Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Ironhide2005, Feb 23, 2009.
Decided to start doing a serious comic so enjoy
I like the serious comics more than the funnies for some reason. I like the tone you've set to start off. The pics are simple, but you have me hooked and ready to see more!
Thanks glad to hear next update should be soon.
Interesting start. Some comments:
1) The grammar needs work; most of your proper names aren't capitalized.
2) Can you colour-balance these pics? They are very 'hot'. What program are you using?
Thanks for the crtisism I'm actually just shut off flash and have a well lighted area and take pictures with a tripod.
Hmmm I like this, very interesting how Bumblebee is in a different light than I usually know
Cant wait to see what's in store next ^^
Hope you keep this up
Oooh, this is gonna be one interesting comic. *Subscribes to comic*
Thanks so much glad it has started off so well. Also for the lighting I fixed it so bare through some of the next 3-4 updates(also fixed it in time for a big action scene coming up)
Oh no! Not the bee :<
You might wanna consider taking pictures a little further away so they won't come out blurry and all
Else, nice one ^^,
Great start! Cool to see Scorponok; I'm interested in seeing were you take his personality, since he got very little of it in the movie.
Since Scorponok mentioned Shockwave, I guess this comic will be a mix of different series, with figures outside of the Movie line?
I'd like to give some advice, if you don't mind: I have to echo what Starfire said. The grammar could be neater. I do think the comic would benefit greatly from clearer pictures; either try to take farther away pics like StarFire said or else try to manually focus.
Look forward to more! This is promising!
Sorry for thw wait heres a quick one
Hmmm seems Hotrod is out to get Magnus here
First Prime, then Magnus... will hes power crave ever stop
I have to agree...Hot Rod is up to something.
Makes me wonder if this is a new universe or an alternate reality G1.
The pictures a blurry, but I'm okay with them since you said they'd get clearer.
I agree... the pics are kind of blurry.
Yet, good story so far.
Oooh... getting even more interesting.
There's still a couple pics that look blurry, but at least you're improving.
actually it's a not bad comic. i like this better than your funnies.
Thanks for all the comments everyone
This is getting more interesting by the minute.
So Op may still be alive.
Some of the pictures are still blurry, but it's definitely getting better.
Separate names with a comma.