Heavy/Scratch: WFC Rejection

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  1. firebapx

    firebapx Starscream

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    rather than following the typical pattern of repainting an Optimus prime black and calling it Nemesis Prime I decided to change his head give him a completely different paint job and create a custom character.

    surprisingly I had a really good time making him and coming up with his background. this is my first time making my own character so here it goes lol

    rejection was born in the early days of the war. it was a dark night rain was pouring down it was heavy almost blanking the view ahead. within the great Decepticon city stands a protoform production facility. At first the air is silent no movement a distant battle can be head the Autobots are pressing an attack. suddenly there is a whistle in the distance it gets closer and louder increasing and increasing then suddenly the dark wet streets are drowned out by a huge flash and a deafening bang. the autobots have attacked the protoform facility. the facility starts to fall apart at the seems roofs co laps walls fall into the streets and many decpticons scientist die. hundreds of protoforms have been destroyed. this was a great victory for the autobots the decepticons will be recovering from this attack for megacycles. as the smoke clears there is no longer silence instead the battle has moved forward the autobots used the distraction of the attack to push forward and at the head of the battle the mighty optimus faced of against megatron. they two mighty leaders fought wildly each one seem to take turns at having the upper hand. never for more than a few minuets was one on top. as the battle continued megatron call in his troops to aid the attack as did optimus. optiums produced his axe and ran for megatron his sheer force and size managed to smash through some of megatrons smaller troops. as he ran he his simply stared at megatron this time he was sure he would end it. megatron simply responded by producing his sword he stared optimus down waiting on the the attack. not even the call of his troops distracted him he waited for optimus as he got closer he clutched his sword tighter and at last he meet optimus head on. the clash of there two mighty weapons created a shock wave that stunned some of the many smaller troops knocking them back. megatron knew this would not be his day of victory the battle would continue to be even on booth sides and he had already lost to many troops today. he called in a retreat. as his troops retreated he was able to admit to him self the optimus was going to be a problem weather he liked it or not. optimus left satisfied that the all the protoforms where destroyed and that the remaining decepticons shared that fate. he was wrong! one protoform was still left it was buried under the rubble it eyes just able to see out of the rule. it had
    witnessed the whole battle between optimus and megatron. it was activated by the explosion and took in all that it had witnessed
    learning from optimus and megatrons actions watching ever move they made. it was able to see how the leaders behaved. but that’s
    not all it saw in the background it could see autobot medics and how they worked it could see the decepticons soldiers and how
    ruthlessly they fought. it had learned everything its empty shell quickly filled with information learning everything.
    including death it could see the hundreds fall he was surrounded by his dead brothers in the rubble. during the explosion
    he had absorbed the sparks of many other protoforms. allowing him to accumulate much more knowledge than any protoform before him.

    as the battle ended the protoform scanned the last robot to leave the battle optimus. he was able to slowly force his way from
    the rubble making his way to the surface his new form was very powerful filled with the energy of many protoforms and the
    abilities of many autobots and decepticons. he was quickly able to teach him self to transform. be leaving him self to be an autobot
    he made his way towards them. as he approached the nearest autobot patrol he thought he was safe but to his surprise he was attacked
    they autobots had scanned him as a Decepticon suddenly he knew exactly what to do he dodged the gun fire and ran to cover.
    he was using the new knowledge he had gained he quickly snuck round behind them with his superior aim and his medical knowledge he
    took out two of the autobots with one shot then he drew his axe and ran towards the last larger autobot. he slamed the axe into
    his arm pulled him self up onto his back climbed on-top of him and ripped his head of. his abilities both made him fell frightened
    and thrilled he liked it.

    knowing now that he must be a Decepticon he made his way back through the mirkey streets he made his way looking up at the huge
    buildings he was still new to this world he was amazed. over head he could see decepticons fly over. he followed them deep down
    inside his spark he knew this world was wrong something was broken there was to much death. "how can the autobots and the decepticons
    both be-leave they are doing what’s right when so many are dyeing" he shouted dropping to his knees. as he sat there trying to figure
    out why he was born he was attacked again this time from the sky’s "its optimus" the voices said and they kept attacking him.
    frightened he ran for cover. sitting he thought remembering back to his first day of life he remembered large AA guns shooting at the
    flying decepticons. quickly he managed to savage a what resembled a larger gun than his own from the body’s around him. he ran
    to the centre of the battle field. taking up position on-top of the rubble of a large monument to megatron. using his new gun he unleashed
    a barrage of mortar shells into the sky. he was amazed at the knowledge he had gained from the engineers he had studied he seemed to have
    absorbed there collective abilities. the gun he had made fired well and and was incredibly effective. he managed to hit one he fell
    from the sky crashing into the ground. the other Decepticon shaken by the defeat of his comrade flew of to alert megatron.

    now he was alone again confused and frightened the autobot rejected him up close and the decepticons couldn’t get near him. if he
    was neither then what was he. deciding that it was better to start moving he moved to the deception he had just defeated he was surprised
    to see he was still alive but barely. there was very little of his spark left thinking fast he started to build knowing the fading spark
    would not support a full body he created a smaller one from parts he could find. again he was shocked by his ability this came naturally to
    him. within a few hours he had constructed a small robotic body. not wanting to leave him defenceless he attached his mortar like weapon to
    body. he gave it an alternate form basing it of knowledge he had obtained from autobot scientist about of world species it became a wolf.
    finally he moved the almost completely extinguished spark from its old body and placed it in a new one. at first nothing but slowly the new
    lighter and less power reliant body came to life. its eyes lit up showing that it was alive. the new small robot moved it looked around
    it was alive but very primitive it managed to make a few snarls and growls but no talking. the protoform started to move of and left the
    new deception to return home but instead it followed him. "you don’t want to be with me I don’t belong in this world" he said but the little
    bot kept coming. it seemed to want to stay with him he had saved his life and was alone now to. after some time he decided to let him come
    with him. "ill call you mortar wolf" he thought he added to mortar wolfs body giving him the ability to combine with him and use his weapon.

    now no longer alone he travelled around cybertron trying to get close to either the autobots or decepticons each time he was attacked
    and although he could put up a good fight he ultimately he was outdone by the sheer numbers of both factions. now rejected by both sides
    and with only mortar wolf to to travel with he gave up. no longer would he try to become an autobot or Decepticon fed up with all the death
    that both sides would ultimately bring to each other and the rest of cybertron either by accident or on purpose deciding that in order to stop
    them and finally bring an end to the death on cybertron he needed his own army. he would need to build it in secret. he would travel to the battle
    fields after the fights had ended and bring the sparks of dead autobots and decepticons back online. he could only manage to bring back a small
    amount but enough to sustain life. as time went by he got better eventually making lieutenants and generals. all the knowledge he had gained only
    increased his multiple sparks increasing his learning capacity his now builds his own army of almost mindless but every loyal transformers. each one
    blindly following his orders with no regard for them selves. they raid autobot and decepticons supply trains.

    now set up deep below the surface of cybertron in the rubble of an ancient city. he slowly rebuilds preparing for the day when he can do that only
    thing that will save cybertron from war kill optimus and megatron. his name is now rejection his faction the rejecticons with mortar wolf by his side
    he leads them and waits in the darkness to clame what he never had life on a peaceful war free cybertron.

    cybertron hasn’t known freedom until its known Rejection

    wanna say thanks to rumsawatti for encouraging me cheers dude

    ps I know the way I did the faction symbol sucks I really like the shape I just cant use photo shop if some one out there wants to do me a really good version of it id really appreciate it oh and let me know what you think of had I had a blast doing him
     

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  2. ThinkTank Customs

    ThinkTank Customs TFW2005-Citizen

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    Awww this is cool ! :) 
     
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    -User deleted- alias 'Fujiwara'

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    Wow, nice color-combinaton! I love the green with a little bit purple, looks like my logo for customs :eek: 

    The axe is very great, it´s lego or?
     
  4. Ezilla82

    Ezilla82 Expect the Unexpected.

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    Very unique character. I like it.
     
  5. morgan1194

    morgan1194 kitbasher

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    you made an awesome repaint a hundred times better with that amazing back story
     
  6. Brooticus

    Brooticus "You bred Raptors?"

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    Nice paint job! Its refreshing when someone comes up with an original character, and the backstory is a really nice touch. I'd recommend running your backstory through a spelling and grammar checker however, as I'm sure it would make for a far more satisfying read.
     
  7. cheetor71

    cheetor71 Autobot

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    Great custom. Cool backstory. Nice job.
     
  8. hippymule

    hippymule Duocon

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    paint job reminds me of Toxitron
     
  9. SideswipePrime

    SideswipePrime Reply Dump Extraordinaire

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    lol i had the same idae, but it was to put optimus' head on swerve
     
  10. firebapx

    firebapx Starscream

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    thanks very much mate the axe was really simple to make its basically some bionical blades and a spare missle i have liying around think it makes a pretty good handle. im very proud of him fell free to ask me any other questions you may have
     
  11. firebapx

    firebapx Starscream

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    hey guys this guy will probably be going up on ebay on sunday ill post a link for you hes been reboxed in his origial packaging comes with the minicon and the axe you guys saw. if you think youll be intrested let me know and he still has his original gun.
     
  12. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    That freaking rocks. I'll have to reread the bio cuz its so long but i love a good back story. (spell check is your friend) I really dig the colors, the head, all of it.
     
  13. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    Mortar Wolf is also amazing by the way
     
  14. firebapx

    firebapx Starscream

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    hey guys ran the story throught a spell checker at the request of a few of you lol hope its easier to read now
     
  15. Superquad7

    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    I REALLY like this custom :thumb 

    Props for going down a relatively untrodden road :) 
     
  16. firebapx

    firebapx Starscream

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    hey guys kept his original box and i reboxed him think he looks really good now
     

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    Superquad7 We're only human. Super Mod

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    Post all eBay auctions in the eBay forum.
     
  18. firebapx

    firebapx Starscream

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    sorry didnt realise have done now
     
  19. Koolimus Prime

    Koolimus Prime Weapons Expert

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    It DOES look like Toxitron. [​IMG]
     
  20. exclusacon

    exclusacon Expert with the Scopes!

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    Nice job...
     

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