Transformers: Predator-Ramjet's Plan

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  1. StarscreamComic

    StarscreamComic Banned

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    It was very far at night, when CRASH!!! An alien spaceship crashed. No autobot nor Decepticon knew... exept Ramjet. " An alien? Maybe, I could take this alien to help me overthrow Megatron! Maybe... maybe Bludgeon might assist me. Possibley Starscream." thought Ramjet. Thrust and Durge came after Ramjet. "Where are yoy going?" "Just going out to see any Autobot sneak attacks." Ramjet lied. Ramjet transformed. " Now to head to that alien in that tropical area in Africa."

    I plan to continue this series, so it will be updated very quickley until mondayNov. 23, 2009
     
  2. Shadow25

    Shadow25 Well-Known Member

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    Not bad... maybe space things out in your writing format a bit as the dialogue seems a little jumbled.
    Keep going! :thumb 
     
  3. jackets

    jackets Gamer/Anime fan

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    its an ok start be can't wait for more
     
  4. Dran0n

    Dran0n Junk male

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    Is there toast on that ship? If not Ramjet's going to be pissed.

    Though, seriously, this pretty awesome! Can't wait for more!
     
  5. StarscreamComic

    StarscreamComic Banned

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    toast, i nevr knew Ramjet likes toast, i'll put that in my new Fan fic: Transformers Fan Fic Show


    :music 
     
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