Transformers: The Musical. A WIP.

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  1. drill

    drill Gotham's White Knight

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    I am writing a Transformers Musical. While I do not have enough talent to write the music for it, I am a pretty good lyricist, or so I'm told. I figure that if anything I should do a G1 musical based on the first 3 episodes. I currently have 3 songs written. I am trying to stay as close to the episodes as possible. If anyone who is good at music wishes to collaborate with me and do the music to go with the lyrics that would rule. But for now here at the first three songs in Transformers the Musical:

    Prologue


    Many millions of years ago…
    A mechanical world in the heart of space housed a mysterious robotic race

    Cybertron was it’s name and the Transformers was it’s fame!

    Transformers! More then Meet’s the Eye! Transformers! Robots in Disguise!

    A race divided over in a bloody war time headed by Megatron and Optimus Prime!

    A revolt rang out and Megatron did shout “The Autobots are a disaster! So join with me and Decepticons be with me, your Lord and Master!”

    The War did start and at its heart the race became divided. Autobots vs Decepticons while Cybertron subsided.

    Optimus Prime fought for peace and strove to end the conflict. He would save Cybertron and bring Megatron in as a convict.

    For they were…

    Transformers! More then Meet’s the Eye! Transformers! Robots in Disguise!
    TansformerS! Autobots wage their battle to destroy the evil forces of…the Decepticons.


    Energy

    Wheeljack: Bumblebee, what can we do? This war is killing us. The Decepticons that we fight can only be stoped by Primus!

    Bumblebee: Don’t say that Wheeljack don’t give up yet. We can stop these Decepticreeps in their tracks, that I bet.

    Wheeljack: You speak the truth my little friend but there is not much that can be done. We have no energy left to use and thus we are on the run.

    Bumblebee: But we can get some! While its not plentiful, Kaon has Enegy Converters! We can get them if we are careful.

    Wheeljack: What choice to we have let us give it a shot. We can get them because we are Autobots!

    Both: Energy is what we lack. We really need it in many stacks. With energon we’ll win the fight and then we’ll party through the night!

    Wheeljack: This energy is not enough what are we to do?

    Bumblebee: Simple friend we’ll use it well. Don’t turn a shade of blue.

    Wheeljack: It is more then that my little friend there are Decepticons at the streets end!

    Starscream: Pathetic fools look at them run! Get them seekers! Get the energon!

    Seekers: Energy is what we’ll gain though getting it will be a pain! With energon we’ll win the fight and then we’ll party through the night!

    *Fight*

    Starscream: SEEKERS! RETREAT! RETREAT!

    Bumblebee: The energon that we have won shall be brought to Iacon!

    Wheeljack: It isn’t much but it will be fine it will last us for a good time!


    Both: Energon is what we’ve got thanks to the Seekers that we fought. This energon will win the fight and we shall party through the night!

    Soundwave: Energon. Need the Energon for Megatron. Or even better…
    When those two pass me by they wont realize they passed a spy.
    Laserbeak eject from my chest. Here is the trajectory. Operation assimilate with this territory.
    The Energon will be ours and Megatron will rise in power.

    Wheeljack: This energon will win the fight.

    All: And we shall party tonight!

    Space Fight

    Optimus Prime: Good work Autobots but this just won’t suffice. This war has taken it’s tool and energy is its price.

    Jazz: Then Prime where do we go? How do we win this race?

    Optimus Prime: We have no choice. We shall go into space.
    A search mission I declare that we shall go to find energy that is spare.

    Jazz: When do we start the show?

    Optimus Prime: When you we are ready to go.

    Soundwave: Laserbeak you have done well. To Megatron we shall go tell.

    *Kaon*

    Shockwave: Soundwave returns almighty Megatron. Back home to our base in Kaon!

    Megatron: We need to gain the energy to replenish that which we have burned.
    Soundwave, what have you and Laserbeak learned?

    Soundwave: They seek energy my liege and they are starting with such haste. Inferior Autobots wish to go into space.

    Megatron: Space eh with such haste we will stop them now I say! Shockwave you will lead until I return in a few days.

    Shockwave: Thank you my lord it shall remain just as you have left it.

    Starscream: If I was leading we would have energy. We would not have spent it.

    Megatron: You fool Starscream you will never lead. If you were organic I would make you bleed!

    Starscream: My time will come and then you’ll see that the Decepticons will win one I lead!

    Megatron: Never! Never I say! When we return a price you will pay. Ready to blast off! Find them and cut them off!

    *Ark*

    Prowl: All is well Optimus Prime. We seem to be moving right on time.

    Optimus Prime: Thank you Prowl. Jazz what does it say? Why does Teletran blink that way?

    Jazz: Our worst fears have come true.

    Ironhide: Leaking Lubricants! They came right out of the blue!

    Optimus Prime: You two man the laser gun stop them so we have time to run!

    Starscream: They have seen us let’s kill them now!

    Megatron: NO their actions have had me raise my brow. Capture them let’s see what they’re after. Then we can kill them with a blaster!
    Prepare the boarding chute!

    Ratchet: They are trying to board? What do is to be done?

    Optimus Prime: It is a fight they want. Hand me my gun!

    *Explosion! Fights!*

    Soundwave: The ships not stable in this meteor shower.

    Prowl: Teletran is loosing massive power!

    Wheeljack: G-Forces are pulling us down there.

    Jazz: A blue planet that has ground and air!

    Starscream: We are out of control! We are gonna crash!

    Megatron: No we wont Starscream. Stop Being so rash!

    Optimus Prime: Prepare for the crash here it comes!

    Huffer: Good bye my friends my pals my chums!

    All: HERE IT COMES!
    *Curtain closes.*


    Well thats all I got so far. The next song, of course is when the Decepticons awaken and Starscream awakens Optimus Prime.

    Comments, criticism, and anything else you wish to say is appreciated.
     
  2. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    um bwaaaahhh!!!!!! and thats a good thing
     
  3. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    That is the most horrible thing I ever read I stopped as soon as Ironhide sang was this soppose to be a joke?
     
  4. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    *fell off chair*
     
  5. rebelbot

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    It's was till good
     
  6. drill

    drill Gotham's White Knight

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    ...well the G1 scripts were not always the best of writing. But how is it horrible? I like constructive criticism.
    Thank you Rebelbot and Rumble02.
     
  7. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Sorry:( 
    I just thought making trasformers into a musical is a bad idea but whatever you do for the love of god don't make ironhide sing
     
  8. drill

    drill Gotham's White Knight

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    Well I dont think Ironhide spoke as much as the others in the first 3 episodes so I think that can be done.
    Thanks for clearing that up.
     
  9. Rumble02

    Rumble02 Radicon of Obliticons

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    just remember c@c should still allways be positive. and just cuz it may not be your thing doesnt mean its not important to the writer and the rest of us who want to read this work.
    Keep it coming drill
     
  10. ActionMasterZod

    ActionMasterZod LarzArz on twitter, man.

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    Transgreece!!

    or Transfat whatever suites you're boat.


    But there needs to be more transformers musicals, no matter the cost!
     
  11. Jetplague

    Jetplague Michael Bay is evil!

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    I made a joke about there being a Musical in my Funny Formers section....but someone actually went and tried to make it....just so wrong. Next up "Transformers On ICE!"
     
  12. drill

    drill Gotham's White Knight

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    Thanks guys for your kind words. Here is another song!

    4 million Years Later

    Teletran 1: 4 million years have gone by while we thought we had all died.
    But I am Awake and it Shows I was Awaken by this Volcano’s blows!
    What’s this an injured bot now this I wont allow. A Probe I’ll send to go and prowl.
    Here it comes from under the floor go out and explore. Explore!
    Its coming in a Jet you’ve found! I’ll repair this bot on the ground.
    Skywarp: Uh! I’m alive! And time’s gone by!
    Megatron, you shall live! And a gun mode is what Teletran will give.
    Megatron: Tell me quickly what’s the story? We are on a planet I know not where. Decepticons regroup! We shall set up base right there.
    We shall search for resources. Our mission is clear! Using energy we find we go back to Cybertron from here!
    Starscream: Thanks to your leadership we are stranded! This would not have happened if I had commanded!
    *Shot*
    Megatron: Starscream!
    Starscream: I just wanted to say good bye!
    Megatron: Don’t waste your energy. They have already died.
    *Flies away*
    Starscream: Thanks for the ride today! Too bad you can’t go the rest of the way!

    I am now half way through the first episode! Awesome! Check back for more.
     

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