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Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by Prime9409, Aug 17, 2011.

  1. Prime9409

    Prime9409 Well-Known Member

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    Finally, I've started writing my own script for a TRANSFORMERS movie reboot.

    Before I get Started writing, I should introduce the autobots first.

    Optronix /Optimus Prime

    Bumblebee

    Prowl

    Ratchet

    Bulkhead

    Mirage

    Sentinel Prime

    Jazz

    Ironhide

    Sunstreaker
     
  2. dino1216

    dino1216 dino1999

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    Cool! cant wait to read the story!
     
  3. Prime9409

    Prime9409 Well-Known Member

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    The Decepticons:

    Megatron

    Starscream

    Skywarp

    Thrust

    Brawl

    Cyclonus

    Jetfire

    Soundwave

    Frenzy

    Rumble

    Tidal Wave drones

    Vehicons
     
  4. SavageThunder

    SavageThunder 11th Doctor's Huntress

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    when do u think your reboot might be up, my friend? it sounds awesome!
     
  5. optimegatron

    optimegatron Not over, not finished.

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    Sounds really good in terms of originality and creativity.
    But no plot details? TEEEEAAAASER!
     
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  6. Jazzfan0217

    Jazzfan0217 Just chillin'

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    sounds cool :thumb 
     
  7. Prime9409

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    TEASER FOR TRANSFORMERS!!

    (PITCH BLACK SCREEN. AFTER SEVERAL SECONDS, A LIGHT ILLUMINATES TO REVEAL A SHOT OF EARTH. METALLIC LETTERS SOON APPEAR.

    FOR MILLENIA, WE THOUGHT OURSELVES ALONE...​

    (Pan right and behind the moon a vortex opens. Several blasts of energy emerge from the vortex before the screen cuts to black.)

    WE WERE WRONG...

    (Shift scene to prehistoric earth. Dinosaurs roam the land. A velociraptor prepares to pounce on an unsuspecting prey when a loud boom is heard. It looks up to the sky and it beholds to gigantic balls of flames falling to land in seperate directions.)

    (Close-up on the velociraptors eye reveals a large atomic explosion just a bright light envelops it.)

    (For several seconds the screen is blank, then it slowly reveals the aftermath of the event. The velociraptor is now a skeletal body, surrounding it lush jungle that had just been destroyed by a nuclear winter.)

    (Pan over all the destruction and a massive construct is covered by ash.)

    IN SPRING OF 2012. A WAR ONCE THOUGHT OVER...

    ( Close up on a large wing. A gust of wind blows away the ash to reveal... THE AUTOBOT SYMBOL!)

    (Cut to black.)

    WILL BEGIN ANEW.

    TRANSFORMERS.
     
  8. Jazzfan0217

    Jazzfan0217 Just chillin'

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    dude this sounds awesome !!! :thumb  !!!
     
  9. SavageThunder

    SavageThunder 11th Doctor's Huntress

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    great crudballs! lets get this new STORY KICKIN! WWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!:crazy: 
     
  10. Prime9409

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    TRANSFORMERS

    (Pitch black screen. Slowly it desolves into a shot of space and a vast metalic sphere comes into view. Zoom in onto the surface of the planet, scorch marks, craters from explosions, and billions of bodys laid dead on the ground. The voice of Optimus Prime, as played by Liam Neeson, begins a narration.)

    Optimus Prime: War. The most primal and devastating trait of any race, Has consumed our Home, Cybertron into an endless Civil war.

    ( Then an earthquake is heard. A glass building shakes and breaks apart to reveal a golden transport ship erupting from it. It rises slowly until the ship accelerates. Shift scene to the inside of the ship, Various forms are moving throughout the ship, they are covered by shadows. The tallest one stands and makes a mothion with his right arm as if to advance forward.)

    Optimus Prime: We the Autobots, the Sworn and Dedicated defenders of Life and Freedom, have left our shattered homeworld. We are on a mission, a mission to find the allspark. A device with the power to restore whole worlds. Yet we must find it before our enemies...

    (Suddenly, the ship shakes from an explosion and the tall being looks on a monitor screen. Shift to a view of the Ships exterior, it is being rocked with Missiles and Blaster beams. The camera pans up to reveal the source of the firing, It was a battleship. It was 4 times the size of the transport, it has a large crest on the bow. )

    Optimus Prime: The Decepticons.

    (Back inside the transport, The tallest one ran to a control panel. It presses a button. Outside, the ship fires a beam which becomes a vortex. The transport enters first. The warship follows it through, still firing at it. Then a shot of prehistoric Earth appears.)

    EARTH, APPROX. 300 MILLION YEARS AGO...

    (Near the moon, A vortex opens. As it widens, the transport emerges from it and is badly damaged. The warship then appears with its turrets aimed and firing at the smaller ship. The transport's main engine explodes, inside the command deck, several forms are thrown about the room. A small being with some shades of yellow finds the button to the only weapon on board. It presses the button. On the exterior of the ship, a large beam appears and slices the warship in half. The warship begins to lower its altitude and slowly descends onto the Earth, The transport, having wasted it's power on the weapon, begins to do the same. Inside the small ship, The tall figure stand and turns on a computer. A holographic screen appears. The figure is then illuminated and is revealed as Optimus Prime. He recites in Cybertronian.)

    Optimus Prime: TELETRAAN-1. USER RECOGNIZE OPTIMUS PRIME. ACTIVATE EMERGENCY ESCAPE!

    Teletraan-1: COMPLYING. ACTIVATED.

    (Then all the Autobots present entered stasis pods. They enter the pods. The yellow one, now clearly Bumblebee, cries out for his leader.)

    Bumblebee: SIR! GET TO YOUR STASIS POD!

    Optimus Prime: I HAVE TO NAVIGATE THE SHIP. WHEN WE EXIT STASIS MODE. I'LL SEND MY COORDINATES TO ALL OF YOU. GET IN YOUR POD, THAT'S AN ORDER!

    Bumblebee: YES SIR!

    (Bumbleebe then enters his pod and and goes into stasis. One by one, the pods eject from the ship. Outside the ship, Hundredths of pods are seen ejecting and preparing for their arrival on Earth. Beside the ship, The decepticon warship collapses and seperates into two parts. One heading for North America, The other heading for Africa.)

    (Meanwhile on earth, A velociraptor is preparing to pounce it's prey. Before it does so, it is blocked by a stampede of panicked dinosaurs. It looks up to see two bright objects falling from the sky. Close up on its eye, a bright light envelop its iris. As the eye widen, the screen goes to black.)

    Optimus: Although we left Cybertron, our war has followed us here. To this strange planet, which in several million years will soon to be called... Earth.

    (Inside the crashed transport, Optimus Prime lays motionless on the controls. As time moves on, Fauna, grime, and moss grow on him. Until...)

    EARTH. PRESENT DAY)

    (His eyes come back to life with a bright blue light. The camera enters his eye, several mechanisms are moving until they Form the Title.)

    Part 2 coming soon...
     
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    Jazzfan0217 Just chillin'

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    interesting start :thumb  can't wait for part 2 :D  !!!
     
  12. Prime9409

    Prime9409 Well-Known Member

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    I've just cast the Autobot voices:

    Optimus Prime (Peter Weller)

    Bumblebee (Neil Patrick Harris)

    Prowl (Nathan Fillion)

    Ratchet (Jeff Bridges)

    Bulkhead (John Dimaggio)

    Mirage (Dan Aykroyd)

    Sentinel Prime (Peter Cullen)

    Jazz ( Edris Elba)

    Ironhide (Lance Henricksen)

    Sunstreaker (Josh Radnor)
     

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