That is pretty neat. It is a bit dark, but I'm assuming it's dark and rainy to disguise the fact that the panels are pictures of the toys and stuff. Maybe you could bring it up just a tad though. I agree about some of the text being a bit overwhelming. But overall a neat concept and you put a lot of work into it obviously.
one more grammar goof: "If I can't see then so can't Blackout"??? That's not grammatically correct. lol GREAT ART THOUGH!!!