Transformers: Voyage

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  1. cybertron2006

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    Here's a new fan-fic that is about the ongoing war with the Autobots and their leaders, Nitro Prime and Jetis Prime, against the Decepticons and their leader, Zarakatron.

    here are the characters:

    Autobots
    Jetis Prime (Nova Prime's successor) (Second in Command)
    Riptide (Underwater Operations Commander)
    Nitro Prime (Cyberblast Prime's successor) (Supreme Commander)
    Heavydrive (Weapons Supplier)
    Twin Start (Twincast's successor) (Audio Comunnications Expert)
    Braindrain (unfortunately Wheelie's successor) (Hypnotist)
    Alpha Prime (Nova Prime's older brother)

    Decepticons
    Zarakatron (Megatron's successor) (Leader)
    Bulkhead (Military Commander)
    Thunderwire (Marine Destructionist)
    Starscream (Second In Command)
    Megacron (Spy)
    Run-Away (Aerial Destructionist)
    Soundblaster (re-incarnation of Soundwave) (Audio Comunnications Expert)

    X Agents
    Unicron (Planet Eater) (Agent X Leader)
    Galvatron (former Decepticon Leader)
    Scourge (former Autobot)
    Cyclonus (former Decepticon)
    Nemesis Prime (former Decepticon)
    Cyberblast Prime (was changed by unknown... for now...)

    Aliens (Autobot Alliance)
    Kranix (Lithonian Warrior)
    Arbulus (Lithonian Scientist)
    Arcee (Paradonian Archer)
    Wreck-Gar (Junkion Leader)

    Aliens (Decepticon Alliance)
    Scorponok (Charian Leader)
    Alpha-Q (Quintessan Leader)
    Snipeshot (Paradonian Destroyer)

    I'm hoping to start this next week so tune in to this thread for more details.
     
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    Prologue
    "Beginning"

    In the year of 2095, a new generation of Autobots and Decepticons has begun a new war, soon to be called... the Universal Wars. The brave Autobots, let by Nitro Prime and Jetimus Prime, have battled the deadly Decepticons, led by Zarakatron and Starscream. But, in the farthest reaches of the Universe, a new breed of Transformers have risen... their goal... total destruction!!!
     
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    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    what! but.....that's.....my...
     
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    Hey, I'm sorry but I didn't know that there was a user named megacron.
     
  5. megacron

    megacron THIS IS SPARTA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    it's ok no problem i like the charecters names anyways:cool: 
     
  6. Alpha Prime

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    I do plan on finishing X...maybe over my Easter Break i'll finish writing it...Maybe.

    Anywho, that's kind of creepy, i was going to use a jet robot to be NP's successer too....ESP!!!

    Anywho, nice character line up and Good start. Try to write more for a chapter!!!
     
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    I'm gonna add more characters now...
     
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    Here's Chapter One:

    Chapter One
    "Awakening of Agent X"

    In the farthest reaches of the universe, where total darkness reigns and
    planets the size of the sun are scattered about, a lonely Cybertronian exploration
    ship floats gently in space. Inside, robotic humanoids known as Autobots steer the
    shuttle towards unknown territory, their faces emotionless except for a slight feeling
    of fear, their optics scanning the area ahead of them, not knowing of the terrible
    fate they were to experience. "Okay, tell me this... WHY DID YOU LEAD US TO THE
    MIDDLE OF NOWHERE, ALPHA PRIME," shouted a reformatted Cyberblast Prime. "
    Maybe you should ask our navigationist, Kilotron," said Alpha Prime, Nova Prime's
    brother. "He pretty much knows this place a WHOLE LOT MORE than we do!"

    Suddenly, out of nowhere, a laser shot a massive hole in the ship,
    damaging the defence system and totaling the weapons system. In a blink of an
    eye, sirens began to activate while the autobot on the intercom warned: "WARNING!
    WE ARE UNDER ATTACK! READY YOUR WEAPONS AND DESTROY THE INVADER!
    REPEAT! WARNING! WE ARE UNDER ATTACK! READY YOUR WEAPONS AND DESTROY
    THE INVADER!"
     
  9. Alpha Prime

    Alpha Prime Ten Years Strong

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    Nice Cliffhangger.
     
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    Man... it's been a while since I posted here... better finish that chapter if I'm ever gonna get any good ratings in the business...
     
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    Here it is...

    Chapter 2
    "The death of a hero..."
    "Alpha Prime! Hand me my weapon!" said Cyberblast Prime. The battle inside the ship was catastropic. Dead bodies lay everywhere, among the dead were Ironhide, Hightower, Laddermatch, Nightwatch, and Speedbreaker. The dark shadows creeped ahead, shooting two more Autobots and watching as they exploded. Suddenly the biggest of them spoke: "Where... is the... Matriiiiixxxxxx....?" It reached its hand around Cyberblast's chrome parts, disentigrading them into fine dust. (did i spell 'disentigrading' right?) It then grabbed hold of his chest and ripped it off, tearing it into pieces. Cyberblast reached for his gun and tried to shoot the shadow, but it grabbed the gun and shot Cyberblast in the chest. "AAAUUGGHH!!!!" screamed Cyberblast as darkness surrounded him, engulfing his extinguished spark. His optics turned from a crystalline yellow to a crimson red and his Autobot symbol disappeared and in its place, a green symbol appeared... a symbol that transformed Cyberblast... into... an Agent X warrior...
     
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    Nice :) 
     
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    Okay, new one.

    Chapter 3

    "War Begins on Cybertron... again."

    Meanwhile, on Cybertron, millions of Autobots have witnessed the betrayal of Cyberblast Prime, and have started to destroy his part of Cybertron before he could attack them. But two small Autobots named Nitro and Jetis were determined to stop this outrage over Cyberblast. They rushed towards the front of the mob and then Nitro said: "Stop! Why do you have to destroy pretty much half of Cybertron all because of Cyberblast? He didn't betray us, he... was changed by a newly reborn alliance... Agent X." "Agent X?," said a bulky Autobot named Riptide. "What the hell do you mean?" "It means," said Nitro. "That... well, remember when Cyberblast and Nova Prime were fighting the X Agents? Well, when Cyberblast killed their leader, Unicron, (with the help of Nova Prime...) he sentenced the remaining X Agents to exile to the farthest reaches of the universe. Now, years later, they have awakened again to either destroy Cyberblast or convert him to their side, which they did." Then, one Autobot pushed his way to them and said: "I don't care if that happened, come on guys, lets get rid of anything that reminds us of that traitor, even these morons!" And with this, he picked up Nitro by the neck and threw him into a wall. "But this is true! Come on guys? Don't you believe me? WELL I DO BELIEVE MYSELF, YOU MOTHER-F***ERS!!! YEAH! GIVE ME THAT BIRD WILL YA? WELL I'VE GOT SOMETHING ABOUT THAT, YOU PRICK!!" Jetis stared at Nitro and said: "Dude... don't yell like that again. You'll get us in---" "I DON'T CARE IF WE GET IN TROUBLE! I JUST WANT THEM TO BELIEVE THE TRUTH!!! SHEESH!"

    That Night...

    "Zarakatron, Cyberblast Prime has been captured by the X Agents. They have converted him to their side and because they are Decepticons, it means that Cyberblast is now on our side," said Zarakatron's second in command, Starscream. "Well, he was captured? Yesssss... This will be good for our plan to destroy Cybertron once and for all! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!"

    To Be Continued...
     
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    New one!!!

    Chapter 4

    "Destruction"

    The next morning...

    "I don't know why you had to pitch a fit about the fact that everyone didn't believe you, Nitro," said Jetis as they were heading towards the capital of Cybertron, Iacon City. "It's just because they don't even care about me. They think of me as a mere speck of dust," muttered Nitro. Suddenly, lasers shot out from the sky and hit the road in front of them then another set hit right behind them, thus trapping the two Autobots! "Hehehahahahaa!!!" screamed Starscream, "you'll NEVER escape me now that there's nowhere to go! Hehahaha!!" Both of the Autobots transformed and aimed their guns at Starscream but were knocked down by Run-Away, another Decepticon Seeker. "Starscream! They're down! Kill 'em," he shouted to his boss, but Starscream didn't listen. He instead left them and started attacking several buildings, trapping the Autobots even more. "Haha! Hope ya get blamed for this! Haha," said Run-Away as he transformed into a F-15. Nitro and Jetis were left there and Jetis said, "Oh, boy. We're in DEEP shit." "You said it," said Nitro.

    To Be Continued...
     
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    Chapter 5: Punishment

    ZOMG! New Chapter! Finally!

    "Well help me clear this rubble before the Autobots bust us." said a very concerned Jetis. "Way ahead of ya." Nitro replied.

    They struggled to clear the destruction but soon 2 helicopter drones hovered over them. They transformed and aimed their assault rifles at them. "Leave the restricted area now." ordered the first drone. "Or else we shall obliterate you." the other drone finished. "Listen guys, we were chased here by two decep..." "DO NOT MENTION DECEPTICON OR YOU WILL BE PROSECUTED." "No, seriously, that decepti... "PUT YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR. YOU ARE UNDER ARREST." "Dammit, I hate you Jetis..."

    LATER

    "So, the charges against these two protoforms are 'Use of Taboo Word', 'Unauthorized Entry of Restricted Area', 'Destruction of City Property magnified by Restricted Area Property', and 'Mouthing Off to A Police Drone'. Well, you boys are quite the lawbreakers.
    "We're sorry. We didn't know the law. We're just kids in Autobot Academy." said Jetis.
    "Not anymore. The Headmaster has expelled you both because of your arrest. I sentence you too to 3 millenia in prison. CASED DISMISSED!"

    As the judge banged the gavel, Jetis and Nitro were in toatl shock. Expelled from Autobot Academy? Sentenced to 3 millenia in the slammer? It felt like a nightmare.

    Yes, I know I haven't updated this in a while. Enjoy!
     
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    Nice, I like how it's fast paced. It seems a little choppy at times but I'm sure it will smooth out once you catch your stride.
     
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    Hell, I caught my stride 3 years ago with Voltage, and I'm ready to catch it again!
     
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    Chapter Six

    Just to let you know, chapters will be posted every Wednesday from now on. :) 

    CHAPTER SIX
    IN THE SLAMMER
    As the two Autobots were escorted out of the courtroom, they thought of the possibilities of their future. Would they ever be accepted back into Autobot Academy? Would they be branded as Autobots? Or would they be inevitably sent to work on the space bridges? These ideas swirled around as they were forced to transform and drive to the prison. As they entered, their transformation cog was removed by telekinesis by Braindrain. Then, they were sent to Cell 65AC and tossed inside.
    THREE MONTHS LATER
    "HEY!" screamed a bulky prisoner named X-Brawn.
    Jetis and Nitro were in indoor recreational court
    "What'd I do, you lugnut?" snapped Nitro.
    "Nitro, I don't think you wanna pick a fight with this guy. My scanners say he got incarcerated for rape." Jetis warned.
    "I don't care. This guy's going down today!"
    "But Nitro! You're just a kid! He's a freakin' Decepticon!"
    "HEY! X-BRAWN NO LIKE PUNY KID! GET OUT OF X-BRAWN'S WAY!"
    "Damn, He's got a temper..."
    "Hey, at least you didn't fight him. That would've been messy..."​
     
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    CHAPTER SEVEN
    HISTORY LESSON PART ONE
    (Cut to two years later. Jetis and Nitro have become friends with Bulkhead and they are planning on breaking out.)

    Bulkhead: (holding up the blueprints for the prison) So we get out here (points), We find our weapons here, (points) and we disable all of the guards here. (points)

    Nitro: Nice plan, Bulkhead. One problem, however. HOW THE FUCK ARE WE GETTING OUT OF THIS CELL!

    Jetis: Calm down Nitro. Apparently you inherited your father's hotheadedness.

    Bulkhead: Who was his father?

    Nitro: The late, great Cyberblast Prime. He fought the Decepticons and lived to see the end of the Second Great War. However, when he and his friend Nova Prime set off towards an alternate Cybertron, something happened. We still haven't heard anything about their survival.

    Bulkhead: Tell me more about Cyberblast.

    Jetis: Well...





    Comments and reviews welcome!​
     
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    CHAPTER EIGHT
    JAIIIIIL-BREAK!!!


    Bulkhead: We'll enough history lessons for one day, let's figure out a way out of this cell.

    Nitro: Well I didn't smuggle a human pistol here for nothing.

    [Nitro opens his chestplate and removes an Uzi.]

    Jetis: You do know, if you get caught with that inferior device, the guards with confiscate it and execute you.

    Nitro: Relax man. I didn't excel in marksmanship for nothing. See that button on the wall? I bet you five cybers [Cybertron currency] I can hit it using one bullet.

    Jetis: Good luck with that.

    Nitro: Yeah, I---

    Jetis and Bulkhead: JUST SHOOT THE DAMN THING!!!

    Nitro: Okay! Okay!! Sheesh... [aims] Here goes nothing...


    (In the newly-christened Agent X starship)

    Cyberblast: Unicron, what do we do now that Paradonia is enslaved?

    Unicron [in his Cybertron Tank Version]: We find the Planet of Junk, we enslave Wreck-Gar and his people, and then move on to Lithion.

    Cyberblast: Good. What should we do with Arcee?

    Unicron: Rape her until she confesses to the whereabouts of the Autobot Matrix of Leadership.

    Cyberblast: Will do, Master Unicron.

    Alpha: What are my orders, Master Unicron?

    Unicron: Find me Jetis and Nitro.

    Alpha: Will do, Master Unicron.
     

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