Much as it is unpleasant as to havin' a militarized pickaxe bust a BIG hole through your chest, such is the fate of all who dare seek mercy from Straxus... for it is only death they will find.
cant wait for the update and i know the hassle of picture taking. i still cant find a good spot for the beginning of part one of lost hero (take 2) lol
Come wind, snow, sleet, hail, tornado, blizzard, or nuclear holocaust: THERE WILL BE AN UPDATE today. I promise. XD
DISCLAIMER: Let me just say that I am not at all pleased with this installment. The pacing is off, the effects are a bit wonky, too much is left unexplained, the set is a joke, and... it's just God-awful. I don't blame you if you have trouble figuring out what the slag you're reading. XD TRANSFORMERS/RE:ORIGINS SEASON ONE CHAPTER TWO "Troops on the Move" ~ Now that you've seen what I'm talking about, and realize how awful the entirety of this comic is, you can sit back, relax, and patiently await the GOOD update coming up soon. I know that will be good... I think. Just ask if you're confused, and I'll clear things up.
well, hello orion pax, it's nice to see you after all this time, how's ariel? that scanner's as good of one as anyone could ask for, and the holograms are neat. not problems there. as to your concerns with the pacing, remember that you're still introducing characters and plot points, it's gonna be slower at first. though it's still intriguing, the war hasn't gone into full swing yet, but things are gonna heat up for the gang.
But wait! Heavy Duty is a decepticon! What's he doing in an otherwise Autobot group? DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNN
Wow you sure do have alot of self confidence! But seriously this was good, I had no confussion nor were the effects bad but quite opposite. These are actually really good effects, espically since this is your first time around.
...No way. XD I still think it sucks, but I'm glad you guys can be pleased. Really? I was pretty happy with the holograms, (except the one in the last panel...-shudder-), but the background eyeglows just annoy me. I'll probably get the second part of chapter two out by tomorrow, or the day after.
This seems to have some interesting things goin' with it, and Straxus bein' a major bad guy... and of course puttin' some expressiviness more or less too is a plus. I'll try to keep watch of this ^^
This is getting more interesting. I love that the cast is an amalgamation of design styles. At first I was like Orion? then I was like duh- origins lol. I wonder what Heavy Duty is carrying in his bed? The effects aren't bad at all. Also, I'm loving this cast. Monie Sideswipe, classic Hound, Ironhide, and Hot Rod....all toys I love.
why is heavyduty in there???? does he have some kinda alliance with the 'bots for now? and pacing doesnt matter at first, as long as you introduce the characters, move the plot, and a third thing i cant remember at the moment XD
Hey, sometimes you just have to bump the plot along. I do like the comm sequence; it's clever to use Swiper's Vette logo that way.
Straxus complete role has yet to be revealed... Well, Hound was meant to say it, but when I edited the text, it seemed to drag his words along... Movie Sideswipe is more or less intended to be this comics Silverstreak. I realized only afterwards that I didn't make that clear. XD a bit of part swap with ROTF Swerve, and the rest is history. As for heavy duty... its a secret. And for pacing... yeah, I know, so long as it gets the point across. Yeah, when I was looking for something to use, thats the only thing that really stood out to me. (And the only thing Streak' can reach with his articulation. ) Thanks. :d lol, heres hoping that you stick around. XD
Mkay, just gotta think of a schedule to post them, so as not to give anything away before it happens.
