Ok, that first thing makes sense. The tablet is a bit of a learning curve, though I was under the impression that you've had one for awhile. However, I do have one more big problem now. That. This line was phrased pretty poorly. It is a valid criticism and fair enough, I don't expect you to shoulder the blame for an unaltered guest writer's work if it needs legitimate constructive criticism, but the way you phrased that makes it seem like more emphasis was put on blaming Kaiju's writing, which is really messed up. You're right, you should have put in more effort to rework the dialogue to make it feel a bit more natural, but that comes across as more of a side-note in that line just because of how it was phrased. You need to be a lot more careful with phrasing, I've noticed this issue becoming a bit more common these days.