Nice setting and idea. It's very sketchy though, particularly panel 5 and 6 are hard to make out at this time. As is though, I think the storytelling is very good and the plot funny, it doesn't even require texts. Good stuff.
you guys will have to excuse the lack of update. ive been away on eid holiday since the 12th and am only returning to work/studio monday. gotta catch up with work first, then i'll resume with the piece maybe sometime mid week. thx for the comments.
cleaned up pencils, i really should ink this properly, the line quality is inconsistent, but i might just color this hoping itll be unnoticeable. edit: ah im gonna ink this properly, the lineworks all shitty when i view it like this. edit edit: inked.