With Megatron on the Bottom of the Sea

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  1. soundwave34

    soundwave34 OBSESSED Transformers Fan

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    This is a Poem I wrote.

    With Megatron on the Bottom of the Sea
    By Soundwave34
    1-07-08

    Now Megatron is a tough one
    Taking leadership of the Decepticons
    And ruling half of Cybertron

    But now your dead
    You're totally done
    And because of that Fleshling Sam
    You put up with eight tons

    Yet you had a good run
    As you did with Jazz
    Now Prime says he's no longer his Comrade

    No funeral for the Bad Guy
    Only Optimus Prime would cry
    The Burial performed by Sector-Seven
    Along with you another Metal-Bender
    Perhaps you been forsaken
    With maybe Starscream the unseen Offender

    Some fans think you may return
    With Soundwave, Shockwave, or Unicron
    But I doubt Bay would catch on

    So Nobody thinks you're gonna live
    But all Transformers are equal
    That might make some sad
    We'll just have to wait for the 2009 Sequel

    I don't know what to say
    That's just up to the strange and mysterious Michael Bay

     
  2. mblase

    mblase Well-Known Member

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    Oh, the villain Megatron left to fly the depths of space
    And he tracked the Allspark to an Earthly place
    But he landed on the ice
    And went under in a trice
    It was sad when the big 'bot went down

    (Hit the bottom!)
    Oh, it was sad
    Oh it was sad (too bad)
    It was sad when that big 'bot went down
    (To the bottom of the)
    Good 'bots and 'Cons
    Searched for years for Megatron
    It was sad when that big 'bot went down
     
  3. Bryan

    Bryan ΜΟΛΩΝ ΛΑΒΕ

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    It's "you're." Please, please, for the sake of the English language--it's "you're."
     
  4. Barricade

    Barricade Frenzy is in my pants.

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    Your crazy! Get you're ass outta here!
     
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    transmetal2dinobot Sub-Commander

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    Chaos Prime Combaticon

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    Ha! That was pretty funny. Nice one. :) 
     
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    CdnShockwave The Prince of Poses TFW2005 Supporter

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    QFT!
     
  8. soundwave34

    soundwave34 OBSESSED Transformers Fan

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    I applogize for the misenglish. Iwrote it pretty guickly without correction after I wrote it on paper.
     
  9. OmegaVPrime

    OmegaVPrime Uhm, yea? So what?

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    Here is my version lol :D 

    Megatron a bady
    Megatron so strong
    But either way you put it
    That fool is dead and gone

    Alot may think a come back
    And some may think alive
    But face it people
    That decepticon died

    Stascream is living
    And in very good health
    In hand an alt form
    And the title of leader on his belt

    Its obvious unicron is to big
    and a fatty at that
    but what we have here
    is stascream whearing the hat

    The hat of evil
    The hat of power
    and thats the truth
    so prepare to cower
     
  10. OmegaVPrime

    OmegaVPrime Uhm, yea? So what?

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    Hmmm.....who cares these days the english language has been reduce from "you are" to "you're"...I think we all forget the english language gets dumber not smarter :lol 
     
  11. Frank Horrigan

    Frank Horrigan YAR! I be posting!

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    That's called a contraction....and it has existed for centuries.
     
  12. SPLIT LIP

    SPLIT LIP Dry built

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    QFT. Contractions aren't modern-day excuses for shortening words. (well, some are, but they're not considered real contractions so much as slang)
     

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