Transformers: Nexus (Revised)

Discussion in 'Transformers Funnies' started by Stonecrusher, May 27, 2011.

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Who do you want to have the first Spotlight Arc?

Poll closed Jun 16, 2011.
  1. Starscream

    6 vote(s)
    26.1%
  2. Shockwave

    10 vote(s)
    43.5%
  3. Grimlock

    4 vote(s)
    17.4%
  4. Spotlight Arc? Wha?

    3 vote(s)
    13.0%
  1. GingaMagnus

    GingaMagnus Designated Toku Nerd

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    Ok, that first thing makes sense. The tablet is a bit of a learning curve, though I was under the impression that you've had one for awhile. However, I do have one more big problem now.

    That. This line was phrased pretty poorly. It is a valid criticism and fair enough, I don't expect you to shoulder the blame for an unaltered guest writer's work if it needs legitimate constructive criticism, but the way you phrased that makes it seem like more emphasis was put on blaming Kaiju's writing, which is really messed up.

    You're right, you should have put in more effort to rework the dialogue to make it feel a bit more natural, but that comes across as more of a side-note in that line just because of how it was phrased. You need to be a lot more careful with phrasing, I've noticed this issue becoming a bit more common these days.
     
  2. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher jerk to storytelling

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    Yeah, you're probably - nay, definitely - right about that. I've always been terrible at phrasing things, especially on the internet.

    Sorry.
     
  3. kaijuguy19

    kaijuguy19 Keyblade Wielder

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    I admit the writing here wasn't my strongest given that because I haven't written much nowadays and that like Stone said we were working on a new writing format which pretty much made me have to think of dialogue to include into the issue rather then writing it up first.
     
  4. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher jerk to storytelling

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    Welp, might as well finish this issue and move on with our lives.

    NexusGenesisI20cp 19.png NexusGenesisI20cp 20.png
     
  5. kaijuguy19

    kaijuguy19 Keyblade Wielder

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    Out of the frying pan into the fire. lol
     
  6. Sharktibolt

    Sharktibolt Well-Known Member

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    Couldn't have said it better, Sideswipe. :lol 
     
  7. bumblebeej8

    bumblebeej8 Pinpoint Doodle User#3

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    Well you guys are screwed
     
  8. DOTM Bumblebee

    DOTM Bumblebee I must be some kind of nut...

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    Okay, who brought the T-Rex? :lol 
     
  9. Fez Findie

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    Wow. There just ain't no excuse for that barn-sized oversight.
     
  10. Optimax Prime

    Optimax Prime The 14th Prime

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    Uhhhhhh, that........isn't Megazilla
     
  11. Primon4723

    Primon4723 Autobot

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    :popcorn 
     
  12. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher jerk to storytelling

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  13. Blam320

    Blam320 Assembly Inventor

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    Welp, looks like the Quints are getting involved.
     
  14. Optimax Prime

    Optimax Prime The 14th Prime

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    yup, and Bee's right in the middle of it, also, this seems like the kinda situation where you send everyone, including Admiral Thunderclash Prime (A.K.A. personal murder target #3 ( or Zappimus Prime)), at them and nuke their asses (if they have them) off the face of the Dimension, also, as far as i can remember the last time the 5 faces of Assholeness appeared a season or 2 ago, also, this seems like a good alternative to Megazilla vs. (hopefully) Alucard
     
  15. Primon4723

    Primon4723 Autobot

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    :popcorn 
     
  16. Stonecrusher

    Stonecrusher jerk to storytelling

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    Olymprix Moonwalkin' on the Ceiling

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    And so Destiny gets dragged into the Nexus...
     
  18. Optimax Prime

    Optimax Prime The 14th Prime

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    which one of BB's many, MANY, sisters escalated, and Optimus kicked ass in
     
  19. bumblebeej8

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    Didn't think I would ever see a cameo like that
     
  20. Blam320

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    I wonder if we'll see Guardian Cybertronians with Ghost companions.
     

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