Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by star11scream, Oct 31, 2008.
A war that lasted for ions has never come to a rest.
Cool beginning. just need to make the font a little bigger, it's kinda hard to read.
By the way, board rules specify 300 High x 500 wide x 40kb size on your signature pics. You might want to change yours before mods simply delete it and replace it with what I just said.
Happy Halloween! can't wait to see what's next!
I agree with everything Otispq has said. But otherwise a good comic.
Wow! Congrats on the great begining! You've rerally peaked my interest. Can't wait for the next instalment
Yes. Can't wait to see more though.
A lot better now that it has larger text. Couldn't really read it before hand. It is coming along nice.
Pretty good. I like this one better than your first.
Nice effects! I really like that trapezoidal(?) lens flare, that's cool. the negative effects are different also, but work well. You could use some more light, unless that's the look your going for, in which case its just fine.
Keep 'em coming!
I wanted it to br dark
This looks really cool, but (as it's been mentioned) the font is too small and hard to read. I'd simply suggest choosing a different font that is not as narrow and upping the font size
Hey... that negative effect is actually quite clever and might be somethin' that people will remember this comic from in a good way Kinda like a trademark or so, if used right
Also, ya really do give off the feelin' of just somethin' big havin' happenin' and now people tryin' to react to it as quickly as possible and all that.
Cool. Good start.
Very cool! The larger text in the second update was much easier to read. I'll look forward to your next update!
Nice second update.
My BT Sunstreaker doen't have the black racing stripes--did you do those yourself, or were there different versions of him made?
You own a BT Sunstreaker, I own a AT[Alternators] Sunstreaker
Nice use of the lens flare, here, especially in the frame where Dropshot rams Sunstreaker-really felt like a good, crunching impact. Also nice speed effects on the alts.
The font size does need to go up a bit though.
And yeah, Alt Sunstreaker comes with his racing stripes pre-made, plus a bit more red on his arms, I think.
Awesome fight scene, but it took three tries for me to read the black lettering in the first panel. And man, that is some cool funky shaggy pillow things!
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