Warring at Play

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  1. Polenicus

    Polenicus Warring At Play

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    YES! You get the Golden Twinkie!

    I thought that one was too obscure for ANYONE to get.
     
  2. Polenicus

    Polenicus Warring At Play

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    And here's the next installment!

    I've got a new camera, so some shots were with the new one, some with the old. Also, my lighting situation isn't the best. That's the next thing for me to try and improve on.

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  3. Polenicus

    Polenicus Warring At Play

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  4. Grimwing

    Grimwing Scientist Supreme

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    nice explosions. The missle deployment itself is quite a feat.:thumb 
     
  5. Polenicus

    Polenicus Warring At Play

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  6. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    WOAH!!!! Bring it!
     
  7. Icespark

    Icespark A Spark in the Darkness

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    Your doing a great job of giving the characters good personalities and characterization, and your special effects are still great! I look forward to your next update!
     
  8. DilaZirK

    DilaZirK Is bullheaded.

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    Ahh...this explains a lot about that lastshot, but raises even more.

    Liking Arnval and Strarf's personality here! Arnval seems to be rather mild mannered, while Strarf is obviously the more hot-headed of the two.

    And great explosion FX! I'm not having much luck trying to get mine to look right.
    It's missing something though... I think Pun-3X adds quite a bit of debris and smoke to his boomy FX.
     
  9. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    You've reaised very high expectations from your strips and now I know why, they rock!! Keep up the goodwork!
     
  10. ShadowDragon

    ShadowDragon R to the D to the D yo.

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    Very cool!
     
  11. Polenicus

    Polenicus Warring At Play

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    Thanks, I'm kinda proud of the explosions myself. I still need to find the right brush and technique to do good smoke and debris, I'm basically learning as I go. But these ones are head and shoulders above any I've managed so far.

    As for Arnval and Strarf, I'm trying to play on the whole 'Devil and Angel' angle, while mixing in a bit of Dirty Pair comraderie. In other words, these two will hardly ever agree on ANYTHING, but when the chips are down they've got each other's backs.
     
  12. Eric

    Eric RIP AND TEAR!!!

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    Awesome. Can't wait to see what happens! :) 
     
  13. Polenicus

    Polenicus Warring At Play

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    Okay, got some more to post!

    I'm not entirely happy with my motion blur techniques, especially for that damn box *Sigh* Ah well, I'll improve as I go.

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    Polenicus Warring At Play

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  17. NotAnAutobot

    NotAnAutobot Jus' makin' some comics..

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    Wow.
    Awesome. Skywarp=beast.
     
  18. Eric

    Eric RIP AND TEAR!!!

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    Loving Skywarp right now. "LITTLE WORMS!!"
     
  19. TCracker

    TCracker おもちゃは今とても暑いです

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    Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! YOu rock very hard!!:rock 
     
  20. Tomiku

    Tomiku black repaint fetishist

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    Woah. I mean, holy $#!+. Skywarp > the Hulk. If they don't get their super-modes working, like, NOW, and no Autobots show up in the next 30 seconds, what's left of the Shinkis will not be visible to the naked eye. (hey, I put "Shinkis" and "naked" in the same sentence without sounding perverted! Woo!)

    "What does it shoot, stern warnings?" XD

    And sorry, I have to do it. "This hand of mine glows with an awesome POWAH! Its burning grip tells me to defeat you! SHINIIIIIING PEA SHOOTERRRR!!!" lol

    Now, some feedback on the visuals. That was a very nice, accurate-looking HUD in the Skywarp's PoV panel. Now, earlier on when you edited in Skywarp's shadow; I won't get into lighting angles and how they skew shadow shapes and all the super-technical stuff, but I will say the shadow's nosecone tip got cut off. I can see the corresponding part on 'Warpie is cropped out of the picture, so just be careful.
     

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