Transformers: The Womb of War

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  1. Astrotrain52

    Astrotrain52 Former Green Kool-aider

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    My second attempt at a comic after I lost aspiration to continue on with my previous one, All FAIL Megatron. Unlike my AFM, which was updated sporadically, this one will be updated once a week, hopefully on a Friday evening or Saturday. Hope you guys enjoy this new photocomic and welcome it with open arms.

    **Yes I know some of the text is really small, will fix this for the next post**

    Now I present to you:

    Transformers: The Womb of War

    Chapter 1

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  2. Lock Cade

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    Aw, you're not going to continue All Fail Megatron? :( 

    Still... this looks like an interesting comic. Looking forward to reading more. :popcorn 
     
  3. Karhukjnsi

    Karhukjnsi Universal Wrestler

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    HOLY SHIT! This is awesome! With a great name to boot! Can't wait for more, though, I did notice one tiny error. Banzaitron said to Nova "thou spark", when it should be "thine spark". Otherwise, I LOVE the dialogue, it's realistic, any interruptions are perfectly executed. Great opener (especially since it isn't some monologue) and I can't wait to see more!

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  4. Sunstorm202

    Sunstorm202 TF2er

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    I like it! I'm definitely following this one.
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    Very very interesting start! I really look forward to seeing where this will go.

    :popcorn 
     
  6. Hype1

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    Great start to this one...keep it rolling!
     
  7. Ezilla82

    Ezilla82 Expect the Unexpected.

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    I have to say I haven't seen your later work, but this comic is cool.
     
  8. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    Can you shrink the pictures down so they don't force me to scroll sideways to see them? Other than that, good luck with the new comic. :thumb 
     
  9. MekaGojira3k

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    Cool start! Poor Noisemaze. :/
     
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    interesting, ill definetly read this :popcorn 
     
  11. Astrotrain52

    Astrotrain52 Former Green Kool-aider

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    Thanks everyone for the feedback! Glad to see everyone's enjoying it.

    Chapter 2

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    straxis is just a little power mad/hungry, isn't he?

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    Awesome start! I'll definitely be checking back for more!
     
  15. weeklyhero

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    Really love seeing the pre-war story here! I'm surprised to see Energon Op as the main leader (can't remember the name and I can't bring them up here at work) and the mix of all the styles among the troops. You've got quite the cast here and I can't wait to see more.
     
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    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    As much as i loved All Fail Megatron, this new comic is great. Deimos, interesting choice for a Pre-Megatron name.
     
  17. Astrotrain52

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    Decided to change the weekly update on Friday only to a biweekly update. Usually the updates will be on Tuesday and Friday, but with me being busy this next week (end of semester), I decided to upload early.

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    :popcorn 

    Also, what program do you use to edit the pictures?
     
  19. Astrotrain52

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    I use Microsoft Paint for text and GIMP for all the effects.
     
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