Whispers in the dark

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  1. biscuits

    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    Sup guys, i'm back :D 

    First thing, the title is Whispers in the dark because it sounds badass and draws your attention, I don't intend it to have any actual meaning to the story :lol  and it's an amazing song by Skillet!
    Second thing, the actual comic :D 

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  2. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Nice start
     
  3. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    A seagull? He mistook that for a seagull?

    :lol 

    :popcorn 

    Likin' the structure miniature that you had on top of those boxes :) 
     
  4. Plastic_nomer

    Plastic_nomer Doing the unmentionables

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    Yay its Woolf! Oh wait that's just the G-exes. Still cool. :) 
     
  5. Thunder_Cracker

    Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!!

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    Me likey :D 

    But I'm more interested in the gundam age and that MG 00 gundam kits you have in le background :p 

    Nice way to start a new comic :thumb 
     
  6. boxorak

    boxorak Lovable Noob

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    :lol  A seagull....Poor Megatron, the Dark Energon corruption has gotten to his head.
     
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    Wars Regular At Swerve's™

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    Damned, stubborn seagulls.
     
  8. biscuits

    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    Thanks :D 
    They're pretty useful for mini figures...like Halo megabloks :) 
    If MG G-exes gets released, then der will be Woolf! :lol  I'd buy a Halo Mega Bloks spartan and paint him up Woolf style :D 
    Got the Spallow, MG Exia and MG Unicorn...and one box that wasn't there :ev: 
    Yup, it damn well has :lol 
    Damn them and they're rocket engines!

    Thanks for all the feedback guys, gives me reason to do more :D 
     
  9. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Interesting...

    You have a couple misspelled words, but otherwise not a bad start.
     
  10. biscuits

    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    I never notice them because Comic Life doesn't underline them in Red, so I always forget to check because I presume they're all correct :eek: 
     
  11. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Yeah, I know that can be difficult. Maybe try and type up your dialogue in Microsoft Word or some other word processor beforehand, make sure that everything's spelled correctly before typing up the dialogue in the comic? Just a friendly suggestion, feel free to take it or ignore it.
     
  12. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Seagulls. :lol 
     
  13. biscuits

    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    I normally come up with a vague amount of dialogue when i'm taking the pictures, then change it around when in Comic Life. I probably should start planning these things :lol 
    At least it wasn't a pigeon...
     

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