2D Artwork: Whiteout OC

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  1. TedimusPrime

    TedimusPrime Part Time Toy Designer

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    This is just a picture I'm giving to my sister this year as a gift. She turns into a two seater snowmobile. Suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
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  2. Soundwave_FSD

    Soundwave_FSD Yoda in a track suit...

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    First off, I really like the coloring. Second, I think the only thing that doesn't sit right with me is the legs. Mainly the thighs look a little too thin. Same with the lower legs, but not as much, and maybe it just looks that way cause the thigh. Maybe if you had the seat part of her lower leg fold into the inside, it may look better for the silhouette instead if a straight line. I think that the skinny thighs also take away from the female silhouette. It's just my opinion though, it's still looks good, better then I could do.
     
  3. Blitz.

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    looks cool one thing kinda bugs me... if she is putting one leg on the hill as if she is stepping up her crotch is pointing the wrong way as it looks a but odd.
     
  4. TedimusPrime

    TedimusPrime Part Time Toy Designer

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    Thanks for the critique! This is really the first fembot kinda picture I've done, so I didn't quite get the proportions right. It just kinda fit into my transformation scheme, but I get what you're saying. Hey, but now I've got a pic up!

    (looks at my reference picture) Crap. You're right. XD Thanks for commenting.
     
  5. Soundwave_FSD

    Soundwave_FSD Yoda in a track suit...

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    Yes, so I suppose this mean I need to start on my femmebot picture now.
     
  6. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    very nice
     
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    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    I really like the quirkiness of this design. Nice work :thumb 
     

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