When toys collide.

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  1. David9000

    David9000 Autobot

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  2. David9000

    David9000 Autobot

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    I apologize it was susposed to say "uh to uh, well i don't know keep reading".





    P.S. more on the way.
     
  3. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Very cool, my only critique is if the dialogue was in speech bubbles it would make it easier to read :) 
     
  4. David9000

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    thank you I will try that, but the next few have been edited and I can't fix it.
     
  5. David9000

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  6. ShadowDragon

    ShadowDragon R to the D to the D yo.

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    yeah, I can't see the first part of demolisher's answer. Good start though!
     
  7. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    Some of the dialogue is impossible to read, and you should get a flash since it's hrd to see what is going on.
     
  8. David9000

    David9000 Autobot

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    sorry it's my first time.
     
  9. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    Good so far, if you don't have a flash, at least brighten the image with whatever imaging software your using, cuz I can't see much in the panels.
     
  10. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Good Start.

    I really like that cyro scourge, i really wished it was in my area. T_T.
     
  11. David9000

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    here's the next part it's early because i am going out of town
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  12. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    I don't think those three have what it takes to fend off Demolisher and Brawl...bye bye Megatron!
     
  13. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    They sure made use of the advantage of long range weapons against a melee one...
     
  14. David9000

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    No they don't but they try and fail.
     
  15. David9000

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    Yeah, but he will be back
     
  16. Optimal Megatron

    Optimal Megatron Decepticon

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    Hey David9000, great job so far, if they free Megatron will Cyro Scourge try to overthrow
    him?
     
  17. herugrim

    herugrim Defiler of Energon

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    not bad for a beginner, keep it comin kid!
     
  18. Z.U.D.O.N

    Z.U.D.O.N Camshaft's Master

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    My comments first.

    Comments:

    1. Try to find suitable text colours. I had real difficulty reading a few words...

    2. Brighten up the images. Perhaps turning on ALL the lights in that particular room, or using a flash. But I don't recommend the latter cuz overexpose your images..

    3. Several spelling errors...


    Compliments:

    1. I like the plot so far :) . Not so much interaction going on, but there's something. Keep it up. :D 

    2. Your laser effects are not too bad at the moment. You can't do much with paint, but you seem to have made the best out of it :) . It's a good thing! Hopefully, one day, you would start using better photo-editing programs like Adobe Photoshop or GIMP. They can do wonders! ^^

    I'll be reading your comic from time to time! All the best for your later episodes :D 
     
  19. Ray Kremer

    Ray Kremer Well-Known Member

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    This really can't be emphasized enough to all the funnies authors who don't use speech balloons: make sure the color of the text you use is appropriate compared to the area of the photo where you are putting it.
     
  20. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Yup, reasoning with Brawl is usually a bad idea.
     

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