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09-10-2005, 07:22 AM
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#1 | | No arms just CLAWS!! Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 2 Location: Hull UK | 3d G1 Brawn
Hi guys, Its been a long time since I last posted some work, but here is my WIP G1 Brawn. ANy feedback would be fantastic and it would be great if you could tell me how to improve it or what to add to make the picture or Brawn complete.
Cheers in advance!
Brawn!  Click here for picture
Brawn isnt dead dont you get it?
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09-10-2005, 08:10 AM
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#2 | | Windows user no more Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,583 Location: Sumter, SC Collection Count: 67 | Wow!! Not my favorite charcter, but still really nice. 
Thanks to Cobalt Agent for the awesome sig!
Quote:
Originally Posted by omega knight
they promote you when ur in jail its a punishment not a trip to the candy store. Youve been in jail for what now 6 yrs and u have iternet howed can u do that..and how does jux know my mom | | |
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09-10-2005, 08:46 AM
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#3 | | Banned Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 19,730 Location: malaysia Collection Count: 300! for sparta! News Credits: 2 | my crit:
-i think the pose/proportions could be better, making the arms and legs open apart to the sides.
-the face sculpt (tho for the most part this is an issue of preference). the face looks matured, but a bit narrow for brawn.
good work on the maps tho. nice weathering effect. | |
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09-10-2005, 08:48 AM
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#4 | | Dinobot Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 838 Location: Good 'ole U.S. of A. Collection Count: over 50 | Err, his whole body looks very rigid in terms of pose and he seems almost like he's floating. Also, you need to exaggerate your pose a bit more and maybe render out with a motion blur to get the effect of Brawn running. You might want to look at how people look when running. There are some other things as well in terms of lighting and texturing.
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09-10-2005, 10:53 AM
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#5 | | No arms just CLAWS!! Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 2 Location: Hull UK | Thanks guys, I can certainly see now that he does look somewhat on a Sunday Jog to the post office...
Ill give the pose some serious work, the texturing was my first ever real go at doing my own so Im quite happy but will have to see what I can improve.
The lighting, I have to say Ive always been pretty shocking, Im working in Max 3 and Ive stuck an Omni in their with shadows casted. If you can give me any tips on that it would be great. I can never get the sunlight doowocky to work well.
Might try more detailing on him too...
Brawn isnt dead dont you get it?
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09-11-2005, 01:03 AM
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#6 | | Banned Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 19,730 Location: malaysia Collection Count: 300! for sparta! News Credits: 2 | tips on sunlight:
use a directional target light, check the projection size.
use omni lights for highlighting, where shadows cast by directional reduce detail. switch of the shadow if ur using directional to simulate sunlight. play with the far attenuation to avoid the omni overpowering the directional light. | |
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09-11-2005, 08:00 AM
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#7 | | 75% Galvatron 25% Tom Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,233 Location: Western Australia Collection Count: 200+ | wahwhahwhah............ whats wrong with megatron he doesnt look to well there.... any way the seekers in the background rock and brawn looks very show accurate | |
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09-11-2005, 09:45 PM
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#8 | | Dinobot Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 838 Location: Good 'ole U.S. of A. Collection Count: over 50 | Max 3? Ch**** dude, upgrade to Max 8 already! Or go to Maya 7  | |
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