Transformers: Underground

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  1. TRANSJAZZ

    TRANSJAZZ Fighting Cancer RIP 10/31/16 Veteran

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    Just a little teaser of what is coming!
     
  2. Anodythe

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    A decepticonish-type rift. Not a good sign. I'm hooked!
     
  3. Crystal Convoy

    Crystal Convoy Huh? TFW2005 Supporter

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    This is very interesting. It's gonna be good.
     
  4. grimlock1972

    grimlock1972 Optimus, serving up the primest of ribs since 1984

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    ooooo a nice twist me likey
     
  5. TRANSJAZZ

    TRANSJAZZ Fighting Cancer RIP 10/31/16 Veteran

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    Thanks to all, I hope I can do the story justice with my pic taking and editing.
     
  6. TRANSJAZZ

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  7. Crystal Convoy

    Crystal Convoy Huh? TFW2005 Supporter

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  8. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl

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    This should be interesting.
     
  9. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    Autobots vs Autobots? Count me in!

    But what happened to the decepticons? Were they defeated?
     
  10. Anodythe

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    OH no. Oh no no no no no... This is an very interesting interpretation. Sadly, it is a bit more realistic, more human-like. It is very hard to relinquish command, after you have gone through so many trials to win the day. I sincerly hope something can be worked out in the end...but then this isn't my strip. And only you have the answers...:popcorn 
     
  11. Mini-Bot

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    Nice! You've got another reader here. I really like the Autobots vs. Autobots stuff. Keep up the good work. :thumb 
     
  12. TRANSJAZZ

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  13. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    Prowl? Prowl is in Roddy's group? In full honesty, if there ever was a rift between Ops and Roddy, I would think it would be more in character for the strictly rule-abiding Prowl to side with Optimus rather than the rebellious Rodimus. Mind you, its your comic but to be frank, you're REALLY going to have to explain this one to me.
     
  14. grimlock1972

    grimlock1972 Optimus, serving up the primest of ribs since 1984

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    holy hell :jawdropper:  this things got more twists that a pretzel factory! I like it keep it up!
     
  15. TRANSJAZZ

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    Here is the first of the tech specs for Underground.

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  16. Lock Cade

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    Soundwave... abandoning Galvatron?! No way!

    Still... great comic. Can't wait to read more. :popcorn 
     
  17. TRANSJAZZ

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    There is a whole back story to all of this and it will be revieled in time and in the tech specs.

    Just wait, the twists have just begun!

    Prowl has some processor baggage due to him dying before Optimus.

    Thanks, I do not know if I am as good of a writer as you but I am trying.

    This was a dark time in TF history and was locked away so no one could read it.

    The Decepticons play a vital role in this story.

    I hope so.

    I will have a few new tech specs and a new part of the story in the next couple of days.
     
  18. Crystal Convoy

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  19. TRANSJAZZ

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    More tech spec info for your viewing pleasure.

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  20. E. C. R. Former

    E. C. R. Former Is probably insane...

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    All very good and interesting.

    A word of advise though: your grammar is a little questionable and there are a few glaring spelling mistakes. I suggest trying to work on improving that and it will make the comic easier to read.