2D Artwork: WfC cartoon for upcoming stop motion

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  1. simonatmac

    simonatmac The stop motion maker

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    A little idea for my winter project. It shows what the movie will be about.

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    Nice
     
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    I think panel 5 is a bit abrupt and confusing, but otherwise this looks really cool! The illustrative style reminds me of Obsidian's Lament. :) 
     
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    Right.
    I´ll post another soon :sly2: 
     
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    Better strip:
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    reworked pic

    Sorry, cannot erase the picture above.

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    Who is the bot in panel 5? How does panel 5 connect with the rest of the story?

    I'm seriously not trying to be hard on you, but I just wanna know! :)  Also, if I didn't care, I wouldn't post :wink: 
     
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    I believe the character there is his custom WFC Quake. :) 

    Also, I'm curious as to what these Energon cubes are. Foam maybe?
     
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    You're probably right, but there's no way to ascertain this simply by reading this comic. Also, the inclusion is abrubt and doesn't make a lot of sense with the flow of the otherwise well-done comic. If the panel is completely omitted, nothing is lost with this story here.

    On the other hand, my comments are strictly pertaining to what is presented thus far. Since this is a comic strip for an upcoming stop motion animation, then I can see that something like this would be explained in a larger scope of a story.
     
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    Okay. It is Quake.
    And it´s a foam,[​IMG] which erases dirt from any surface.
    The reason I showed Quake, is: Let´s get them curious, hehehe

    Feedback is alway welcome, it can only help improve- If honest.
    Quake will have a minor part in the upcoming clip. It will help explain how he joined the Autobots.
    More I don´t want to reveal by now. Wait until the episode airs.
    Yes, episode. I plan on doing more (by the length of this project it may be called movie) 5 Minutes clips.
     

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