Transformers:Rise Of Unicron

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  1. Prime9409

    Prime9409 Well-Known Member

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    Hello, Just Posting My idea for The next movie.

    Comment and Enjoy..

    TRANSFORMERS:
    RISE OF UNICRON

    (Earth is shown. Close up on earth shows North America. Then The camera zooms in on a battle on the continent. It's the battle of Gettysburg. Union soldiers line up their cannons for attack. One Soldier, Who is Refered to as Samuel Witwicky by his sergeant, preps his cannon for fire. He is unaware of an autobot symbol inside the cannon. Confederate soldiers attack. The cannons fire. Then we several scenes showing several transformers in different time periods. A monologue of Optimus Prime begins.)

    Optimus Prime: This is Our War. For millions of years, I never knew that our People lived in secret on our new home, Earth. Only a short time ago, I've learned our alliance with the humans was ancient by their terms.
    We are now united to safeguard our home from The Decepticons.
    But I feel a darkness rising, one that will decide the fate of earth.

    ( An orchestral version of The Transformers Theme is played. The credits are shown. Then the title Comes into view.)

    (Then we shift to a view of a dormitory. Sam Witwicky is fast asleep in his bed. His roommate, Leo Spitz, is also asleep, cuddled up with a computer and surrounded by several books about astronomy. A person sneaks into the room, the figure silently walks up to sams' bed. The figure is revealed to be
    Mikeala. She looks around the room to find the alarm clock. She sets it to 10:00 A:M. The time is 9:59 A:M. The clock then rings after several seconds.)

    Sam: AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!

    Leo: Shut up!

    (Mikeala just smiles. She then walks over to sam)

    Mikeala: Up an At em', Soldier. It's Saturday and you promised me a tour of the campus.

    Sam: You Just Got here....Why did'nt ya set the clock to 12:00?

    Mikeala: I'm kinda of a morning person.

    Leo: Well...I'M NOT!

    (Mikeala then pushes Leo over his bed. Leo lands on the floor with a thud. His Pajamas are littered with images of his websites' logo.)

    Mikeala: You're really dedicated to the site, aren't you?

    Leo: YES I AM AND YOU OWE ME A NEW COMPUTER!

    (Mikeala then looks at the shattered remains of Leo's computer.)

    Mikeala: Don't worry, you have ten other laptops in the room,​
     
  2. transFormers3

    transFormers3 Well-Known Member

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    Haha, awesome start, and I love the character interaction, it would be awesome to watch.
    Hope you add more, cause I'm really looking forward to it!
     
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    Chapter 2

    Just a few notes,

    The Soldier was Private Samuel Archibald Witwitcky, Sam's great-great-great
    Grandfather. That means he's Captain Witwicky's father. Since it was revealed in rotf that sam's destiny was to revive optimus, then the dynasty's
    followers have protected the witwicky family for hundredths of years.

    Oh, and the Cannon transformer was dstroyed in gettysburg.

    Chapter 2.

    (The scene shifts to a view of the Campus. Then a yellow Camaro comes into view. It's parked on the campus grounds. Sam and Mikeala walk over to the camaro. The car takes notice of their arrival and it shifts and turns into Bumblebee.)

    Bumblebee: Greetings, Earthlings.

    Sam: Hey Bee'.

    Bumblebee: Hey there, Are you two ready for a ride around Campus.

    Mikeala: Yep and I see someone has a new Vocal Processor.

    Bumblebee: New and Improved. No Warranty. Satisfaction Garuanteed.

    Sam: Bee, You do know ya can stop using the radio, right?

    (Bumblebee then transforms back to his car mode. He opens the doors and Sam and Mikeala get in and drive off)

    Diego Garcia....

    (The Island comes into view. Pan across the Airfield. We see several planes. Then a Chevrolet Trax comes into view. It transforms into Mudflap. Mudflap then hides among the aircraft.)

    Mudflap:he'll never find me here,

    (Then Skids appears out of nowhere and tackles him.)

    Skids: Gotcha'!

    (Then a blue wave surrounds them. They are then lifted into the air and thrown into the ocean. The wave then dissapears, taking it's place is a silver and Sky Blue 2012 Mustang. View of the grille reveals a mettalic red Autobot symbol. The car then transforms into a sleek Robot.)

    Blurr: HAHAHA...Still can't beat me. I'm still number one!

    (Lennox appears from the Hanger and Stares at Blurr.Then he sees' mudflap and skids in the water.)

    Lennox: *SIGH* We have a level one situation. Autobot Units trapped in the water.

    Radio Operator: Skids and Mudflap,

    Lennox: Skids and Mudflap, send in Seaspray to fetch em'.

    (Over in the ocean, A newly-designed Cruiser comes into view. An autobot symbol blazes across the deck. A crane activates and grabs Mudflap)

    Mudflap: Ya Know, Seaspray, you're adding insult to injury right now,

    Seaspray: Then I guess I can put you back where you were,

     
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    Again, great chapter, really looking forward to more. :) 
     
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    Cast list:

    Humans:
    Sam Witwicky
    Mikeala Banes
    Leo Spitz
    Seymour Simmons
    Lennox
    Epps
    Figueroa
    Ron and Judy Witwicky.
    Tom Bannachek
    Graham
    Mindy Lucas
    Buster Witwicky

    Autobots:
    Optimus Prime
    Bumblebee
    Ironhide
    Ratchet
    Skids
    Mudflap
    Wheelie
    Arcee
    Chromia
    Moonracer
    Sideswipe
    Jolt
    Blurr
    Seaspray
    Silverbolt
    Skydive
    Airraid
    Fireflight
    SlingShot
    Grimlock
    Swoop
    Sludge
    Snarl
    Slag
    Prowl
    Wheeljack
    Hound
    Hot rod
    Omega Supreme
    Springer
    Sandstorm

    Decepticons:
    Megatron
    Starscream
    Barricade
    MotorMaster
    Wildrider
    Breakdown
    Dead End
    Drag Strip
    Sondwave
    Trypticon
    Spyglass
    Spectro
    Viewfinder
    Shockwave
    Cy-kill
    Bludgeon
    Blitzwing
    Astrotrain
    Octane
    Various Deceptidrones

    Other:
    Unicron
     
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    Wow, thats a huge list, can't wait!
     
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    Chapter three

    Chapter Three.

    (Morning dawn on Paris. Several citizens are seen preparing for their daily lives. Yet, on the ground several vehicles come into view. Their hoods are covered with the nest symbol. One Van holds Figueroa and a new recruit from dallas, Mindy Lucas.)

    Figueroa: Battle Convoy is rolling...tracking targets.

    (In another part of Paris. An rc monster truck rolls into view. It is colored with blue and white. An autobot symbol blazes across the hood. I't then transforms into a little robot.)

    Wheelie: Sentry 1 is in position, keeping optics out for target.

    (Then a red and white mitsibushi motorcycle comes into view. It is searching for something. It then drives past wheelie.)

    Wheelie: Target found!He's heading your way, Prowl!.

    ( A white and black Police Saleen with gold trimmings come's to life.
    It then roll's out to intercept the motorcycle.)

    Prowl: This is Prowl, Preparing to intercept Cy-kill!

    (Then it transforms. The police vehicle take's the form of a humanoid robot.
    I't then lifts it's fist and pounds the road. It then fires two rockets. Both hit the motorcycle, which then transforms into a decepticon.)

    Cy-kill: You filthy Autobot! I oughta....

    (Then the con disapears in a bust of energy.)

    Prowl: Target has activated space bridge...he's out of our reach now.

    (On one of saturns moons. A white luminescent orb appears. then Cy-kill jumps out of it.)

    Cy-kill: No....

    (Then Megatron appears out of nowhere. Towering over cy-kill.)

    Cy-kill: Master....forgive me.

    (Megatron is furious. He' then raises his blaster and fires on the forsaken robot. he then watches as the machine's life dissapears.)

    Megatron: Starscream! Pick this garbage up!

    (Starscream marches towards him.)

    Starscream: But, Mighty Megatron....Cy-kill was one of our last scouts. How are we to find the Underbase without him.

    Megatron: Before my Master fell, He told me the underbase was hidden in a hazardous area on Earth.

    Starscream: Of course! Where else... A very dangerous place that we dont know about! The Fallen must've been....

    (Megatron swings around and starts to choke Starscream.)

    Megatron: NEVER QUESTION THE FALLEN!

    Starscream: The Fallen was ancient and decrepit.....Megatron, your arm!

    (Starscream points at Megatrons' left arm. It is covered with spikes and turning a shade of dark purple and Silver.)

    Megatron: It is nothing, you fool!

    Voice: Of course it's not, My lord.

    (Megatron turns around to face the direction of the voice. He sees a towering robot with a purple color scheme and a eye in the center of it's face. His left arm shifts and turns into various medical tools and a blaster.)

    Megatron: Thank you for recieving my call, old friend....Welcome, Shockwave.

    To be continued​
     
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    Chapter four.

    New chapter!

    (Shockwave approaches Megatron and His hand transforms into a scalpel. He scratches megatrons arm for little particles of metal.)

    Shockwave: My Apologies, There is a 99.67% chance that I lied.

    (He raises his hand to his face. His eye scans the strange material)

    Shockwave: Scanning.....Alloy Unknown...Contains Trace of Trylithium and Allspark Radiation....Analysis: There is a 95.89% chance you're gaining strength.....or you'll cease to function!

    Megatron: Impossible! How could I be dying!?

    (He grabs Shockwave by the neck.)

    Megatron: Give me a reason why I should believe you!

    (Then a mysterious voice is heard.)

    Voice: You are dying, my student.

    (Megatron can't believe his optics. It's the Fallens' voice)

    Megatron: Master! I thought....

    (Megatron let's go of shockwave's neck and bows down.)

    The Fallen: Yes, I am Deceased...In the physical sense.
    My spark is drifting through the earth searching for the Underbase.

    Megatron: The Underbase?

    The Fallen: Yes, That is what I am searching for. I't holds the key to my ressurection and to the Autobot's defeat.

    Megatron: Does it hold a cure for my......condition?

    The Fallen: Yes, Gather your army and attack the earth. Search through their greatest cities. Just find the Underbase!

    Megatron: Yes, Master.

    (Starscream and Shockwave stare at Megatron.)

    Starscream: He's lost it.

    Soundwave: No, He was speaking to the fallen. There is a 97.96% chance that's true.

    (Megatron stands and turn's to his lieutenents)

    Megatron: Gather our Troops...We must go to earth!

    To be continued....
     
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    Meanwhile at Diego Garcia......

    (Optimus Prime is inspecting the tomb of the primes. He then taps the monument. A few second's later a great light appears and it engulfs Optimus.)

    Optimus Prime: Where am I?

    (Then five Beings appear from nowhere. They Speak in Unison.)

    Dynasty: Optimus Prime...Your Destiny is coming.

    (Then they explode. Several scenes of Destruction are see. The vision then ends with A luminious yellow orb descending on Optimus. The next thing he sees is the hangar. But The Tomb has disintegrated into dust.)

    Optimus: Ratchet!

    Meanwhile in Philedelphia....

    (Mikeala and Sam are strolling through the busy streets of Philidelphia. Sam spots a jewelry store.)

    Sam: Hey, Mikeala...could you see if bumblebee is allright?

    Mikeala: Sure.

    (She then kisses him and walks off. Sam wanders into the jewelry store. The clerk achnowledges him.)

    Sam: Yeah, Do you have a ring.

    Clerk: Um, Yeah, they're everywhere.

    Sam: Well, do you have one that looks nice but has a reasonable price.

    (The clerk brings out a golden ring.)

    Clerk: How about this.

    (Sam grabs the ring and gives the clerk money.)

    Sam: Keep the Change.

    (He walks out to see mikeala running back.)

    Mikeala: Bee' is okay.

    Sam: Good, Can we go somewhere....There's something important I wanna ask you.

    To be continued.....
     
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    New Chapter!

    (Pan across the University.Zoom in on Sam's dorm. Leo is trying to fix his computer. He glues one peice to the hard-drive.)

    Leo:I bet Bill Gates never has these problems.

    (Then a knock is heard on his door. A voice is heard beyond it.)

    Voice: Hello! Is this The dorm of Sam Witwicky and Leonardo Pon..ce deee...
    Leo Spitz?!

    (Leo stands from his chair and opens the door. A pizza delivery guy is seen. )

    Leo: My name is Leonardo Pone De' Leon Spi....GAGH!

    (The Deliverers' arm extends to choke Leo. His eyes start to glow red.)

    Bludgeon: Where is Samuel Witwicky?!

    Leo: Sam Witwicky? Dont know anyone by that name.

    Bludgeon: Where is Samuel Witwicky?!

    Meanwhile At Diego Garcia....

    (Several N.E.S.T operatives are seen. They are scanning the remains of the Tomb. Lennox comes in with a Silver Saab Aero X and a green Humvee comes into view. They then transform into The Autobots Wheeljack and Hound.)

    Wheeljack: What do we have?

    Graham: A possible Decepticon plot?

    Hound: Think it was the work of something bigger?

    Lennox: I think it's time for Epp's R&R to end.

    To be continued...
     
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    cool. Wish this was the real third movie. I mean, SAm proposing to mikela? SWEET!
     

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