic.

    Jazz: “that voice…..it cant be”

    The first attacker puts her hood down revealing who it is.

    Jazz: “oh slag…..Slipstream”

    Slip: “I see you haven’t changed a bit jazz how’s the wife”

    Jazz and ReCharge look at eachother in wide optics then back at her.

    Both: “he/she is not my mate”

    Slip: “really because you two look cute together then again Ive been keeping a close
    optic on you ReCharge and it seems you have a thing for one of the new recruits……Orion
    right ya that’s it charming bot isn’t he”

    Jazz looks at ReCharge.

    Charge: “what he is my age”

    Jazz: “Don’t look at me I aint judging”

    In the distraction SlipStream charges them and knocks back ReCharge.

    ReCharge: “damn it…..that hurt”

    Jazz battles Slipstream forgetting that there is another attacker in the room. As ReCharge
    gets to her feet The other attacker tries to blind side her but she quickly reacts and
    stabs him in the shoulder.

    Charge: “like jazz said im already fragged off enough don’t make it worse for yourself by
    continuing this”

    She tears off his hood revealing skywarp.

    Charge: “of course should have known her partner was you”

    She holds him down and knee’s him in the torso causeing him to cough up energon. She
    punches him in the face and he smacks into the wall.

    Sky: “damn…..for a medic you hit hard”

    ReCharge: “im guessing your next comment will be “especialy for a femme bot too”

    Kicks him in the face.

    Sky: “ya but I decided not to go there”

    He throws a knife at her which hits her hand stabbing it through. ReCharge looks at it and
    then at skywarp.

    Sky: “it dosent hurt”

    Charge: “oh it does trust me but im used to being stabbed I am just really good at hiding
    my pain”

    She goes to tackle him but he doges and grbas her arm and slams her to the ground.

    Sky: “I got her hand me the knockout stuff”

    Jazz is distracted by that statement and is punched to the ground. Slipstream passes the
    gas spray to him and spray' s ReCharge with it and is instantly knocked out.

    Slip: “guess who has a oneway trip to hell”

    Jazz: “how could there be another hell when im looking right at the devils face its self”

    Slipstream kicks jazz in the face so hard theres a dent and knocks him out.

    Sky: “could have used this”

    Slip: “no thanks he deserved what he got”

    Sky: “fare enough lets go”

    Skywarp opens a bridge and they walks through it.

    Meanwhile we focus on Orion and Magnus. They have approached a door saying restricted
    access cadets denied.

    Orion: "sir Im not to enter in this area"

    Magnus: " Its right cadet your with me besides......he wanted to see you"

    they enter the room and find a mech sitting at his desk. He stands and approaches orion.

    Orion: "sentinal"

    sentinal: "OrionPax I presume"

    Orion: "Indeed sir"

    sentinal: "its good to see that the pax blood line has been continued in the academy"

    Orion: "Commander Magnus said that you wish to see me"

    sentinal: "indeed I have somthing for you from your brother"

    sentinal goes throught his desk and presses a button. A panel on the top of the desk
    opens up and he reaches in to grab somthing. He pulls out a Blue thin blade. Its seperated
    in the middle and is sharper then a needle at its tip. He holds it out to orion.

    His optics grow wide at the sight. It was his brothers saber. The energon stains on it still
    remain. Its as if it wasnt touched in years.

    Sentinal: "You brother said that he could sense his time was comeing.....he left this for
    you and told me to hive it to you when you joined and told me personally to put you in
    team galactic defenders. ....it was the team that he picked out especialy for you. The members in your team were picked by him. Bumblebee the scout. Is small build makes him a appropriate fit to the possition he also has a history in scouting so he has some experience. Rider is the teams strategist. He prefers to be behind the scenes rather then the main man. We have tested his strategy skills in the field and they have proven quite useful. GameOn the teams main warrior and the strength. Although he is hot headed he still a vailuble asset. His strenght is in the same range as Ironhide therefore matching the commanders weapon aswell. And then there is Cleashade. Also known as camo she has a uniqe ability that you must know biut by now. This gives not only her but the team in general the advantage of stealth and strike. As the throwing stars and knifes is her favorite she strikes with pristine persition. Not many of her apposers walk out of a battle with her. And then there is you he chose the possition of marskmen and leader for you."

    Orion looks at him.

    Orion: "marksmen"

    sentinal: "indeed he though that you would be the best bot for the possition"

    Orion: "not sure why sir im a horrible shooter"

    sentinal: "ah yes he told me about you incident at the range even though that hapend he
    didn't give up in you did he"

    Orion: "no sir"

    sentinal: "as he told me just that he said not to give up on you either and I keep my word
    therefore I wont"

    Orion: "with all do respect sir how am I supposed to train a team with expirience already
    and I do not have any"

    sentinal: "that is were jazz and prowl comes in unforchunatley you wont have as much
    free time as the other cadets would because your free time would be dedicated to 2 on 1
    training the only question is are you up for the challenge?"

    Orion looks at his brothers saber which sentinal homds before him. He grasps the saber in
    both hands and watches it glow when he does. He then looks at Sentinal.

    Orion: "when do I begin"

    we now switch focusses to wheeljack comeing down the hall. He enters ReCharges
    bunker.

    jackie: "hey ReCharge im sorry that I......Recharge?"

    As he enters he looks around the place looks trashed. That was the first sign of somthing
    wrong ReCharge was always organised. The second clue was energon stains all over the room. She would always clean up thise stains on the ground when she had brutaly beaten patients but thease were all over the walls.

    He takes a look at the security cameras footage. Clue three had proof of Orions attackers.

    jackie: "no"

    He rushes out of ReCharges bunker.


    TO BE CONTINUED.......
     
  18. solusprime19

    solusprime19 Disney, Dat knee

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    that fight was sick!
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  19. Zetaprime

    Zetaprime Lordofdecepticonmonkeys

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    grammar sorry but lier liar hive give to name a few otherwise good thou
     
  20. Chief Gage

    Chief Gage Well-Known Member

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    What?