Transformers: Return of the decepticons

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  1. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Decided to start doing a serious comic so enjoy
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  2. bradinmo

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    I like the serious comics more than the funnies for some reason. I like the tone you've set to start off. The pics are simple, but you have me hooked and ready to see more!
     
  3. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Thanks glad to hear next update should be soon.
     
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    Interesting start. Some comments:
    1) The grammar needs work; most of your proper names aren't capitalized.
    2) Can you colour-balance these pics? They are very 'hot'. What program are you using?
     
  5. Ironhide2005

    Ironhide2005 PS3tag=DeaDPooLTFW

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    Thanks for the crtisism I'm actually just shut off flash and have a well lighted area and take pictures with a tripod.
     
  6. Thunder_Cracker

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    Hmmm I like this, very interesting how Bumblebee is in a different light than I usually know

    Cant wait to see what's in store next ^^
    Hope you keep this up :thumb 
     
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    Oooh, this is gonna be one interesting comic. *Subscribes to comic*
     
  8. Ironhide2005

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    Thanks so much glad it has started off so well. Also for the lighting I fixed it so bare through some of the next 3-4 updates(also fixed it in time for a big action scene coming up)
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  9. Thunder_Cracker

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    Oh no! Not the bee :<

    You might wanna consider taking pictures a little further away so they won't come out blurry and all :) 

    Else, nice one ^^,
     
  10. Noise Maker

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    Great start! Cool to see Scorponok; I'm interested in seeing were you take his personality, since he got very little of it in the movie.

    Since Scorponok mentioned Shockwave, I guess this comic will be a mix of different series, with figures outside of the Movie line?

    I'd like to give some advice, if you don't mind: I have to echo what Starfire said. The grammar could be neater. I do think the comic would benefit greatly from clearer pictures; either try to take farther away pics like StarFire said or else try to manually focus.

    Look forward to more! This is promising! :thumbs2: 
     
  11. Ironhide2005

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    Sorry for thw wait heres a quick one

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  12. Thunder_Cracker

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    Hmmm seems Hotrod is out to get Magnus here :p 

    First Prime, then Magnus... will hes power crave ever stop
     
  13. Noise Maker

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    I have to agree...Hot Rod is up to something. :sly: 

    Makes me wonder if this is a new universe or an alternate reality G1.

    The pictures a blurry, but I'm okay with them since you said they'd get clearer.
     
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    I agree... the pics are kind of blurry.

    Yet, good story so far.
     
  15. Ironhide2005

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    Oooh... getting even more interesting.

    There's still a couple pics that look blurry, but at least you're improving.
     
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    actually it's a not bad comic. i like this better than your funnies.
     
  18. Ironhide2005

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    Thanks for all the comments everyone
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    This is getting more interesting by the minute.
     
  20. Noise Maker

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    So Op may still be alive.

    Some of the pictures are still blurry, but it's definitely getting better.
     

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