Transformers "Movie Concept" comic, Page 1,LONG WIP

untitled first part for now,
PAGE 1

Im just letting you guys know, I ve been thinking bout this
for a while, But today I decided to take the plunge and do
a whole Transformers "movie concept" comic, of course
im not going to call it Transformers the movie comic,
Ill give it another name, IE: Transformers Battlegrounds, or
some junk like that. But the premise is basically the same.

All modern detailed interpretations of the original characters.
This is going to be a long long long project, i may not even
complete it, till the around the actual movie hits, cause ill
be the only one working on it, story and art. And I wont be able
to work on it every single day, therell be days weeks ill be
able to get alot done, and days i cant get to do any work.

The reason its goign to take long, cause im going to try not
to skimp on the details, gonna try to make every panel to
its best. I may not be able to accomplish that, but ill give it a
try. The ultimate goal is to finish a graphic novel.

Hey Im not working for no comic company, so there are no
deadlines, I can take my time with this one.
So dont be looking for any movie concept art anymore..
I will share sample work from time to time to show you guys
where im up to, and how its progressing,

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Nifty! The lines look great! I will say though that the very last panel... something looks off in perspective. Like the guy standing there isn't on the side of the road right. I think he may be too big, or the car in front too small.

In the last square the car seems too small but besides that I'm loving the concept.
Is that Hot Rod in one of the squares? Nice!.

nice loving all the detail on it

Nice work so far. I also have a problem finsihing these kind of projects. Theres nothing really wrong with the past panel, but maybe a different angle would help.

you should be able to see more of the top of the car in the last panel. and in the first panel top right corner I think the moon should be rounder.

overall I like it. are you going to just keep updating in this thread?

Impressed as always with your work but I am definately excited about the whole concept....can't wait to see more

Question: are you going to do each page as a whole b4 moving on to the next or will you tackle the entire project as drawings, the inks, the colors and so on?

Thanks Roadbuster, yeah there are going to be some off perspectives, at least for teh first couple ofpages, the more pages
I do, the more that problem will be rectified. Ive never really
sat down and practiced my perspectives, thats one of the reasons
i wanna do this comic, Thanks.

Thanks Brave, yeah that is Hotrod.

Thanks Cobra Commander, means alot

Thanks Shin, perhaps down the line ill get a lil better with how
to angle thigns and what not.

Thanks TGping, perhaps i can play around with the perspective
on the last one maybe shorten or lengthen some lines, THanks

Thanks Blue streak, all the lines will be done first, then the colors
then the dialogue, or I may do the dialogue first, not sure yet.

How long does it take you to produce such a page ( in a matter of hours ) ?
If you do that quick enough, you have a good chance to becaome a storyboard artist.

Page 2 folks

lines for now

Thanks IACON, right now im averaging a
page a day. pros can do about 2-4 pages
a day, so is not that impressive, but its
a start. Thanks man

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