Transformers: Retribution

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  1. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One! TFW2005 Supporter

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    Inspired by Coolhand’s incomparable Out of the Dead Land and a need to justify my TF collection in my small house, I bring you the first installment of a new serial:
    “The results of what happens when a sleep-deprived grad student takes time away from his work to play with his toys”. But since that title is lame, I’ve subtitled it...

    Transformers: Retribution

    I hope you enjoy it! Special guest appearance by Dark Awakening Zombie Optimus Prime courtesy of TheTransTorture.


    Download Retribution chapter PDF's here:​

    Note: As of December 2014, the entire comic is also hosted on my site, TF Retribution. It's divided into chapters and much easier for new readers to follow, though all comments and discussions about this strip are located in this thread.


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  2. GladiatorPrime

    GladiatorPrime working on Rampage P2-V2

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    :lol  :lol  :lol  :lol 
     
  3. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    Those last two panels, good stuff! but you need to post the pics, not thumbnails, too long to read the comic.
     
  4. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    :lolol Wall-E cannon fodder! :lolol 
    How awesome would that be? “Waaaall-eeee kkaaamaakaaaziiiii”

    And Megaton learns why you need to be VERY careful when you make requests of workmen…

    All in all, a very nice start, and a nice FX shot of Thundercracker. Since your sig shows some awesome custom MP seekers, I can’t help but wonder if we’ll be seeing a certain orange fanatic show up at some point….

    I think Otispq has a point though, it would be easier to read if each panel was posted directly to the thread.

    All in all, bring on more!:thumb 
     
  5. ShadowDragon

    ShadowDragon R to the D to the D yo.

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    Nice start!
     
  6. StarFire_MK2

    StarFire_MK2 'Till All are One! TFW2005 Supporter

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    I've fixed that now, cheers.

    I've got a few custom bots who will be in this strip, and yes, the orange fanatic will eventually make an appearance.

    Thanks for the feedback guys!
     
  7. Fez Findie

    Fez Findie Well-Known Member

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    This is havin' quite an interestin' point of view; With the Decepticons at a disadvantage and... Wall-E!? XD
     
  8. Autovolt 127

    Autovolt 127 Get In The Titan, Prime!

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    :lol  Very nice.
     
  9. Dropshot

    Dropshot Transform your destiny

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    :lol  Wall-e in the decepticons files is really good.

    But what caught my eye was the Thundercracker flying pic it's probable the best transformer flying pic I've seen ever. Nice job :thumb 
     
  10. Otispq

    Otispq Elocution Onymous

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    Ah, yes, much more enjoyable reading it thru the second time with all the pics full size. Now all we need is more!
     
  11. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    Sweeeet. :thumbs2: 
     
  12. StarFire_MK2

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    Updated July 12. Once again, Dark Awakening Zombie Prime appears courtesy of TheTransTorture.

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  13. Z.U.D.O.N

    Z.U.D.O.N Camshaft's Master

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    Nice comics man! Can't wait for the next update! :D 
     
  14. Fez Findie

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    Aaah, its always nice to see a pragmatic side of Megatron, as well as seein' this side of Thundercracker too. It'll be interestin' though to see TC as a "mentor" to someone.

    :lol  at "transforming box", even if they gave some explanation on that too. :) 
     
  15. Coolhand

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    Very, very cool (I can't seem to get the last six panels.' Attack of the Red X's)
    "Very...considerate of you."
    "The word is practical."
    :thumb 
    I still think that Ravage is being somewhat defensive of his death commando recruit. But I guess if I'd hired Wall-E for a Special Ops unit, I'd be working overtime to restore my credability too...
     
  16. StarFire_MK2

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    It's fixed now.
    Bingo ;) 
     
  17. Coolhand

    Coolhand Spiff's Stunt Double

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    "I forsaw the current energy crisis."
    :lol 
    Yes Ravage. Of course you did...
     
  18. StarFire_MK2

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  19. Fez Findie

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    Aah, a nice momentum on this character, even if it just ranting at most part XD

    But who the fudge could make'im react like that? o_O 
     
  20. brr-icy

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    pretty good start, like the characterization so far
     

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