Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by OptimusPancake, Jul 26, 2011.
No text. No panels. Pass.
What this, some guys sticker book?
I've seen stamp collections more exciting than this.
why is everyone so damn harsh? relax
Uhm, its just that you are supposed to make some kinda sequential art or at least a funny, with a story/joke or something like that, not just random collages or attempts at those.
im sorry, ill try again :/
I hate to say this, but a comic's not a comic if there's no speech bubbles or a sequential story as Fez Findie has mentioned. These are nothing more than just taking CGI renderings of the Movie-bots and pasting them into various backgrounds in Photoshop, and these are best posted in TF Fan Art.
Just take a look at all the Funnies to get a better idea how comics work before you make another attempt. It will make a world of difference if you see what sorts of things are done in the Funnies section before making an attempt at funnies.
I hafta agree with TRANS+CRAZY here. In a nutshell:
I dunno, I thought Optimus and Megatron at Denny's was funny.
This is perfectly acceptable as a comic. There's some humor involved, certainly... I got a chuckle out of Megatron and his pile of waffles. If you want to offer some constructive criticism, that's fine, just do it constructively.
What Shane-man said
I found it funny really, though unusual since we're all used to speech bubbles and some sort of obvious humor, but this sort of pics weren't all that weird to us back in the day
But, this seems more like a sort of fan art kind of thing, for a start anyway
Ditto. One of the best things about the Funnies is that, for the most part, we are all pretty supportive of each other's work. Sure, we're all used to a little more substance in here, but we all had to start somewhere.
OP, I do have to agree with a couple points above, though. The audience here prefers a little more than just a funny photo. Give Megatron a couple snarky remarks or make Prime sound like a dick, and you'll be on the right path!
thank you for being nice about this! Next round ill be sure to add some captions!!
Transformers Photoshop funnies 2
I tried to be more creative then last time, and I listened to some advice and added text !
Not bad, but the fact that you use photoshopped pictures rather then toys or personal drawings really limits your story ideas.
Merging threads. There's no need to start a new one.
Otherwise, nice job. I got a good laugh out of both.
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