Underworld of my World

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  1. bonbon

    bonbon Dangerous Toy

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    hi guys, I was a fan of Warring at play and other comics I read here in Transformers Funnies. It made me interesting, always wait for updates and pursue a dedication to my friends and kids. So as inspiration, I starting to do comics. I'm not perfectly dealing in English grammar matters but will do my best.

    So, I have a story which maybe interested:)  for all of you. As a simple man, a toy collector and customizer, here is the first shot episode that will make you tease and excite... The story is influence on Warring at Play (thanks you inspire me a lot, idol Polenicus).


    Title: Underworld of my World

    Chapter 1
    Episode 1: Superion's Life Forms

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    ... hope you enjoy...
     
  2. Noise Maker

    Noise Maker Well-Known Member

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    Nice start. You've got me interested.
     
  3. bonbon

    bonbon Dangerous Toy

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    tnx Noise maker :) 
     
  4. bonbon

    bonbon Dangerous Toy

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    Episode two: Te Magnetic Spark

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  5. biscuits

    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    Nice customs, and your English is pretty good!
     
  6. Wars

    Wars Regular At Swerve's™

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    A very nice start, though I would suggest you work on your grammer a bit more, it's a little hard to read. Other then that its pretty good. Nice customs too!
     
  7. Noise Maker

    Noise Maker Well-Known Member

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    :popcorn 

    Interesting plot. The Magnetic Spark reminds me of Dark Energon, since it brings the dead back to life and everything.
     
  8. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    :popcorn 

    I like this comic so far, keep it up.:thumb 
     
  9. bonbon

    bonbon Dangerous Toy

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    oh.. i'm shock in your comments.. thank you guys.. will update every weekend..
     
  10. Ironhide2005

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    This is a great little comic you got here. Looking forward to more!
     
  11. ectoneon

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    Nice start. Interesting concept with the magnetic spark. Also I enjoyed the "toy story" bit with them paying dead as you made a cameo appearance. And of course, Your customs are just awesome eye candy! Man, Every single figure here looks better than ever. Especially that prime and Fallen. Great work, Keep it up.
     
  12. bonbon

    bonbon Dangerous Toy

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    thank you very much ectoneon.The story will play seriously within different sparks, history of primes and more characters will come up like marvel characters.
     
  13. bonbon

    bonbon Dangerous Toy

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    NOTED:
    Sorry guys I was accedentally lost the toy character name "von". SO i made another custom for it and change the place settings.

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    Here's the new update of Underworld of my World
    Episode three: Decepticon's Priority

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    Hope you enjoy
     
    Last edited: Dec 5, 2010
  14. ectoneon

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    Get ready for a fight! Also, lol at beast
     
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    bonbon Dangerous Toy

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    New update of Underworld of my World
    Episode four: Onslaught's Counter Attack

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    Hope you enjoy
     
  16. Noise Maker

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    Pretty intense battle. :popcorn 
     

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