Would you like to put some Fan Characters into my next story?

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  1. Galvanitro

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    Hey, TFWers! In the near future(depends on how long this will take), I’m going to be working on a second fan-fic to go alongside Transformers: Heroes (Which will continue to be updated and added onto, this will be a secondary thing).

    Now, this will not be of an episodic nature, like TF: Heroes, but will be of an epic movie length and quality (About the rough equivalent of six episodes of TF: Heroes). The story will be titled: “Transformers: The Forgotten”, and in addition to my regular mixes of prominent and obscure characters, I want to have a decent amount of fan-made characters.

    I am contributing two characters, and I want you all to make the rest. I figured it’d be cool to have characters made by other people to become a part of my universe.

    This will take place in the Nova Universe; just like Heroes. Starting with Heroes; I decided that all my fanfics would be in the same universe, and I have to say, it’s been quite fun making my own universe, and I think it would be awesome for others to add characters to it (if you want, of course).

    P.S.
    Feel free to comment on this idea, on my fan-characters, or on other peoples fan-characters, or contribute to the combiner team name discussion, even if you don't wish to make a character.

    Characters:

    These are the characters so far that are in the story are:

    The Forgotten Cybertronians:

    Existing Characters:
    Rotorstorm (G1/LSOTW)
    Arcee (Pink 1st Movie)
    Eject (Perfect Effect version, except a little bit larger in scale)
    Starscream (G1-WFC Hybrid Body, Modified Armada Personality)
    Scavenger (G1)

    Fan-Characters:
    Rawbones (Movie-WFC Hybrid Style)
    Thunderflash (Classicified G1 Seeker)

    Faction Description: Formally squads of Autobots and Decepticons who fought each other for a long time, until they realized that the rest of the universe had forgotten them, and hadn’t come to rescue them from Asteria, the planet they were stranded on. So they declared peace, and have spent multiple decades as teammates and allies to the world they now call home, and will do anything to help its people.

    The Autobot Elite Guard:

    Existing Characters:
    Strafe (Classicified G1)
    Flak (Timelines (Wings Of Honor))

    Fan-Characters:
    Nitro (WFC-G1 Hybrid, with some Classics influences)
    Mach Dart (WFC-Armada Starscream Hybrid Body)
    Jetspeed (Cybertron Thunderblast Body)
    One Slot (See Below)

    Faction Description: The Autobot Elite Guard is the…well…elite branch of the Autobot Military. Unlike the Wreckers, they are stationed on Cybertron, however, they still leave at times to other places like the Wreckers do. The team used to be made up of the combiner team: Safehaven, and Flak, until one of the limbs, Hunter, was killed in action. However, since Strafe has been transferred to the Elite Guard from the Ancient Power Weapons division by his own request, they are now able to form a new version of Safehaven. Currently, the Elite Guard is attempting to locate Shockwave and his team of ‘true’ Decepticons. The Guard is led by Mach Dart, who forms the torso and head of Safehaven.

    Shockwave’s True Decepticons:

    Existing Characters:
    Shockwave (WFC)
    Breakdown (G1-WFC Hybrid)

    Fan-Characters:
    Cryonix (Cybertron-Voyager Starscream Body)
    Kaisaur (Cybertron Wreckloose Body with a Seekerish head, half-cracked, and with razor-sharp teeth in his mouth)
    Treadway (Cross between Animated Blitzwing and a WFC Autobot Soldier)

    Faction Description: Shockwave no longer finds logic in Megatron, or in his campaigns, and has left, taking soldiers loyal to him and his true cause. Shockwave is currently scouring the Milky Way Galaxy for a planet that didn’t belong to the Decepticons or had Autobot protection, that he was able to take over with his small, but powerful army of drones and Decepticons. But he quickly realizes that there aren’t any planets left that weren’t defended by a powerful alien force, Transformers or otherwise. All but one, that no longer exists on star charts.

    Fan-Made Character Information:

    Characters Made So Far:

    Name: Nitro
    Affiliation(s): Autobot Elite Guard; Sentrabots
    Occupation(s): Soldier, Right Leg Of Safehaven
    Colors: Dark Blue, Silver, Black, with a little light blue
    Body: Turns into cross between G1 Kup and WFC Sideswipe; a car with a truck bed, and small smoke stacks. Looks like thicker and more rugged WFC Sideswipe in robot mode.
    Size/Power: Small/Normal
    Weapons/Abilities: Nitro is super strong and durable, while also being fairly fast. He carries a large high-intensity laser rifle.
    Personality: Nitro is your average Autobot. He wants to save the universe and defeat Decepticons. He is a good fighter, and knows it. He will do anything to save his friends, even sacrifice himself. When it comes to things he think he is good at, he’ll push the person aside because he thinks he can do things better.
    History: Nitro was created to be a soldier. Relatively young in the grand scheme of things, he has never known a time without the war. He was put into the Sentrabot team, and after successfully completing multiple missions as a team, they got turned into Safehaven.
    Made By: Galvanitro

    Name: Cryonix
    Affiliation(s): Shockwave’s True Decepticons; Seekers
    Occupation(s): Warrior, Pilot
    Colors: White with some light green and medium blue
    Body: Cybertron-Voyager Starscream with some Classics influences
    Size/Power: Large/Normal
    Weapons/Abilities: Cryonix has two powerful swords that can flip out of each arm. He also carries a small pulse rifle.
    Personality: Cryonix is so full of himself, that if he was the size of his ego he could kick Cybertron like a soccer ball. He sides with Shockwave for the simple fact that he is more strategically sound then “Lord” Megatron, and believes that Shockwave will win the war for the Decepticons, not Megatron. Of course, Shockwave will need Cryonix’s power and skills to succeed in this endeavor, at least that’s what Cryonix tells everyone.
    History: Created in New Cybertronia not long before the great war, Cryonix always felt that he was destined to be a great and powerful being, something more than a pilot and member of the Seekers. He went to Kaon and got illegal weapon upgrades to his chassis, and fought in the gladiator battles at The Helix, proving that he was a great warrior, winning many matches. When the war broke out, he was one of the first to join the Decepticons, and reveled in what he felt was his true purpose in his life. He had ambitions to become a high-ranking officer, part of what prompted him to join Shockwave after he broke away from Megatron and the others.
    Made By: Galvanitro

    Name: Kaisaur
    Affiliation: Shockwave's True Decepticons
    Occupation: Biological Engineer
    Colors: Purple,Neon Green and Yellow
    Body: Cybertron Wreckloose with a Seeker-ish head (Left eye is larger than the other and cracked)and the mouth is filled with razor sharp teeth.
    Size/Power: Medium/Normal
    Weapons/Abilities: Energon Scimitar (Jigsaw),Ion pistol (Roundhouse), Scraplet-Insecticon hybrids. Can control his Scraplet-Insecticon "Hounds" with his mind,can cameoflage himself in any environment.
    Personality: Kaisaur is always finding a way to make Scraplets more terrifying,risking his life and the lives of his cohorts for his "pets". He always talks to himself and creeps around,watching and formulating a plan to kill anyone and everyone he meets,just in case. He names his weapons and Scraplets individually based on their personalities, yes, he thinks his weapons are alive.
    History: Kaisaur was once Cybertron's greatest Biological Engineer,creating new breeds of Turbofoxes and other creatures for hunting and breeding. But one day something changed, he went insane an became obsessed with Scraplets and other cybertronian vermin. He bred hybrids that neerly killed both him and his lab assistents. During the war he defected to the Decepticons and later gained control of his creations.
    Made By: Shatterpoint

    Name: Treadway
    Affiliation(s): Shockwave's True Decepticons
    Occupation(s): Decepticon Military Tactics
    Colors: Primary - Black, Secondary - Red
    Body: Mode 1 - WFC hover vehicle, very sleek and fast. Mode 2 - (drops down on to treads) bulky armored tank.
    Size/Power: Medium/Normal
    Weapons/Abilities: A melee sword, and the two cannons on his back from the tank mode (think Animated Blitzwing) Has the ability to slip through the shadows unseen.
    History/Personality: Treadway used to be an Autobot trooper. During a battle he suffered severe damage to his processor causing a severe case of schizophrenia. The Decepticons took him for information purposes only, but he now believes the Autobots caused his current state of mind and has pledged his allegance to the Decepticons. Treadway is very unpredictable and uses his two vehicle modes to his advantage. He can either be super sneaky, or brutally powerful. His dual-mindedness can make him a very hard-to-beat foe.
    Made By: Soundwave338

    Name: Thunderflash
    Affiliation(s): Forgotten Cybertronian, Seekers
    Occupation(s): Air Superiority
    Body: Standard G1 Seeker
    Colors: Mostly light purple with some white chest plates, a white face and red stripes on the wings. http://tfwiki.net/w2/images2/9/9c/MmteSeekers2.gif - bottom row, middle character
    Size/Power: Medium/Normal
    Weapons/Abilities: Arm-mounted lasers, flashbang grenades
    Personality/History: One of the vast number of disposable attack soldiers known as the Seekers, Thunderflash's only unique ability is his ability to manufacture and use grenades that explode with a bright light, temporarily blinding his enemies. He was part of Starscream's unit assigned to Asteria and has followed his commander into peace with the Autobots. Whilst a loyal soldier, years of being treated as disposable by the Decepticons have left him with low self-esteem and an edge of suspicion. In addition, if a social situation becomes too awkward for Thunderflash he has the tendency to fire off one of his grenades and run away.
    Made By: doomboy536

    Name: Jetspeed
    Affiliation(s): Autobot Elite Guard, Sentrabots
    Occupation(s): Warrior, right arm of Safehaven
    Colors: White body with silver on her helmet and blue lower arms and legs, golden optics
    Body: Cybertron Thunderblast, but more muscular and without her helmet. Helmet is more streamlined and has a V-shaped crest over her optics.
    Size/Power: Small/Normal
    Weapons/Abilities: Weapons consist of a Gatling gun for heavy-duty firepower, a missile launcher, two small daggers and a double bladed staff. Abilities consist of high speed on water and excellent endurance on land. Has brief flight capability, but can only fly for ten hours before landing.
    Personality/History: She is a kind and caring femme when out of battle, but when in battle she is a serious fighter and a powerful opponent. No one wants to tangle with her, especially when she's on your tail!
    Made By: Titanic X

    Name: Rawbones
    Affiliation: Forgotten Cybertronians
    Occupation(s): Heavy Weapons Specialist/Frontline Soldier
    Size/Power: Medium/Normal
    Colors: Black with purple details.
    Body: Movie Barricade [though in a more WFC-esque design], head inspired by Unicron in this picture [you know, the moustache, the goatee, the face, though he obviously doesn't have horns and his eyes don't glow green].
    His alt mode is a Cybertronian Bike [inspired by the Harley Davidson Chopper]
    And the "Decepticon/Autobot" insiginia is on his shoulder pads.
    Weapons/Abilities: Machine gun, hand-cannons, Energon Bisento [similar to Optimus' energon axe in WFC] and his bare fists.
    Personality: Rawbones is an old-timer, experient, he always complains about how things were better on his days, and how this new generation is a disgrace to the whole Transformers race. Rawbones is a natural warrior, always spoiling for a big fight, he always takes the bigger enemy to show him how age has only made him better. He is often noted for his sense of humor [as his age left him a bit...crazy], often tauting his enemies with witty remarks and casually joking [even on serious situations]. He is suicidal and a bit crazy on occasions, always laughing in the middle of a big war [and smilining whenever battle is mentioned]. But even considering such attributes, he still is a natural leader, filled with courage and outside the box thinking, smart and unpredictable on his ways.
    History: Rawbones has fought against Decepticons since the word "war" was invented [he actually says that HE invented the word "War"], he used to be a normal and daring Wrecker who accomplished many missions [which he often talks about in a nostalgic tone], but as his combat abilities increased, his sanity decreased and he was eventually abandoned on Astearia alongside his fellow Autobots.
    But now peace has been met, and he is forced he to put his differences with the Decepticons aside in hope to form a new society with his former enemies [The Forgotten Cybertronians], war, but to do so, he will have to put his old rivalry with the Decepticons on the past and embrace a future without a war [an idea that he is having a hard time trying to embrace it]
    Made By: Overlord Balder.

    Name: Mach Dart
    Affiliations: Autobot Elite Guard, Sentrabots
    Occupation: Decepticon Spy Hunter, Elite Guard Commander, Sentrabot Commander, Torso/head of Safehaven
    Colors: Blue, white, yellow, black
    Body: WFC Starscream body with Armada Starscream's wings.
    Size/Power: Medium/Powerful
    Weapons/Abilities: Wing sword, Training knife, EMP pulsators on arms, leg and arm mounted blades. Very skilled with the knife and blades. Has EMP pulsators that he invented for stunning enemies on the fly.
    History: Mach Dart is a seeker, which is rare amongst the Autobots, but even rarer amongst the Elite Guard ranks. He was at first a Decepticon Spy hunter until he got transferred to the (TBD) team and, after several successful missions, became the leader of the Elite Guard, something that ws unheard of for a Seeker. Due to his reputation, he was chosen for the Safehaven project, which was basically becoming a combiner. He tends to to be a loner, and can be unpredictable, yet he more often than not makes sound decisions.
    Personality: Can be a loner, unpredictable in certain situations concerning the Decepticons. Reserved around others except for his own team. Makes decisions after considering every angle involved with them.

    Name: Bombkill.
    Affiliation: Autobot Elite guard.
    Occupation: Bomb especialist/frontline soldier/Right leg of Safehaven.
    Colors: Entirely red.
    Body: Bulkhead (Prime)-esque body [of course, the size being adapted to the "normal" class, but still bulky as Bulkhead] with a similar face to Jetfire from Revenge of The Fallen [similar beard and eyes, though his eyes are yellow].
    His alt mode is a Cybertronian car similar to a Hummer.
    The Autobot/Decepticon insiginia stays on his chest.
    Size/Power: Small/Normal
    Weapons: Energon Hatchets [that comes from his wrists and replaces his hands], an grenade launcher and a Neutron Assault Rifle
    History: Bombkill used to work as a Wrecker [a damn good one] for the Autobots, while his younger brother [Hunter] acquired himself a rank in the Autobot Elite Guard.
    However, Hunter ended up killed admist the battles for the Autobot Elite Guard; Vengeful and hearbroken Bombkill decided to join the Autobot Elite Guard to replae his brother and avenge him once and for all, but nobody is saying that this is going to be easy...
    Personality: Bombkill is experient on his job [A.K.A Blowing things up], he often talks in a "techinical" manner ["Look that's an AXY1837AMENA8 Bomb!"], ofen needing translation, much to the annoyance of his friends.
    He loves to blow things up. some would say he is obsessed with it, but for he, the more flashy the explosion is, the better.
    Bombkill is the "shoot first, ask later" type of guy [or better, the "shot first while making witty taunts to his enemey and ask later" type of guy], always prefering to explode a door instead of opening it, though he will often warn people before exploding something, he loves the heat of the battle, sometimes laughing in joy as he fights [while screaming taunts, of course], being a screaming warrior.
    But even with his screaming ways, he always listens to his leader [mainly because he's not that good with strategies] and attacks after his orders.
    He is almost always in a good and helpful mood, the only exception being when something involving his brother [his death, mainly] happens, then he'll get scaringly serious.
    Made By: Overlord Balder.

    Character Slot Information:

    Only one per person, to be fair. If not enough are interested, I’ll let you all know, and you can make a second one.

    These are the current fan-character slots. It’s a first-come, first-serve basis, and I’ll remove each one as they are taken.

    When picking the slot, don’t pick it because it seems the most important, but pick it because you think that’s where you can make the best character. The better/cooler the character, the more likely I’ll write him more in the story.

    One last quick note: All Fan-Characters will get a decent amount of the time in the story. Some might get more time then others, but all will get a good amount.

    Description of Terms and Examples:
    Small: Around 15 to 19 feet tall.
    Medium: Around 18 to 23 feet tall.
    Large: Around 21 to 27 feet tall.(Can sometimes be a little taller with vehicle parts such as wings, etc.)

    Average Height for Transformers in this universe is 20 Feet tall.

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    Normal: Average Power Levels, Strengths, and Weaknesses
    Powerful: Above-Average Power Levels, A few more strengths than weaknesses, can sometimes be more advanced (Shockwave, Arcee), or body is more powerful in a bulky way (Lugnut, Brawl).

    Examples: Shockwave is a Medium/Powerful; Rotorstorm is a Large/Normal; Arcee is a Small/Powerful; Flak is a Large/Normal, etc.

    Slots:

    Autobot Elite Guard:

    Slot 1: Small/Normal. Forms the left leg of Safehaven.

    Character Submission Information:

    By submitting this character, you acknowledge my right to use the character in this and in any other fan-fiction stories in the Nova Universe. In exchange, at the top of each story and/or series the character appears in, you will be credited for the character in a format of:

    *Character Name* was created by *Name you choose to be credited by*

    Application:

    Name: Place the character’s name here. You may not use an existing U.S. Transformer name unless you think it is obscure. If you do, place it and an alternate one here, and I’ll let you know which I’ll use. That being said, you can use any Japanese names as long as it isn’t a copy or near copy of the U.S. version, except for Convoy, of course. And no Primes!
    Affiliation(s): Please place the ones that belong to the slot you are making this character for. If you think any others apply, please add them.
    Occupation(s): Self-Explanatory.
    Colors: Self-Explanatory.
    Body: Please make it something fairly easy to imagine, or describe it very well. You may use a body from any continuity except Alternators/Alternity, or make your own. If you use a beast mode, it must use or be akin to the Cybertron series Beast Planet characters‘ bodies. And no licensed vehicles unless you give a decent reason for it.
    Size/Power: Whatever is listed in the slot.
    Weapons/Abilities: No real rules here, just don’t over do it.
    Personality: Please have at least three sentences. Try to make your character as full of life as you can. You can write more than three, but don’t feel like you have to.
    History: See Personality.
    Made By: What name you want me to use when crediting you.

    Final Notes:
    First of all, I apologize for the epic length of this…I didn’t mean for it to be this long.

    Second of all, please talk about what you think the name of the combiner should be, and what their team name should be, whether you’re making a character or not. I have some ideas, but I want to see what kind of cool characters make up the combiner other than Nitro and Strafe.

    Oh, and in case you’re wondering, the dead combiner member, Hunter, turned into a Cybertronian Helicoptor, a bit similar to Rotorstorm but not quite (and a bit smaller of course), and was white with a lot of red and some blue.

    Thanks for reading, and I look forward to (hopefully!) seeing your creations! Any questions, please post here or PM me.
     
  2. Shatterpoint

    Shatterpoint Neato

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    Name: Kaisaur

    Affiliation: True Decepticons

    Occupation: Biological Engineer

    Colors: Purple,Neon Green and Yellow

    Body: Cybertron Wreckloose with a Seeker-ish head (Left eye is larger than the other and cracked)and the mouth is filled with razor sharp teeth.

    Size: Medium

    Power:Normal

    Weapons: Energon Scimitar (Jigsaw),Ion pistol (Roundhouse),Scraplet-Insecticon hybrids.

    Abilities: Can control his Scraplet-Insecticon "Hounds" with his mind,can cameoflage himself in any environment.

    Personality: Kaisaur is always finding a way to make Scraplets more terrifying,risking his life and the lives of his cohorts for his "pets". He always talks to himself and creeps around,watching and formulating a plan to kill anyone and everyone he meets,just in case. He names his weapons and Scraplets individually based on their personalities,yes,he thinks his weapons are alive.

    History:Kaisaur was once Cybertron's greatist Biological Engineer,creating new breeds of Turbofoxes and other creatures for hunting and breeding. But one day something changed, he went insane an became obsessed with Scraplets and other cybertronian vermin. He bred hybrids that neerly killed both him and his lab assistents. During the war he defected to the Decepticons and later gained control of his creations.

    Created by Shatterpoint

    I think Safehaven would be a cool combiner name.
     
  3. GingaMagnus

    GingaMagnus Civilized Enforcer

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    Name: Shadowblade

    Affiliation: Decepticon turned autobot

    Occupation: Melee combat master

    Colors: (Decepticon) Black,Red, (Decepticon sword) Red light
    (Autobot) White with blue stripes on wings,fins and cockpit.

    Body: Armada starscream (Black body,Silver arms thighs neck and face. red stripes on fins and wings but white and silver with blue stripes in autobot form)

    Size: Large

    Power:Normal

    Weapons: Wing sword (Red laser blade when activated),Minicon partner sideslice (Same as armada swindle in decepticon purple and black and autobot white and red), Prothon cannons.

    Abilities: Unknown as of yet (Edited to make more sense).

    Personality: Shadowblade was a cold and heartless decepticon warrior serving beside his only friend other than skywarp.After drift abandoned the decepticon cause shadowblade was ordered to hunt him down but was shown the light by his friend and was eventualy welcomed to the autobot ranks by optimus prime. He was created by starscream as an experiment millions of years ago for a soldier to serve megatron but was really starscream's loyal servent. He considered starscream as a mentor before he met drift or deadlock as he was called before the war and he began to go on missions with him other than starscream.
     
  4. Galvanitro

    Galvanitro Vanguardian

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    @Shatterpoint: Your character is awesome! He'll definitely be fun to write. And Safehaven sounds really good for a combiner Autobot.

    @ultramagnus84: While the idea is nice, I don't think he fits in for this particular story. But I'll remember him, and if in the future I need another Fan-Character for the slot he would take up, I'll use him, okay?
     
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    GingaMagnus Civilized Enforcer

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    Alright.
     
  6. Overlord Balder

    Overlord Balder Voices Slugslinger!

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    I can't use characters from my Transformers fan-fic, can I?
     
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    @Overlord: If one of your fan-characters can fit into one of the slots that are available, yes, you can use one from your fic. Oh, and your fic itself looks great, someday when I have time, I'm going to sit down and read it. :) 
     
  8. TF rocks

    TF rocks Try and stop me!

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    Here is my OC.

    Name: Mach Dart
    Affiliation: Autobot Elite guard
    Occupation: Decepticon Spy Hunter, Torso/head of (TBD)
    Colors: Blue, white, yellow, black
    Body: WFC Starscream body with Armada Starscream's wings.
    Size: Normal
    Power: Powerful
    Weapons: Wing sword, Training knife, EMP pulsators on arms, leg and arm mounted blades.
    History: Mach Dart is a seeker, which is rare amongst the Autobots, but even rarer amongst the Elite Guard ranks. He was at first a Decepticon Spy hunter until he got transferred to the (TBD) team and, after several successful missions, became a member of the combiner team. He tends to to be a loner, and can be unpredictable, yet he more often than not makes sound decisions.
    Personality: Can be a loner, unpredictable in certain situations concerning the Decepticons. Makes decisions after considering every angle involved with them.
    Abilities: Very skilled with the knife and blades. Has EMP pulsators that he invented for stunning enemies on the fly.

    Hope this is okay with you. Otherwise I can make changes as needed.
     
  9. Galvanitro

    Galvanitro Vanguardian

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    Looks great, TF_rocks (Missed talking to you, :) ), just a couple things, and that'll be all.

    1. He is also the leader of the Elite Guard, in addition to being leader of the Combiner team, so make a couple small changes to include that.

    2. A bit more of personality would be nice, but you don't need to do too much if you don't want to.

    3. (Totally Optional): Cryonix is a Seeker...you're (basically) an ex-Seeker by Decepticon standards...the Elite Guard is hunting Shockwave's team...if you want to make a rivalry/hunt/whatever on Cryonix, I'd be fine for that, but it is totally up to you.
     
  10. Overlord Balder

    Overlord Balder Voices Slugslinger!

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    Thank you for the compliments, Nitro.

    So, I have another two questions [Sorry for the ammount of questions]: Can a character be a mercenary? and can I add more than one character?

    For now, I'll just go with this guy:

    Name: Rawbones.

    Affiliation: Forgotten Cybertronians.

    Occupation(s): Heavy weapons especialist/frontline soldier/[TDB].

    Size: Normal/Medium.

    Power: Powerful.

    Colors: Black with purple details.

    Body: Body similar to Movie Barricade [though in a more WFC-esque design], head inspired by Unicron in this picture [you know, the moustache, the goatee, the face, though he obviously doesn't have horns and his eyes don't glow green].
    His alt mode is a Cybertronian Bike [inspired by the Harley Davidson Chopper]
    And the "Decepticon/Autobot" insiginia is on his shoulder pads.

    Weapons/Abilities: Machine gun, hand-cannons, Energon Bisento [similar to Optimus' energon axe in WFC] and his bare fists.

    Personality: Rawbones is an old-timer, experient, he always complains about how things were better on his days, and how this new generation is a disgrace to the whole Transformers race.
    Rawbones is a natural warrior, always spoiling for a big fight, he always takes the bigger enemy to show him how age has only made him better.
    He is often noted for his sense of humour [as his age left him a bit...crazy], often tauting his enemies with witty remarks and casually joking [even on serious situations].
    He is suicidal and a bit crazy on occasions, always laughing in the middle of a big war [and smilining whenever battle is mentioned].

    But even considering such attributes, he still is a natural leader, filled with courage and outside the box thinking, smart and unpredictable on his ways.

    History: Rawbones has fought against Decepticons since the word "war" was invented [he actually says that HE invented the word "War"], he used to be a normal and daring Wrecker who accomplished many missions [which he often talks about in a nostalgic tone], but as his combat abilities increased, his sanity decreased and he was eventually abandoned on Astearia alongside his fellow Autobots.
    But now peace has been met, and he is forced he to put his differences with the Decepticons aside in hope to form a new society with his former enemies [The Forgotten Cybertronians], war, but to do so, he will have to put his old rivalry with the Decepticons on the past and embrace a future without a war [an idea that he is having a hard time trying to embrace it]

    Made By: Overlord Balder.

    EDIT: Story reformed.
     
  11. Shatterpoint

    Shatterpoint Neato

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  12. Galvanitro

    Galvanitro Vanguardian

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    @Overlord: Wow, that is an awesome character. Do you think you would want to make him one of the limb members or a Forgotten? Since he turns into a Cybertronian bike, I could see that a bit better.

    It could create an interesting thing of him maybe being a better leader than Mach Dart, and when someone asks for orders, he might cut off the boss, etc. Or as a Forgotten, there is no real rank among them, but he'll still boss them around, and add the dynamic of being the only real old-timer.

    As for your questions:

    Mercenary: Another case of not really for this one, but maybe for another one in the future.

    Another character: Yes, if we don't get anymore submissions in another 24ish hours from now, you all can do a second character.

    And I really don't mind answering questions, so you're really are fine.
     
  13. Overlord Balder

    Overlord Balder Voices Slugslinger!

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    Thank you.
    And that [being one of the forgotten] was my original idea, but it ended up weird because Rawbones it's supposed to be a hot blodded veteran, it would sound kind of non-fitting he being on a team that declared peace to the war [the guy that pratically BREATHS war].

    But on the other hand, we could use this on our advantage [like, him being non-fitting on purporse, showing him as more a off-sider warrior who doesn't share their morals and visions of the world and the war, but is there to help them to protect everyone, also to count as the only one of the team who would be seeing stuff by a military point of view].

    On him being one of the limb members, it could work well too [though he is supposed to be of a normal size despite his small alt-mode, even having a larger chest than common], if that idea come to be true, I would like him being the arm [of course!].

    He could be the second-in-command who has a problems with the current leader, or the "history-book" guy [like, they meet a starship, Rawbones laughs and say some background story of him to explain that he knows the starship], the wise [though hotblooded and crazy] second-in-command, or both.

    So my ideas are on the desk, I will let you decide: Forgotten or Elite Guard?
     
  14. Galvanitro

    Galvanitro Vanguardian

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    Both ideas sound so good!...I can't really decide. I'll think about it.

    With it being Cybertronian, I'm gonna just imagine as one that a Transformer could ride, which does help a bit with the alt-mode to robot size ratio; similar to RTS Wreck-Gar. (Not in how Rawbones looks, but in transformationish style[without all the wacky parts, of course])

    As far as the combiner goes, he definitely fits in with the current members, even Strafe, really.

    But he'd also go with the ragtag randomness of the Forgotten (A gun, an earth-style motorcycle, a jet, a construction vehicle, and a helicoptor.)

    I really don't know.

    @Everyone else: Please keep submitting characters. We're getting some really cool ones here. Everyone should check out the first post for a character done by Soundwave338, really neat.

    As far as the combiner goes in general, Safehaven just blew my mind so hard-core that I can't think of anything else; but if anyone else has an idea, please mention it.

    The hardest part is figuring out the combiner team name: The ???-bots...hrm.
     
  15. doomboy536

    doomboy536 Universe Onslaught fanboy

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    I haven't written a fanfic for years but if you want to then you can use this guy.

    Name: Thunderflash
    Affiliation(s): Forgotten Cybertronian
    Occupation(s): Air Superiority
    Body: Standard G1 Seeker
    Colors: Mostly light purple with some white chest plates, a white face and red stripes on the wings. http://tfwiki.net/w2/images2/9/9c/MmteSeekers2.gif - bottom row, middle character
    Size/Power: Medium/Medium
    Weapons/Abilities: Arm-mounted lasers, flashbang grenades
    Personality: One of the vast number of disposable attack soldiers known as the Seekers, Thunderflash's only unique ability is his ability to manufacture and use grenades that explode with a bright light, temporarily blinding his enemies. He was part of Starscream's unit assigned to Asteria and has followed his commander into peace with the Autobots. Whilst a loyal soldier, years of being treated as disposable by the Decepticons have left him with low self-esteem and an edge of suspicion. In addition, if a social situation becomes too awkward for Thunderflash he has the tendency to fire off one of his grenades and run away.
    Made By: doomboy536
     
  16. Galvanitro

    Galvanitro Vanguardian

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    Awesome.

    And I decided, Overlord. Rawbones'll be one of the Forgotten. Do you want him to be Small/Powerful (like Arcee) or Medium/Normal (meaning he's overall larger than Arcee[I personally think this is better, but tis up to you.])?

    Other than that, just need a small edit to his history, and he's all set.

    EDIT:

    Holy slag! Once Mach Dart is finished, all but two (the limbs of Safehaven [name pending]) will have been done. I'll be able to get started sooner than I thought.
     
  17. Titanic X

    Titanic X Believe in the future!

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    Hope I'm not too late. I have an OC too!

    Name: Jetspeed
    Affiliation(s): Autobot Elite Guard
    Occupation(s): Warrior, right arm of TBD
    Colors: White body with silver on her helmet and blue lower arms and legs, golden optics
    Body: Cybertron Thunderblast, but more muscular and without her helmet. Helmet is more streamlined and has a V-shaped crest over her optics.
    Size: Normal
    Power: Powerful
    Weapons/Abilities: Weapons consist of a Gatling gun for heavy-duty firepower, a missile launcher, two small daggers and a double bladed staff. Abilities consist of high speed on water and excellent endurance on land. Has brief flight capability, but can only fly for ten hours before landing.
    Personality: She is a kind and caring femme when out of battle, but when in battle she is a serious fighter and a powerful opponent. No one wants to tangle with her, especially when she's on your tail!
    Made By: Titanic X

    This is her bio, so enjoy using her!
     
  18. Galvanitro

    Galvanitro Vanguardian

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    Hey Titanic! Very cool, I'll definitely be able to do some cool things with her, and she matches well with the rest of Safehaven. One slot left!!!
     
  19. Overlord Balder

    Overlord Balder Voices Slugslinger!

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    Thanks Nitro, I'll stick with Medium/Normal, as he is kind of bulky [large chest, big arms..], but not tall.

    And I'm going to edit his history.

    Can't wait to see how you will show him.

    EDIT: Story remade.
     
  20. TF rocks

    TF rocks Try and stop me!

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    Okay, fixed.

    Name: Mach Dart
    Affiliation: Autobot Elite guard
    Occupation: Decepticon Spy Hunter, Torso/head of (TBD)
    Colors: Blue, white, yellow, black
    Body: WFC Starscream body with Armada Starscream's wings.
    Size: Normal
    Power: Powerful
    Weapons: Wing sword, Training knife, EMP pulsators on arms, leg and arm mounted blades.
    History: Mach Dart is a seeker, which is rare amongst the Autobots, but even rarer amongst the Elite Guard ranks. He was at first a Decepticon Spy hunter until he got transferred to the (TBD) team and, after several successful missions, became the leader of the Elite Guard, something that ws unheard of for a Seeker. Due to his reputation, he was chosen for the Safehaven project, which was basically becoming a combiner. He tends to to be a loner, and can be unpredictable, yet he more often than not makes sound decisions.
    Personality: Can be a loner, unpredictable in certain situations concerning the Decepticons. Reserved around others except for his own team. Makes decisions after considering every angle involved with them.
    Abilities: Very skilled with the knife and blades. Has EMP pulsators that he invented for stunning enemies on the fly.

    Might as well have him be a rival to Cryonix. Maybe Cryonix could be angry at Mach Dart for becoming an Autobot or something, just an idea.
     

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