Zoidstar85's "Shelf Wars"

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  1. Zoidstar85

    Zoidstar85 Zoidaryan Story-teller

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    Maintaining a collection is tough. Maintaining multiple collections is tougher. Keeping said collections from killing each other is another story.... Fortunately, some "collectees", if one wishes to call them that, are happy co-existing with other toys, but there are always those that wish to disturb this peace...

    Genre: Humor, Action, some Slice-of-Life.

    Enjoy....

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    -Ugh, still working on lighting and GIMP effects...
    -Still pretty pleased with how this turned out.
    -And I'm still debating on how many panels I'll limit each update to. I guess I'll let the plot determine that...

    And for a limited time, a free bio with each update! :D 
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    Stonecrusher Well-Known Member

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    Uh oh, Panty and Berserk Fury look like trouble. Nice first.
     
  3. Rattrap Primal

    Rattrap Primal Well-Known Member

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    Nice hook and start. Which Ironhide/ Jazz/ Bumblebee will we see? Will the Decepticons show up?
     
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    Necromaster FEAR ME MORTALS

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    I eagerly await further installments.
     
  5. Wars

    Wars Regular At Swerve's™

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    Looks good so far. I'll follow.
     
  6. Stryyder

    Stryyder Just another soldier

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    Looking good so far. My only critique at the moment is size. You've got a lot of text in there, but it would be better to reduce to a size that won't stretch the page.

    Other than that, I look forward to more!
     
  7. fafireguy

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    Interesting, I will be awaiting for further depths of this story
     
  8. uchihabro77

    uchihabro77 Energon Warrior 3 Red

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    looks good, glad your haveing gundams and zoids :D  two of my favorite franchises :lol 
     
  9. Merchhounds

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    Interesting I'm looking forward to the next one.
     
  10. bigbadblue

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    :popcorn  Good start!
     
  11. Ranger Silver 6

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    Looks good. One thing though, this is just a minor annoyance that comes from my father being an electrician. Ohms is a measure of resistance, power is measured in Watts. Will keep reading
     
  12. Rattrap Primal

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    Johnny, head of the one group of rouges (I guess he'll be a Zaku or Dom or even Tallgeese) and I see your going for the As Cybertron Turns route of giving the main villains generic names(I'm waiting for a Fred or a Barry)
     
  13. Zoidstar85

    Zoidstar85 Zoidaryan Story-teller

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    Gah! See what happens when I oversleep!!! Already a two-page thread with only one update! :banghead: 

    All in due time! I will tell you there will be Decepticons other than Screamer....:) 

    I'm playing around with image sizes as I type this. Thank you for your feedback!:thumb 

    D'oh! I knew there was something wrong there! Thanks for pointing that out! :) 

    Actually, I got the name from his MS pilot in the anime. That's how I name most of my Zakus. :D 

    And thank you all for reading! I am aiming for two updates a week, and shall have the next one up posthaste! :cool: 
     
  14. Zoidstar85

    Zoidstar85 Zoidaryan Story-teller

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    Second update of the week. Bios will also be posted as characters are introduced. Enjoy part two of this week's episode! :cool: 

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  15. uchihabro77

    uchihabro77 Energon Warrior 3 Red

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    :lol  what is she going to do with the matrix?
     
  16. Rattrap Primal

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    never even heard of the series Panty Anarchy is from (other than the fact it's from Japan)....I wonder what Shinki's are in the collection (my guess some form of Arnval and Starf)
     
  17. boxorak

    boxorak Lovable Noob

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    :lol  And Panty is supposed to be an angel.
     
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    :lolol 
     
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    Necromaster FEAR ME MORTALS

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    I want to strangle Panty.

    Is that a bad thing? I wouldn't think so...
     
  20. Zoidstar85

    Zoidstar85 Zoidaryan Story-teller

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    Who knows... Her mind is so twisted, who knows what she'll do with it...:crazy: 

    All in due time! Thank you for reading! :) 

    Hmm, wonder why she isn't anymore...:rolleyes2 

    Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading! :) 

    Not at all, good sir! Allow me to clear the room first so there aren't any witnesses....:ev: 
     

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