(Unofficial) TF: The Motion Picture Screenplay

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  1. GeeWerX

    GeeWerX Member

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    As I said before, I'm currently working on my own rough draft screenplay.

    I hate to tease you, but I'm only enclosing the first 30 or so minutes of the film in .PDF format.

    Please leave your comments and suggestions here.

    Remember, this is only a rough draft. It might go through several drafts before a polished script is done.

    Enjoy!

    Screenplay is Here!!
     
  2. Neil-o-Mac

    Neil-o-Mac New Member

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    That is friggin' awesome. :) 
     
  3. Hakudoushi

    Hakudoushi Well-Known Member

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    Oh! More more more!
    Its so cool!
     
  4. GeeWerX

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    Updated!! Woo-hoo

    The script is updated!! :) 

    Thanks for your comments guys! I'm really, really loving how it's turning out.

    First character appearances are in the script, so check it out.

    Enjoy and post your comments.

    Later!

    Click here for updated version!
     
  5. Sledgehammer

    Sledgehammer Digital art monkey

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    Wow, not bad at all! A pacey storyline full of intrigue and suspense, and sharp dialogue between solid, believable characters...and things haven't even kicked off yet!

    Great stuff, GW...looking forward not only to the next update, but seeing how your vision compares to the movie itself!

    Rob *who seems to be wishing his life away...why can't it be Summer 2006 already?*
     
  6. GeeWerX

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    The movie script is updated!! General reaction is great!! Let me know what you think of this fan project. We're nearing the first half of the movie and I must say things will get better from here on out. Enjoy!!

    Fan Screenplay is HERE
     
  7. Hakudoushi

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    Sweet! Things are begining to pick up! This is great. I hope you update soon!!!
     
  8. Prime Target

    Prime Target Mecha Spirit of Soundwave

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    You might want to mention that your script can only be viewed with PDF software.

    Opinion: Not bad! :) 
     
  9. GeeWerX

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    Hey, guys. I couldn't find the other thread, so I decided to update in a new one.

    Anyways, we've updated again with even more screentime for those big bots. Catch the action packed battle between the Autobots and Decepticons. This is the full first battle. At this point, the screenplay is well over half complete. More updates coming soon.

    Note: The screenplay is in .PDF format, so you'll need Adobe Acrobat Reader to view it.

    Enjoy!

    Fan Screenplay is HERE
     
  10. Hakudoushi

    Hakudoushi Well-Known Member

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    That was killer sweet. I hope you update as quick as you did this chapter. :rock 
     
  11. GeeWerX

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    Thanks a lot man, glad you're enjoying it! I must admit, it's a lot of fun. Challenging, but I promise it will all pay off. The plot will thicken, tensions will heighten, and all will be revealed. I think the ending will really interest everyone, as it won't be expected.

    At all.

    More coming soon!
     
  12. Sledgehammer

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    Bloody fantastic, really enjoying this! And nice to see Bumblebee getting in on the action as well! :thumb 

    Rob
     
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    Script is updated! Added a new scene, including a rewrite of Spike's first appearance. Offers more insight into the theme of the story.

    Here is is!!
     
  14. Ops_was_a_truck

    Ops_was_a_truck JOOOLIE ANDREWWWWWS!!!!!!

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    GW, I just wanted to let you know - I stayed up really late reading that script. And...

    ...goddamnit, it's good. I can only pray that the movie we see in theatres is as good as the script I read.

    You are a HELL of a writer; the progress of the plot is well-paced, the dialogue is plausible (i.e., I could believe film characters interacting the way you've written them) and the buildup...oh, too good. Great little references to the G1 series.

    Oh man...if only we could just rush this to Hollywood...
     
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    Updated!

    Things are lining up. More secrets revealed. Enjoy!

    Here it is!!
     
  16. Hakudoushi

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    MORE MORE MORE!!! Please more! :D 


    That kicked ass!

    Update soon! :rock 







    :confused2 
     
  17. Xaxis

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    Great script so far! I loved the part with Bumblebee and Ravage. Can't wait to read more.
     
  18. Xaxis

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    Ummmmmm...you still working on this or did it lose steam?
     
  19. GrungeWerX

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    There are more pages added to the script. I didn't want to make an update until it was finished (which it almost is), but you can click on any of the links before this post to read more. Finally the secrets have been revealed. Enjoy!
     
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    Cool, thanks!
     

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