transformers:revolution

Discussion in 'Transformers Fan Fiction' started by maximus prime3, Jan 26, 2007.

  1. maximus prime3

    maximus prime3 Banned

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    i am planning to create a story about the liberation of the transformers, do you think it will work?
     
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    You mean against the Quintessions? That would be cool.
     
  3. Alpha Prime

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    From who?
     
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    maximus prime3 Banned

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    from yall, the transformer fanbase
     
  5. wavelength

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    not liberation from fatimus prime?
     
  6. Alpha Prime

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    No, seriously. If it's the evil care bears, it might not work too well.
     
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    he's been banned. no fanfic. yay since it would of bashed energon prime anyway
     
  8. Alpha Prime

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    Well, i guess this thread is useless now.
     
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    maximus prime3 Banned

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    the fan fic will be done, and it was only a temp ban
     
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    OH DEAR GOD, IT ISN'T DEAD!!!!
     
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    it is about the transformers being freed from the quintesons and it will feture a new character, maximus convoy
     
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    here is chapter one

    Transformers: Revolution

    Chapter one: The Rebellion Begins

    Cybertron is in turmoil, the Quintsessions are in charge, and robotic slaves called transformers are being forced to work day in and day out.But that is about to change because of one hero. His name is Maximus Convoy.
    Maximus was heading home from work, earlier that day, there was an energon spill in the factory and the boss took the poor transformer and put him into the smelting pool. “What a horrid way to go”. Just because he spilled a little energon, he was put into the smelting pool.” “Someone has to do something about it.”Maximus said.He pulled into the truck stop.While he was eating his meal, a quint came in and just aimed his gun at a transformer named powerdash, which is Maximus’ best friend, and shot him in the chest. “Dash” Maximus saud and he ran strait to his fallen comrads side. “He should have gotten out of my way” the quint said. “That is it, I am tired of you quints, I will destroy each and every quint until Dash is avenged” Maximus shouted.Then, he pulled out his gun and Blew the quint up.”This statement is directed to Alpha Q. I, Maximus Prime, declare a revolutionary war for the liberation of Cybertron.”
    He ran out the door and transformed into his semi mode and started running over every quint in sight. “you quint have stayed your welcome”, maximus shouted, “I will kill all of you and the transformers will be free.” Then, he drove into an abandoned tunnel and transformed back into his robot mode and jumped through a wall, which is actually a secret base, and got behind a computer. “I got to contact Alpha Trion and get the rebels together to take Cybertron from those despicible quints” he said. “But what shall we call ourselves.” “Hmmm… I got it, we shall call ourselves Autobots."
     
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    if the quintasons are incharge, shouldn't the be able to rib transformers without the whole armed robbery thing. and it never hurts to check your grammer and tenses
     

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