Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by David9000, Jun 26, 2008.
I apologize it was susposed to say "uh to uh, well i don't know keep reading".
P.S. more on the way.
Very cool, my only critique is if the dialogue was in speech bubbles it would make it easier to read
thank you I will try that, but the next few have been edited and I can't fix it.
yeah, I can't see the first part of demolisher's answer. Good start though!
Some of the dialogue is impossible to read, and you should get a flash since it's hrd to see what is going on.
sorry it's my first time.
Good so far, if you don't have a flash, at least brighten the image with whatever imaging software your using, cuz I can't see much in the panels.
I really like that cyro scourge, i really wished it was in my area. T_T.
here's the next part it's early because i am going out of town
I don't think those three have what it takes to fend off Demolisher and Brawl...bye bye Megatron!
They sure made use of the advantage of long range weapons against a melee one...
No they don't but they try and fail.
Yeah, but he will be back
Hey David9000, great job so far, if they free Megatron will Cyro Scourge try to overthrow
not bad for a beginner, keep it comin kid!
My comments first.
1. Try to find suitable text colours. I had real difficulty reading a few words...
2. Brighten up the images. Perhaps turning on ALL the lights in that particular room, or using a flash. But I don't recommend the latter cuz overexpose your images..
3. Several spelling errors...
1. I like the plot so far . Not so much interaction going on, but there's something. Keep it up.
2. Your laser effects are not too bad at the moment. You can't do much with paint, but you seem to have made the best out of it . It's a good thing! Hopefully, one day, you would start using better photo-editing programs like Adobe Photoshop or GIMP. They can do wonders! ^^
I'll be reading your comic from time to time! All the best for your later episodes
This really can't be emphasized enough to all the funnies authors who don't use speech balloons: make sure the color of the text you use is appropriate compared to the area of the photo where you are putting it.
Yup, reasoning with Brawl is usually a bad idea.
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