Transformers: Ultimatum

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    Transformers:
    Ultimatum​


    ( In the vastness of space, the camera zooms through several galaxies and planets to finally focus on one specific plant. The planet appears mechanized and filled with life. A voice resembling peter cullen's narrates.)

    Narrator: Cybertron. A paradise at the height of perfection. For billion's of years the planet stood as a beacon of peace and hope for a lawless universe.
    Then The War began.

    ( A bright flash envelops the screen. Cybertron is now scarred and tarnished with the fires of battle. Shift scene to a City in ruins. The Occupying Quintessons round up survivors to be used as slaves. A guard snorts about the automatons to his superior.)

    Guard: Cybertronians. Filth of the universe. Why do I always get this Fraggin' job.

    Quintesson Slavers: I don't like it either but the Tribunal said these cybertronians are to be bound and sent to Quintessa for Factory work

    ( Inside the energy cages, a cybertronian begs his captors to release him.)

    Cybertronian: PLEASE, YOU CAN'T KEEP US LIKE THIS! LET US FREE

    ( The guard shocks him with his staff. The machine recoils in pain]

    Guard: Frag you, Machine. Why should we let let sludge like you out?

    Off-screen voice: BECAUSE FREEDOM IS THE RIGHT OF ALL SENTIENT BEINGS!

    ( Turning into the direction of the voice, The guard find's several automatons lined up behind a purple And green Giant.)

    Slaver: It's Scorpius Prime, Get the troops and get the slave's out of here!
    Hurry to your positions.

    ( The guard radioes in help and several quint soldiers appear and take cover.)

    Scorpius Prime: Autobots, Transform and free the prisoners.

    ( The autobots then fire their weapons and attack the quints. One quint soldier's arm is blasted off and the ensuing explosin from damaged rifle obliterates him an three of comrades. A small white robot transforms into a futuristic mini coupe and drives under a tank. He then fires into the underbelly of the matallic beast and promptly escapes from the explodind death trap. The explosion takes a large chunk of land away as it explodes.)

    Slaver: Fall back, Fall Back! Leave the prisoners! get to the the ships!

    ( The quints mount up and run for dear life. Some are brought down by laser fire before the ships arrive. They board three ships and launch. A cannon blast knocks one ship into another causing a grand explosion. The last ship departs for home after it's deafeat.)

    Scorpius: The war is over, free the...eeeaauuuggghhh!

    ( A beam of plasma fells the autobot leader. A robot with a black and red color scheme shoots offscreen at the sniper until he is deactivated. The robot then goes to his leader's side.)

    Maximus: Primus, Scorpius Prime's dead!

    To be continued...

    what do you think?
     

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