United as One

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  1. Abyss Convoy

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    Transformers: United as One

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  2. Abyss Convoy

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  3. Abyss Convoy

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    Nice comic. Love the effects. I look forward to reading more.

    Though, I don't see the need to post, say, 2 comic panels in one post and then post with another 2-4 panels in another post. Take a look at how many panels all the other Funnies creators post in a single update; most Funnies creators post 10 or more comic panels within a single post, which I personally think makes it easier for people to follow what's going on in the comic, compared to reading only 2-4 at a time. Just something to think about for the next time you make a comic update.
     
  5. Polenicus

    Polenicus Warring At Play

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    Nice new entry!

    Can't comment on the story at this early stage, but so far this looks promising. Nice clear pics, excellent effects, and I like what you did with your text (Less obtrusive than text boxes.)

    You've definitely got a promising beginning here. I look forward to seeing more!
     
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    Oo. This looks to be interesting.

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    Looks like its off to a good start :) 
     
  9. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    I'm LOVING the clarity of the pics, but I agree with TC, just wait until you have a good chunk of pics ready, then put them together in one post. So it doesn't clutter up the thread.
     
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    First comic with Topspin in the lead, If you dont kill him. Then count me in the subscribing.

    Also I like the effects :) 
     
  11. Grimlock_13

    Grimlock_13 Reformed Geewunner

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    Great job thus far :thumb 
     
  12. Abyss Convoy

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    Ooo! Do I feel a story developing?

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    Yeah, will change my style in the future posts. Thanks for the feedback :) 

    Thanks :)  Continue to enjoy the upcoming strips lol.
     
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    Interesting.

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    Very interesting. Definitely, I'm subscribing to this comic. *Whips out :popcorn *
     
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    DOOMPRIME SUPER MEGA LET IT GO!

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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    Great Little Comic going on here. :thumb 
     

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