Transformers Revolution

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  1. Shadowbreaker

    Shadowbreaker \/ /\

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    Here is my Not-So-Funny Transformers Funny:
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    I was debating on using ROTF/Movie toys or Classics, etc. toys. Classics won, for various reasons.

    The first "episodes" are a 5 or 3 parter! (What do you think?) It's not the best comic around, script and all, but It'll get better, I assure you.


    Episode 1: Ark of Information, Pt. 1

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    Will Springer ever get a degree in engineering? Will Air Raid and Sky Dive ever come? Who is scary red eyes? Find out next time, on Transformers: Revolution.

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    There you have it. I know pic #3 is one pixel more than everyone else, but I'm too lazy to fix it.

    Give me criticism! (Comments and Compliments would be nice, too.)
     
  2. saberconvoy

    saberconvoy Well-Known Member

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    nice start
    can't wait to see where it goes
     
  3. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    Aaah, some more creativety with background settings than usual. :) 

    :popcorn 
     
  4. Thunder_Cracker

    Thunder_Cracker Friendship is Evil!!

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    I hate it...

















    No really, I like it! Quite a nice start off :) 
    Anything that starts out with a cliffhanger or bares a continuation in a later update in the FIRST installment of the comic tends to mostly have very interesting results in future updates :D 

    Warbot/Springer is always a nice sight to see in comics (even though I don't have him... yet >.>) And it's good to know that he's not "ALL that" when it comes to engineering :lol 

    Nice gig with the lights out/on scenes, nice scenery aswell!
    Be it artificial desert background or an successful blend out/in of the 'actual' location, it came out very well :) 

    Welcome to the funnies section!! (if this is your first time posting a funny thread)
    I would like to see more of your updates from you!!

    PS: I shoot out first speculation of the red-eyed figure that he's actually Mickey Mouse with not enough sleep causing him to suffer red-eye syndrome! Case closed
     
  5. Lock Cade

    Lock Cade Tarn Fangirl TFW2005 Supporter

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    Interesting start. Look forward to seeing more.
     
  6. ectoneon

    ectoneon Well-Known Member

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    Awesome beginning there. Keep em coming! Also great backgrounds!
     
  7. Autobus Prime

    Autobus Prime Transit Former

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    :thumb 

    Props on the use of sets! :D 
     
  8. Shadowbreaker

    Shadowbreaker \/ /\

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    Thanks to all of you!

    I took the pictures for episode 2... Just need to edit them...

    Sadly I'll be swamped with work for the next two or three days...

    Though I will say there will be a surprise in one of the pictures in episode 2! (As for in editing)
     
  9. Andersonh1

    Andersonh1 Man, I've been here a LONG time Veteran

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    So is that a custom Springer? Looks good. :thumb 
     
  10. ironarm

    ironarm SHALL RETURN IN NOVEMBER

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    this comic looks cool
    :popcorn :popcorn 
     
  11. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One! TFW2005 Supporter

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    This is great stuff! I like the use of sets, and the fact you've really gone through effort to create an outdoor environment. You've got a great hook, too: we all know Springer is a fighter, not a computer expert, so it's obvious the Autobots sent him expecting a confrontation. And then you cued the Scary Red Eyes! Well done. I'm looking forward to more.
     
  12. biscuits

    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    Your sig gives away the red eyes! Nice start though! haven't seen that springer in a comic yet!
     
  13. Shadowbreaker

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    Yes.... I know...

    I posted it because I thought I had everything done... But I didn't...

    I might have #2 up tonight. Maybe.
     
  14. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Intresting I await for more.
     
  15. Shadowbreaker

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    YES! I have episode #2 up!

    I had it done earlier today, but then my laptop decided to shut down. So now, I post it at 1 in the morning. I should probably be asleep right now...

    Without further a do....

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    Ark of Information, Part 2

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    And there you have it.
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    Fun Fact: When I was thinking of a electrical explosion sound, I made sounds to see wait sounded best. I then said CSHHCKK! If you said it, you'll see. Maybe....

    Also, the surprise in picture is......... An animated gif!

    I think this might be the first comic with animated gifs, and I hope to include more. :D 

    Oh, the Decepticon ship is from MTMTE part 1.
     
  16. Fez Findie

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    Nice to see someone playin' out the Orbital Jump thing =D

    As well as its nice to see Bludgeon bein' more ambitious or intendin' to take leadership ^^ (I know, he wasn't actively pursuin' it in the G1 comic, though was ready to pick up the spot if it called for it.)
     
  17. biscuits

    biscuits Sin from Genesis

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    Bludgeon getting some nice characterization here!
     
  18. Lock Cade

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    Very, very cool!

    I think there was one other person who used an animated gif in their comic, but I can't for the life of me remember which comic which was. But their animated gif was smaller than the rest of the picture files in the comic, so you're technically the first to use an animated gif inside an actual picture. So kudos for such an effect!
     
  19. Shadowbreaker

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    I'm catching up on comics since I got the Transformers Comics Iphone app. I don't live by a comic shop. :(  And I like the concept of Orbital Jumping.

    Thank you all for nice comments! I'll get the next one up earlier, I promise!


    Also, you'll probably see more animated gifs than this, so keep an eye out for them!
     
  20. saberconvoy

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    wow getting better and better
     

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