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09-19-2009, 11:30 AM
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#1 | | Optimus Prime forever Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 651 Location: Planet Cybertron, of course. Collection Count: Many. Didn't count until now. | ROTF Sideswipe Here's ROTF Sideswipe. Any suggestions are welcome. I hope you like it.  Quote: |
Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on! | Please check out my fan fic, Transformers 3: The Darkest Hour!
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09-19-2009, 12:20 PM
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#2 | | Its in the details Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 2,666 Location: Vancouver, BC News Credits: 9 | Very nice work.  My only suggestion would be to work out the proportions some more.  Venksta's TF Artworks |
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09-19-2009, 12:27 PM
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#3 | | Optimus Prime forever Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 651 Location: Planet Cybertron, of course. Collection Count: Many. Didn't count until now. | Ok, thanks for the suggestion!  Quote: |
Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on! | Please check out my fan fic, Transformers 3: The Darkest Hour!
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09-19-2009, 01:00 PM
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#4 | | Hates grad school... Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 374 Collection Count: Lost count a while ago... News Credits: 1 | The wheel-feet seem a little squared-off. Did you use Flash to make this? |
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09-19-2009, 01:18 PM
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#5 | | Optimus Prime forever Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 651 Location: Planet Cybertron, of course. Collection Count: Many. Didn't count until now. | No, I used MS Paint. I think they look like that because I used the line tool too much. I'll use the circle tool next time I make wheels. Gonna modify the picture, thanks for suggestions.  Quote: |
Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on! | Please check out my fan fic, Transformers 3: The Darkest Hour!
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09-20-2009, 08:17 AM
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#6 | | Hates grad school... Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 374 Collection Count: Lost count a while ago... News Credits: 1 | Nah, you can stick with the line tool in MS Paint, just use the eraser tool to erase the sqaured off parts next time as you work to round out edges  |
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09-20-2009, 09:05 AM
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#7 | | Optimus Prime forever Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 651 Location: Planet Cybertron, of course. Collection Count: Many. Didn't count until now. | Ok, thanks for suggestion. I'll upload the edited Sideswipe later today.  Quote: |
Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on! | Please check out my fan fic, Transformers 3: The Darkest Hour!
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09-20-2009, 10:12 AM
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#8 | | Optimus Prime forever Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 651 Location: Planet Cybertron, of course. Collection Count: Many. Didn't count until now. | Here it is, updated. I worked on the proportions, wheel-feet and shadows.  Quote: |
Originally Posted by Optimus Prime You'll never stop at one... I'll take you all on! | Please check out my fan fic, Transformers 3: The Darkest Hour!
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09-22-2009, 07:51 AM
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#9 | | Radicon of Obliticons Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 6,216 Location: AMARILLO TX Collection Count: unsure at the moment still bashing some | Only suggestion is dont make him look so stiff. Loosen him up a little. Otherwise i love it |
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