OH no. Oh no no no no no... This is an very interesting interpretation. Sadly, it is a bit more realistic, more human-like. It is very hard to relinquish command, after you have gone through so many trials to win the day. I sincerly hope something can be worked out in the end...but then this isn't my strip. And only you have the answers...
Nice! You've got another reader here. I really like the Autobots vs. Autobots stuff. Keep up the good work.
Prowl? Prowl is in Roddy's group? In full honesty, if there ever was a rift between Ops and Roddy, I would think it would be more in character for the strictly rule-abiding Prowl to side with Optimus rather than the rebellious Rodimus. Mind you, its your comic but to be frank, you're REALLY going to have to explain this one to me.
There is a whole back story to all of this and it will be revieled in time and in the tech specs. Just wait, the twists have just begun! Prowl has some processor baggage due to him dying before Optimus. Thanks, I do not know if I am as good of a writer as you but I am trying. This was a dark time in TF history and was locked away so no one could read it. The Decepticons play a vital role in this story. I hope so. I will have a few new tech specs and a new part of the story in the next couple of days.
All very good and interesting. A word of advise though: your grammar is a little questionable and there are a few glaring spelling mistakes. I suggest trying to work on improving that and it will make the comic easier to read.