Vengeance of Bumblebee

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  1. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    My new comic since TFs in the House was a bust. Enjoy. (This is the sequel btw)

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    Transformers in the House had a very small (and very awesome) audience but it was supposed to be funny but failed at it. So this will be a serious (as you can see) and hopefully epic comic.

    I am part of the FFC, the Federation for Funnies Creators and we want to be a faction like the Radicons so spread the word and join!

    This comic is, oddly enough, set 10 years after the events of Transformers in the House (what was posted of it anyway). I will be writing the rest of that story, but in Fan Fic form. Check that forum soon for that because it will be sort of prequel-ish to this and important things happen there that will affect the comic. TFs in the House fans might remember silly little Yellow Jacket and whether you hated or loved him: he's back.

    Please post comments if you like or don't like it... I won't get offended. All criticism will be accepted. And please enjoy this comic (hopefully more than the first lol).
     
  2. Mini-Bot

    Mini-Bot Blackout Fan Girl

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    Hmmm seems like an interesting start. :D 

    :popcorn 
     
  3. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    I concur with Mini-Bot. A very good start.

    Looking forward to reading more. :popcorn 
     
  4. Strarf

    Strarf Crystal Convoy no more TFW2005 Supporter

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    :popcorn 
     
  5. grimlock1972

    grimlock1972 "No Mas" My Wallet

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    a good start indeed now mini pass the popcorn :popcorn 
     
  6. Magmatron22

    Magmatron22 HADOUKEN!!!

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    :popcorn oooh I like it! Great start! :thumbs2:  plus I like the camera shots in this one, alot brighter and less dark. :) 
     
  7. swampert123

    swampert123 Team Metal

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    nice man !! :popcorn 
     
  8. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Interesting. Can't wait to read more! :thumb 
     
  9. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    A nice strong start there. Sets up the background of the world and establishes some early plot points, such as Prime missing on his quest, Bumblebee's obvious rage about how things have turned out. Also some nice, emotive poses from Bee there, such as the raised, clenched fist in the last panel. You've also used different camera angles well, and they really add to the mood and visual interest of the strip.
    Good stuff.:thumbs2: 

    Time for a CCC! (Coolhand constructive criticism.) I've noticed that some of the shots are a little blurred or a little dark and speckly (I think the proper term is "noise", it's more noticeable on the dark areas of the photographs, that speckled, grainy effect.) I know that sometimes there's not a lot that can be done about this due to camera limitations, but here are some things you might want to try. If you camera has a macro or super macro setting for taking in focus close-ups, this can really help getting nice sharp images of TFs. Also, if your camera has a setting to increase the exposure time of the shot, this helps to get lighter looking photographs in an environment with limited light. Fiddling with ISO settings on the camera can also help in this regard.

    Also, shining a torch or a cheap LCD spotlight into the shot can work wonders for lighting. I know it's a lot of effort and fiddling, but the improving quality of the basic photographs in a comic can really help to suck people into the story.

    Just my :2c: 
    Looking forward to the next update.:) 
     
  10. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Thanks Coolhand.

    I got kind of frustrated actually because when I started taking pictures for this (I ended up cutting these scenes because they just didnt fit the tone and introduced a few characters a bit too early...) were perfect and clear and just so awesome but these just suck quality wise.

    I am going to ask my dad if I can use his good camera for future panels but for now please bear with me and my crap camera :( 

    Btw, Im a fan of Out of the Dead Land :D 
     
  11. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Ok an update. Like I said before I am trying everything to get my current camera quality up but again please bear with me :redface2: 

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    Alright there it is. I'm not sure if I'll be able to update this every day like I have but I'll try to do it often. Till next time. Sorry again for the blurry pictures.
     
  12. grimlock1972

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    poor smokescreen and bumblebee has had it it seems
     
  13. Magmatron22

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    nice computer screen effects! :thumbs2:  I'm also liking smokescreens character so far.
     
  14. Strarf

    Strarf Crystal Convoy no more TFW2005 Supporter

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  15. Attacker_Prime

    Attacker_Prime Optimus Prime forever

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    Great update! :thumb  Could we expect a battle in the next update?
     
  16. Autobot_Wall-E

    Autobot_Wall-E The Musical

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    Nope sorry :p  But in the update after this one you can! We still haven't seen the rest of the surviving Autobots.

    I have a whole lot of free time today so expect two or maybe even THREE updates. By the end of the day hopefully you'll get a better feel for where the story will be going.

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    As you can see, the Twins and Yellow Jacket haven't changed much. Actually, Bumblebee is pretty much the same cynical downer he was in TFs ITH.

    But anyway, you get your fight seen next update Attacker and you get to see some of the bad guys (some).
     
  17. grimlock1972

    grimlock1972 "No Mas" My Wallet

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    very well done , but the buddy system while lubricating? o_O 
     
  18. Autobot_Wall-E

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    Please don't think of this the wrong way people. I just added that as partly a joke and partly to show how serious Smokescreen was about being prepared and not facing a Decepticon alone.
     
  19. Strarf

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    :popcorn 
     
  20. grimlock1972

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    okay sorry it just sounded odd is all
     

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