Vengeance of Bumblebee

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  1. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl

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    Very good story so far. Please keep it up.
     
  2. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    First fight scene update 1/3

    Ok,first of all, sorry for the lame effects this time around, I'm learning so cut me some slack. We've all had to at some time. Second, I shot the whole update and since it contains a fight scene it is incredibly LONG. So I'm breaking it up into 2-3 parts. I don't think I'll have time to retrieve the pics from email, edit them, upload to Flickr, then upload here all tonight, but the beginning definitely.

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    Could this be the early end of Bumblebee? Stay tuned to find out tomorrow!


    ...ok that was a bad cliffhanger. Obviously I can't kill off the main character in the third part that would be stupid. But who knows if he will come out in one piece or concious at all. What if he dies and comes back later, what if he gets a devastating injury? OR, what if ANOTHER character dies.

    Questions questions questions. Those answers will come soon. But don't lose sleep over it :) lol just kidding. It is that exciting.... yet......)
     
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    Yay! BB and Barricade fight! :popcorn 

    Eh, don't worry about the FX. If it makes you feel better, I'm still learning how to do certain FX.
     
  4. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    It's all good dude, no need to apologize :thumbs2: 

    Yellow Jacket is known for making awkward remarks about stuff so try to get used to silly stuff coming out of him.

    Oh, that's not BARRICADE Barricade. It's just mini Barry which I haven't really named (I'm planning to) who is kind of like the Yellow Jacket of the Decepticons. He is small, annoying, and overly energetic but has a heart of pure evil (the flip side for Yellow Jacket, he has a heart of gold). You'll see big Barry in action soon enough.
     
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  6. grimlock1972

    grimlock1972 Optimus, serving up the primest of ribs since 1984

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    okies lol
     
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    Mini-Bot Blackout Fan Girl

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    Awwww Mini Barry! :lol 

    :popcorn  Can't wait to see what happens next.
     
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    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Awesome update! :thumb  Can't wait to see what happens to Bumblebee! Hopefully he can come out of this in one piece.
     
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    :popcorn :popcorn :popcorn 
     
  10. Autobot_Wall-E

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    Sorry that I didn't update it earlier. I meant to but I have 2 major tests and a quiz with pretty high stakes tomorrow so I've been studying a lot. Plus getting this and the next update I'm posting right after this one was no simple or swift task but here it is enjoy.

    One final point before you read please read this even if you skipped the boring intro paragraph I cut a whole lot of stuff out of this strip for time and space reasons. Can't be too long and I have a life so if the fight seems jumpy and confusing I am sorry, the next fight will be much more coordinated and planned ahead (I made this fight up as I went along).

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  12. Autobot_Wall-E

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    Next part of the update. The writing I saved for the end. It's NOT boring so you can read it :) 

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    There is a short little bit with Smokescreen and the Twins back in Autobot HQ and a sort of big thing happens in the comic. More Decepticons come into play, an emotional part, then on to the story launching into the main body of the plot. Next update will lead into this. I'll have part up tomorrow, then part on Friday. I might just take the weekend off, but I'll shoot pics at least.

    Glad to see people are liking this. Much better response than in my first one :lol 
     
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    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Great update! :lolol  at Little Bee "This is sparta!" ! Keep it up :thumb 
     
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    :lol  sparta kick
     
  16. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Nice save from Yellow jacket there. Also, kudos on Bumblebee's facial expressions, they work very well. So has Smokescreen permanently lost his legs or are they just in the workshop being fixed?

    edit: Trouble back at the base? That sounds ominous...
     
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  18. Autobot_Wall-E

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    Very Small Update

    Probably the smallest update ever made (other than one shots) here is what was happening back at the base while Bumblebee was out and about :) lol)

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    To Coolhand or whoever asked this: Smokescreen has permanently lost his legs. Since there is no Ratchet there really is no medical help. He transformed his legs into vehicle mode and was never able to transform back. In my fan fic that finishes up Transformers in the House all will be explained. Or maybe a flashback would be better. I'll be making these decisions later on in the story. Tomorrow should be a pretty big update but I was so tired today.
     
  19. prime13

    prime13 UCHUU KITAAAA

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    "captain tech support!" :lolol 
     
  20. grimlock1972

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    go yellow jacket! kick then ball bearing for a field goal! and uh oh there by trouble a comming