warpath's story part one

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  1. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    hi, this is my first fanfic ever, so be nice on the commets.

    note: there will be no size changing in this. and there will be characters from all series.


    hi, i'm warpath, and i was bult to fight. but that does not mean i don't have a spark, and it doesnt mean that i don't have feelings ether. i may be a killing machine, but dammit i fight for my felloe autobots! so doesnt that mean i have a spark? i give my life for peaple, but all they do for me is call me names like ''freak, killing machine, and psycho.'' and some of the reason thay call me names is becouse i will radomly say things like ''kaboom!, kazowy!, blam!.''

    and this is the story of how i became the killing machine that i am today.

    millions of years ago on cybertron. autobot headquarters:

    hound and cliffjumper are guarding outside. and they see in the sky seekers droping things. they right away go and see what they are droping from the sky, but by the time they get there it's to late, the seekers got away. so hound take's a look at what they drop and his face look like he saw a ghost.

    cliffjumper looks at hound. ''hound what's wrong? what did they drop.?'' looking somewhat scared.

    than hound looks at cliffjumper ''they dro...they droped bodies!.'' still looking scared.

    than cliffjumper said. ''what the heck?! we have to take these to optimus.''so than thay toke the bodies inside and optimus prime look at the bodies and said.

    ''oh no.'' looking skock and sad.
    than he said. ''take these to ratchet.'' so than they went to ratchet with the bodies.
    hound than said to ratchet. ''we need to know who these bodies are ASAP.'' saying it very fast.
    ratchet looks at the bodies and sez. ''ok,wait a sec.'' he than looks at the bodies again and said.
    ''i know who they are, the bodies are.......
    to be continued.

    hope you all like it. and vote on who do you want to be the five dead bodies, they can be from any series g1, beast wars, ect. part 2 is coming soon.
     
  2. Sage o' G-fruit

    Sage o' G-fruit Critics gonna critique

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    Good, I'm so happy that someone else here knows how to use . ? ! "" correctly.

    This is very good!
     
  3. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    thanks! i'm having part two done by tomorrow. if you could, tell me who do you want to be the dead bodies.
     
  4. deltaprime

    deltaprime The Christian Transfan

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    Five bodies? A combiner team perhaps?

    I like it so far. I've always thought Warpath was pretty cool.
     
  5. Crazymadman

    Crazymadman Dewbot leader

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    Hmm, a combiner.

    Yeah, Warpath is pure awesome.
     
  6. Mini-Bot

    Mini-Bot Blackout Fan Girl

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    This is pretty good for your first fan fiction. ^^
     
  7. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    HELL YES LOVE WARPATH!!!!Wheelie and hotshot as two.
     

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