We Still Function: Redux

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  1. Im No Hero

    Im No Hero ze best reader

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    alot of you out there may recognize this title and me the creator of we still function but looking back on the last nine months i realized that we still function had taken a bad direction my story had become so convoluted and backwards and dialougue so bad and nonexistant i began to feel like the latest season of lost so i decided to start over dont worry the idea and plot of WSF is still the same but its been cleaned up and the dialouge is ten times better so those of you who were already reader have reason to reread but new readers will not be lost dont worry everyone soon enough i catch back up to were the old story left off and nothing will have changed drastically but for now, without further ado i give you...

    We Still Function: Redux: ep.1 Shizzy McCreppy
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  2. Fez Findie

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    Aah that typical "toys in the attic"-situation?

    :popcorn 
     
  3. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Off to a good start I like it.
     
  4. Autobus Prime

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    :popcorn 

    Rebooting for improved "Function", eh? :) 

    Will be cool to see where it goes.

    Is the glove there to help you catch up? :D 
     
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    Okay, I have to say this is looking better, just in terms of dialogue, spelling, and picture quality. :thumb  Although that big sentence explaining everything could have used a period or two. You wrote a paragraph and the only periods were at the end. :lol 

    Like you said, the plot looks to be the same, but already I can see it's going to be different. For example, the things I mentioned above. But there's also the fact that you've got some new characters replacing old ones. Like I only see Dustorm and two of the Minicons from the original crew there.

    So I eagerly await more. :popcorn 
     
  6. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    A redo of We Still Function? Sweet!

    Some of the dialogue in the first three panels were hard to read, given the background, and the dialogue in the second panel doesn't seem to sound right, but otherwise this is a good start for a redo of your comic. Looking forward to reading more. :popcorn 
     
  7. Im No Hero

    Im No Hero ze best reader

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    ya well i just felt like so many minicons werent necesary and since at the time of the original comics i had veryt few figures the roles orginaly intended for rhinox BA and alt prime were replaced with energon prime smokescreen and airazor but now since i have those figs i can use them so the only three main original characters still there are highwire (duh) duststorm and sonar


    ya in the second panel there a were werent thing tht should be changed but im to lazy
     
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    New reader here, looking forward to seeing more. :popcorn 
     
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    Strarf Crystal Convoy no more TFW2005 Supporter

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    So you rebooted huh? :popcorn 
     
  10. weeklyhero

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    Hey a new jumping on point! I missed the original one, so I'm glad I can start over here.
     
  11. Im No Hero

    Im No Hero ze best reader

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    ok guys its time for an update im sorry its taken so long but im a busy man... but on the good side i just got photoshop so how bout some high quality effects and more frequent updates coming soon.


    we still function redux ep. 2: on the Prowl
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    btw did i mention this update is only a short tease for the next one :p 

    edit:fixed
     
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    :popcorn 
     
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    :popcorn 
     
  14. Sharktibolt

    Sharktibolt Well-Known Member

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    I will assume 'them' is the list of peopkle Prowl's system went through and labeled MIA, POW, or DEAD. :popcorn 

    And I couldn't help but laugh at Rhinox's first line: 'Shut up you fools. I have a life to save' :lol 
     
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  16. Im No Hero

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    why yes it is actally and if u read very closely u might be able to figure some of the future out
     
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    ok guys no im not updating WSF but i am updating something a new strip whos name is pending so i want suggestions this new strip is told with NO text and is centered around (for now) a fight between a malicious arnval and a poor landmine repaint named armorhide so without further ado heres the first strip

    p.s. if i get multiple name sggestions i might put up a poll to decide if i cant do so myself.

    comic #1: heads up
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  18. Sharktibolt

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    Just remember that if you do make a poll for the name, it's there for good.

    For a name, I suggest.....Arnval Against Armorhide?

    Getting AHEAD In Life? :)  I dunno....
     
  19. Ironhide2005

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    Stop while your a head?
     
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    :) 

    Looks like Inferno got in ahead of Landmine, too.
     

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